FF: The Thin Line, part 11 on 49 (upd 6/2))

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rhearuhi

@rhearuhi

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#201

loved every bit of it ..now just waiting what his reaction will be to see khushi in Goa ..also what would be her reaction..make it intense please

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#202

loved the update glad remorse has set in for him he still has a lot to pay for awesome update thanks for the pm

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heahmad

@heahmad

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Am loving it! Pls do continue

Thx 4 pm!

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---Nisha---

@---Nisha---

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: Rabba-Ve-Delena
Nisha - Arnav's predicament very nicely portrayed. I like how you didn't focus on how he reacted but the aftermath .. the underlying pain which will follow him!

Like a lot!

😳😳

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

They are both hurt so much and they are hurt because of Arnav's actions I wonder what's going to happen in Goa!!!!!

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#206

so A is feeling betrayal...still??? nice to read his POV...but still mad @ him for being an idiot!

Goa will be interesting...lots of fire-works...hope K gives him back in full with some!

-Sona

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---Nisha---

@---Nisha---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: sparikh
so A is feeling betrayal...still??? nice to read his POV...but still mad @ him for being an idiot!

Goa will be interesting...lots of fire-works...hope K gives him back in full with some!

-Sona

what no...arnav's not feeling betrayed. He feels guilty

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---Nisha---

@---Nisha---

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: Soloperson
" Must he hurt all the people he loved " ...wow I loved that sentence,clearly depicts Arnav's state of mind...

thanks for the PM...hope you feel better..🤗

I love that line too...he always does hurt those he loves the most and then later feels sorry (remember his convo with La where he thinks La is Khushi 😳)

I just need a good nights sleep...one where I dont wake up in the middle of the night and one where I can actually sleep. 😡

Edited by ---Nisha--- - 13 years ago