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Posted: 13 years ago
Well done, Nisha! Really glad your Khushi has become independent. ASR is in a for a shock! :Look forward to the rest of the story.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Really an outstanding one..Thanks 4 entertaining us...let me knw wen u com up with next part..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 9

Khushi, Dhruv, Karan, and Hiru entered the Regent Hotel in Goa in the evening.


"Guys here are your room keys. Mr. Singhania has booked our rooms for us since he owns the hotel. We are all staying on the 4th floor. You guys go freshen up and then get ready. Mr. Singhania has thrown a party tonight so that we all can get acquainted. You have two hours. The party's going to be in the party hall," Dhruv informed us.

Khushi looked at her room key; she was staying in room number 402. "Hiru, do you want to get ready together. I am wearing a sari and I would appreciate some help," Khushi asked. "Khushi I am wearing a sari too, so I could use your help too," she said.

Khushi and Hiru got dressed and headed towards to the party. Khushi had worn a beautiful white sari. And Hiru had worn a gorgeous golden sari. Khushi was dreading going to this party because she knew he would be there. But it was unavoidable. So she put on a brave face and entered the party.



"Mr. Raizada welcome to the party," Mr. Singhania said. "Hello Mr. Singhania. Amazing party Mr. Singhania, I am having a great time" Arnav lied through his teeth. He was having a miserable time. Ever since he had found out the truth a week ago, all he had done was think about her. He didn't know what to do. He wanted to apologize to her, he wanted to beg to her, he wanted her back, but he knew he was a bas***d and that she deserved a lot better than Arnav Singh Raizada. She deserved the world.

Drink. Arnav needed a drink very badly. He normally never drank, but maybe alcohol would get her out of his thoughts'.maybe alcohol would kill his guilt at least for tonight.

"Please excuse me, Mr. Singhania, I am going to go get a drink," he said.

"Sure, Mr. Raizada."

Arnav had downed two glasses of whiskey and still he did not feel any better. In fact he missed her more now. Just then he turned and was shocked. His jaw dropped because Khushi was standing in the entrance looking ethereal in a white sari. So pure, like an angel. Then he heard some guy whistle. He said, "hey sexy, you both look so beautiful. Wanna dance with me," he asked his Khushi. The other girl beside Khushi said something too but Arnav could care less. Khushi took that man's hand and they headed towards the dance floor. Anger radiated through Arnav. His hands automatically made a fist. He wanted to beat that pup, whoever he was. How dare he call his Khushi sexy, how dare he touch his Khushi.

Arnav's anger increased every second Khushi was in that bas***d's arms. He had his hands on her waist. The last straw was the male interest Arnav could clearly see in his eyes. And he couldn't take it anymore so he headed towards the dance floor.

He took long strides, his anger pushing him forward. All rational thought replaced with a baser instinct. All he could see was with all this man's hands on his Khushi. Then he stood right behind Khushi and he grabbed her wrist and tore her away from the bas***d.

Khushi was dancing with Karan when suddenly someone grabbed onto her wrist and pulled her back. She looked back to see it was Arnav. He looked livid. She was scared a bit. Then he dragged her away from the dance floor and walked towards the lobby. Khushi wanted to pry his hands off of her but she did not want to create a scene in the party so she let him drag her away. It was just like old times when he used to drag her here and there. Three years and the man still hadnt change. But what she could not understand was that why did he look so angry. Did he hate her so much that he could not even tolerate her presence in a party? Was he going to tell her to get out like he always did? Even if he did she didn't care. She would not let this man affect her anymore. Well she couldn't lie to herself'he did affect her but she would not let him know her weakness. He would use her weakness to his advantage.

So here's part 8...I am so sorry that I stopped like this I wasnt going to but I just need a break. I have been writing so much lately.

Anyways I am expecting a lot more comments/likes on this part since the passion is back baby. 😳 😳

So please Comment/hit the like button.

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EDIT- I was going to insert 2 pictures but for some reason I cant. Can someone tell me how to do it?

If you havent yet read Bundle of Joy then here's the link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2998345/arhi-their-child-part-10-on-91-upd-6-8

Edited by ---Nisha--- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update and that's where you stopped thanks for the pm a jealous arnva is a hot and sexy asr
Edited by dumas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
jealous , possessive as always...😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hum toh asr ke saath jealouswa hogaye!!!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update Nisha! Arnav's just as possesive as before huh! the man would never change! 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome OS
loved it alot
it was simply great
thnks for da pm x
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was awesome except short update !!!

ARHI moments have started. 😍

Update soon. Thanks for the PM


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Posted: 13 years ago
Impressive part Nisha, I like ASR's jealousy!

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