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---Nisha---

@---Nisha---

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: tmowla
nice one...i dont think you need any improvements di...😊

Thanks for the compliment but you dont have to call me di...I am only 20 yaar. Abhi toh hum jawan hai 😳😳

Edited by ---Nisha--- - 13 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

loved the update glad she moved on and better her life in the three years since he threw her out loved the update know is time for asr to beg and you don't need improving loved the update thanks for the pm

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580531

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Nisha! 🤗 Loved this update dear!! I am really loving your version of Khushi. You have made her strong, independent and successful. Also, liking the fact that you are introducing new characters in your story different from the show. Definitely makes it an interesting read. 😃 Now your SS seems far from predictable and that has doubly piqued my interest. Wonder how the story is going to unfold further. 😳

Also, I don't know dear, if you should judge your writing style and skills based on the grades you used to get. 😊 I really like the way you write. It is simplistic and manages to convey what you are intending to say very clearly and precisely.

Edited by Scintillating - 13 years ago

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---Nisha---

@---Nisha---

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Scintillating
Nisha! 🤗 Loved this update dear!! I am really loving your version of Khushi. You have made her strong, independent and successful. Also, liking the fact that you are introducing new characters in your story different from the show. Definitely makes it an interesting read. 😃 Now your SS seems far from predictable and that has doubly piqued my interest. Wonder how the story is going to unfold further. 😳

Also, I don't know dear, if you should judge your writing style and skills based on the grades you used to get. 😊 I really like the way you write. It is simplistic and manages to convey what you are intending to say very clearly and precisely.

thats precisely the point though...perhaps my writing is too simple. I am going to try to work on that. Maybe I need more complex sentences. I dont know. I was just reading through some of the other FF's and their writing is just amazing. I know I shouldn't compare with others. But I cant help it. Maybe I should take notes from those FF's. 😉

P.S. things are gonna get interesting. It will take time though...building the story still.

Edited by ---Nisha--- - 13 years ago

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Sayali

@Sayali_KSG

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

nice update yaar
loved it very much
thanks for pm
waiting for next part

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

nice story...love strong independent K! A is an idiot...didn't try to find anything for 3 long years...how did he live - just blaming K for his shortcomings???

-Sona