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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update sweetie...i must say your writing is improving with every update...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Freethinker

nice update sweetie...i must say your writing is improving with every update...😊

thanks di 4 appreciation
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Freethinker

nice update sweetie...i must say your writing is improving with every update...😊

thanks di
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Posted: 13 years ago

plz update...me waiting...any chance of getting it today

c like a gud baby i did not ask for it the whole last week so we deserve a ud now, wat u think😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: geetap

plz update...me waiting...any chance of getting it today

c like a gud baby i did not ask for it the whole last week so we deserve a ud now, wat u think😛

sorry dear bt update is not possible before 13 june
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Posted: 13 years ago
CC: tejjo
thank u guys for commenting n liking ma story...n big thanks n hug😃 to those who waiting from yesterday for ma update sorry guys ek urgent work tha but now here is ur next part😃


part 53

veer in the office busy in his work when tanya came inside the cabin-''veer mr shah aaj hi tumse milna chahte h'veer looked at her n said-''aaj kyun?????wo to kal aane wale the''

tanya-''han lekin ab wo aa gye h to mil lo na''veer looked at watch it was 5.30pm-''abhi to time h..thik h mein mil leta hun''she smiled n leave with him


neha on the other hand ready for her second date with him...she was very happy but also very surprised that why he suddenly asked her to date...her thoughts wee disturbed by diya's sudden entry in room-''aap kahin jaa rhi ho bhabhi''to listen bhabhi from her mouth she shocked n looked at her strangely..diya smiled n said-''aap meri hone wali bhabhi ho na or waise bhi bhai mujhse kuch nhi chupate mujhe yeh bhi pta h ki aap dono aaj date par jaa rhe ho''neha shyly smiled

diya looked at her chudidaar n said-''bhabhi aap bhai ke saath date par jaa rhe ho kuch different pehno na..''

neha looked at her-''matlab''

diya-''aap ruko mein abhi aati hun''she went to her n took a knee length dress...she came in the room n gave to her...she looked at dress-''diya veer ko yeh accha nhi lagega i mean bhot choti h''

diya-''bhabhi come on aaj kal sab pehnte h tanya ko dekha h kitni choti choti dress pehnti h or aap pehnogi to usse jyada aachi lagogi''she smiled while explaining


neha took the dress n looked at it=''but veer ko accha nhi laga to ''diya hold her hand n went to washroom-''aap uski chinta mat karo or jaakar change karo jaldi''pointing towards the washroom

she went to washroom n change it

after gew minutes she came out n diya saw her...her mouth became wide open to saw her-''omggg bhabhi u look dammn gorgeous...she smiled n looked at watch its 6;30pm

diya-''bhabhi bhai 7pm tak aa jayenge don't worry''she nodded n sat on bed while diya leave the room

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veer finished his meeting n looked at watch-''shittt 7 bajne wale h''as he moved outside jai n agni entered -''arey veer bhot jaldi mein ho kahin ja rhe ho kya''

veer-''han aapko koi kaam h''

agni-''han hum ek project ke liye baat karne aaye the''veer looked at watch n sat on chair-''boliye''n busy with them


tanya felt happy

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neha continuously looked at watch...its 7;30...she dialed his number bt he didn't picked up the phone

after sometime she changed the dress n went downstairs...diya looked at her sad face-''bhai ko bhi aaj hi saaare kaam yaad aye honge''

everyone on dining table n neha helped sapna to serve the food..when diya asked to dhruv-''bhai veer bahi kyun nhi aaye''

dhruv-''veer mamaji ke saath koi urgent meeting mein tha isliye nhi aaya thodi der mein aa jayega''

neha looked at diya sadly...diya n pooja felt sad for her

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its late night when veer entered in house...he was very tired...his body aching very much n he badly wanted a peaceful long sleep...as he moved towards the stairs he turn n looked neha who was sleeping on chairs...veer moved toward her n smiled-''im sorry swthrt''he kissed her forehead when she opened her eyes...first she staring him n then turned her face...she put the bowls n went to kitchen...veer follow his gaze n said-''sorry''she didn't listen

he put the bag on table n went inside the kitchen...he moved closer n hugged her from behind-''im sorry''she removed his hand n turned-''apne room mein jao or fresh ho jao''

veer looked at her angry face but not so angry -''sorry ''she growled at him..he lowered his eyes n went outside the kitchen silently...

after few minutes she came inside his room with his dinner...he came out from washroom..she looked at him then put the tray on table-''tumhara khana garam kar diya h meien kha lena''

veer grasped her hand-''tumne khaya''she turned angrily-''han mein aaj date par gyi thi wahi kha liya...ab jagah hi nhi bachi ''veer -'ok ok im sorry bola to ab to maaf kar do na pls...bhot kaam tha mujhe isliye thoda late ho gya...''she looked at watch-''thoda''

veer-''sorry thoda jyada late ho gya maaf kar do na plsss''she looked at his cute face...veer moved closer n she moved backward-''veer dekho chupchaap khana khaa lo ''he smiled-''jab tak tum mujhe maaf nhi karogi tab tak nhi khaunga''she staring him-''mein tumhe maaf nhi karungi samjhe tum...i just hate u''he move more closer-''but i love u''

neha-''i hate u''while moving backward

veer-''i love u''still moving towards her

she strucked to wall n there was no space to move further...he packed her in his arms...she looked at her-''i hate u'in a slow tune..he came towards her lips-''love u''she looked at his eyes-''i love u''he smiled-''i love u too''he moved more closer n kissed her nose tip...-''im sorry but aaj sach mein bhot kaam tha''she hugged him-''tumhe pta h aaj mein kitni khush thi or''veer pulled her face to saw her -''or meine sab spoil kar diya h na''she made her face-''han''
he kissed her forehead-''next time pakka jayenge''she smiled-''accha thik h ab khana khaa lo bhot thak gye hoge na''veer pulled her more closer-''ab to mujhe bhukh hi nhi lagi''she surprisingly looked at him-''kyun''he about to kiss when she pulled him-''veer chalo khaana kha lo''

he finished his dinner with her...she looked at him n said-''veer bhot thak gye ho na''

veer-''han ''he moved closer n kissed her lips...she tore the kiss n said-''gud night''as she moved he grasp her hand-''neha mera project complete ho gya h''

she looked with surprise-''really''he gazed at her -''hmmm''she hugged him n said-''im very happy veer i love u''

veer-''love u too mein tumhe yehi surprise dena chahta tha but sab gadbad ho gya ''

neha-''its ok veer mein bhot khush hun to uncle aunty ko surprise kab doge''

veer-''kal''n she hugged him

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next morning

sushma-''sab samajh gyi na tum dono''when nivi came-''didi hum samjha denge aap jaiye''n sushma leave

nivi to sapna n pooja-''dekho beta yeh teej ka vrat hmare yaha saalo se ghar ki patniya apne pati ke liye rakti h to tumhe bhi rakhna hoga...agar koi jarurat ho to humse puch lena''both of them nodded


neha heard it n went to veer's room...he getting ready for office when she hugged him from behind-''veer''

he looked at her n said-''hmmm''

neha-''mein tumhare liye teej ka fast rakhna chahti hun rakh lun''

veer turned n said-''neha what nonsense yeh teej kya hota h or tumhe mere liye fast rakhne ki koi jarurat nhi h ''

neha made a cute face-''plsss ...plsss''

veer-''kaha na nhi to nhi''

neha angrily-''mujhe kuch nhi pta jab tak mujhe khaana nhi khiloge mein nhi khayungi ''n leave the room

veer-''ab yeh kya musibat h''


sushma called tanya-''hun chahte h ki aaj veer ke liye tum vrat rakho''

Edited by tejjo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me too res....

arey wah di, aapne tho bina kahe hi res kr diya..
but i realy missed u..

>---('.')----< saara

~~EDITED~~

woie dowie ud h yeh tho..
itne dinno baad neer ka ud...
i missed dis ff so much...

sachi, sachi muchi...
😆
lovely,

haye iss tanya tintokali ki tho main, jhandd baja doon, 😡

haye, ab kya hoga, iski tho baddoyaain bhi faalne lagi h...😭
isliye tho agni ne veer bola liya.

oye hoye, neha ne knee length dress paheni...😳
diya, vry good,...but ek baat bataon, veer neha ko aise hi psnd karta h.
she is still d best.😉

god, veer ne kaise manaya neha ko, so romantic, sachi aise sweet romance k liye kabse taras gyi thi main...

''i hate u''
''i lov u''
''i love u''
i lov u too!'''


and i lov you 2, 3, 4, n much more...
5, 6...evrthing fix...👏
7, 8 veer got late...
9, 10...but neha ne maaf kr diya evn den...😳


11, 12... mere gaal pr itni gandi poem k liye chata na marna, verna mera cheek ho jayega swell...

vaise i noe i m bad poet...
but chotti sis ho, sunana tho padega hi :P

wow, veer ka project re-establish ho gya...
party manaoo...🥳
dhool bajayo...

wow, teej ka vrat,
sushma aunty ka screw dhilla ho gya h..🤣

tanya ko vrat kya hota h, 😆voh pata bhi h🤓

yes, neha tum vrat rakhna...bada maza aayega...
mujhe nhi pata ki kaisa lagega🤔


maine kabhi koi bhi kisi bhi type ka vrat nhi rakha h...

but still all d best👍🏼


ud soon di,😍

lov u🤗
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Plz give us a update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
jaldi ud do.. i m waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

jaldi ud do.. i m waiting...

ok ok will update it dear😃

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