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Posted: 12 years ago

thnx thx so so much for wrting n taking so much pain for me..
but is it only me who recieved the pm of this prt???- is yess why is dat?? baki logo ko kyu nahi diyaa aapne pm???

they wud like to enjoy dis part too...

enjoyment tho hoga hi- after al teen teen babies- plus tanya ka baby- 4 4 babies r here...

wow!...i love kids..

but but but rashi- is she adopted??
she is also as cute as isha- smiling seing rudra...
isha ka cake scn was really sweet too...
vyan- veer ka beta vyan... nice..v- V STANDS FOR VICTORY?? haina?? ; )

lovely endup- sab kuch diya- romance bhi parenting joy bhi...veer ki naughtiness still existing evn being a father...mastt!..

veer b rudra dono bhai ek jaise h- dono ko aapni wifey's k saath hi bath lene mei maza aata h!... naughty boyzz...😳..

dhruv is bestest brother!... (Y)

tanya is nice in dis ff...ab agr vo hamesha k liye jaa rhi h tho i feel muje bhi usse maaf ker dena chahiye... bbye tanya...tintokali- pyaar se bol rhi hu- pehli baar gusse se nahi!.. : )

superb end...

but plzz baaki murat ff n aapke ff readers ko bhi pm bejho naa!>. : (
Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

MY HUMTUM DIARIES!.

First update I read- I knew ki aap muje ek bhot hi sweet aur memorable story dene wale ho..indeed I will remember dis story- iske kuch kuch special flicks n clicks in my mind for eva'specially rudra!.

Aapki story was first, jiske liye meine dhangg ka banner banaya tha- jiske liye I felt-ki haan mei banaogi iska caha sa banner..

Dere r many memorable scns ' first tho voh la jab rudra ladki bana tha!..most funniest scn award jta h use!.

Most emotional scn jata h use- jab Tanya ki engament hone wali thi veer se- n veer ne aapne haath ko ek iron nail se injure kiya, to escape the ring ceremony'n neha intership k liye yaa issi aur professional case k liye bahar gyi thi'

Goa mei mei neha ne veer ko bachane k liye kudh per accident le liye tha- and veer ki jaan atak gyii thi- dat scn goes for most passionate scn.

Lovely dovely scn goes to jab neha ne pehli baar veer ko I lov u bola baangh ne nashe mei!..

Nazar na lage"" award jta h unn sab scns ko jab bhi veer neha ko pareshaan karta h!!...remember dat one her-jab neha holi k din veer ko jaldi uthati h- she says- uth jao veer..he replies- I love u TOO!... hahaha!...kabhi nhi sudherga!.

Naughtiest scn- wen he entered in her room wen she had just a white towel wrapped around her IN GOA. Dat was so nice'

Cutest scn was- wen eva neha behaves childishly- n veer uska mouth bandh kerne k liye smooch kerta tha use!.. :D.. bechari ko poora bolne bhi nhi deta tha!

Sharam k mare lal lal gaal award goes to the scn- jab neha k haathmei mahendi lagi thi n veer knitted her blouse string on back, hugged her, teased her kissed her, and she cud not do anything bcz neha k haatho mei mahendi thi'

Wahwah! Humara hero! Scn award goes to- jab neha ko kisine party mei cheda tha, veer usse pehle party ke bahar leker aaya , neha ko caar mei bithaya, n den party mei vapas gya just to kick the butt of that filthy man jisne neha ko cheda'and den he returned agn'it was super duper gud scn .

And many many more- neha ka veer k liye hkeer banana- aapna haath bhi jalana! :-) veer na naak chadhake neha ko gol gappe khilna on beach..neha ka jurr se confidently tintokali per chillana- ki mere veer kbi kisi aur ko pyaar nhi kerr sakte- neend mei bhi nhi-(wend at bitch said ki she is pregnant wid veer's baby ), pooja n neha ka sisterhood scns'rudran veer n dharma ka botherhood scns..

Isha k cute scns..

Altogether a very satisfactory story..hum bhot khush h iss story se..

I wil always remember dis story for throughout life!...kuch na uch kbi nakbi yaad aata hi RAHEGA!..

Thnx for giving us all muratians dis story-

Di aap ek jaadduu ki jhappi le lo isske liye tho!.. >----( "." )----<

Thnx for giving Tanya too- muje tintokali ki bhoot yaad aayegi- jitni gaaliyaan di h na usse- dil se di h'itni faltu ladki!..but chalo- jate jate I wud just say to her ki- gud bye- hav a veer n neha-less life'go to a veery verrryyy far distant place for eva.

Ek cheez di jo aapko bhi hamesha yaad rahegi- vo h meri , sanyogita prc ki n GEETAP ki poem aapke liye to update sooner n sooner'

Remember-..kyaa fun time tha vo on this hum tum ff.

I evn seriously respect the patience u had while writing this big story for us'in love of our murat.

Thnx for giving us all muratians dis story-

Di aap ek jaadduu ki jhappi le lo isske liye tho!.. >----( "." )----<

Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo


thnx thx so so much for wrting n taking so much pain for me..
but is it only me who recieved the pm of this prt???- is yess why is dat?? baki logo ko kyu nahi diyaa aapne pm???

they wud like to enjoy dis part too...

enjoyment tho hoga hi- after al teen teen babies- plus tanya ka baby- 4 4 babies r here...

wow!...i love kids..

but but but rashi- is she adopted??
she is also as cute as isha- smiling seing rudra...
isha ka cake scn was really sweet too...
vyan- veer ka beta vyan... nice..v- V STANDS FOR VICTORY?? haina?? ; )

lovely endup- sab kuch diya- romance bhi parenting joy bhi...veer ki naughtiness still existing evn being a father...mastt!..

veer b rudra dono bhai ek jaise h- dono ko aapni wifey's k saath hi bath lene mei maza aata h!... naughty boyzz...😳..

dhruv is bestest brother!... (Y)

tanya is nice in dis ff...ab agr vo hamesha k liye jaa rhi h tho i feel muje bhi usse maaf ker dena chahiye... bbye tanya...tintokali- pyaar se bol rhi hu- pehli baar gusse se nahi!.. : )

superb end...

but plzz baaki murat ff n aapke ff readers ko bhi pm bejho naa!>. : (

thanks sweetie...
umm becoz story me pehle hi end kar chuki hun n fir se pm dena thoda odd laga mujhe isliye😊
but thanku so much for ur lovely comment
im very glad after reading ur comment
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

MY HUMTUM DIARIES!.

First update I read- I knew ki aap muje ek bhot hi sweet aur memorable story dene wale ho..indeed I will remember dis story- iske kuch kuch special flicks n clicks in my mind for eva'specially rudra!.

Aapki story was first, jiske liye meine dhangg ka banner banaya tha- jiske liye I felt-ki haan mei banaogi iska caha sa banner..

Dere r many memorable scns ' first tho voh la jab rudra ladki bana tha!..most funniest scn award jta h use!.

Most emotional scn jata h use- jab Tanya ki engament hone wali thi veer se- n veer ne aapne haath ko ek iron nail se injure kiya, to escape the ring ceremony'n neha intership k liye yaa issi aur professional case k liye bahar gyi thi'

Goa mei mei neha ne veer ko bachane k liye kudh per accident le liye tha- and veer ki jaan atak gyii thi- dat scn goes for most passionate scn.

Lovely dovely scn goes to jab neha ne pehli baar veer ko I lov u bola baangh ne nashe mei!..

Nazar na lage"" award jta h unn sab scns ko jab bhi veer neha ko pareshaan karta h!!...remember dat one her-jab neha holi k din veer ko jaldi uthati h- she says- uth jao veer..he replies- I love u TOO!... hahaha!...kabhi nhi sudherga!.

Naughtiest scn- wen he entered in her room wen she had just a white towel wrapped around her IN GOA. Dat was so nice'

Cutest scn was- wen eva neha behaves childishly- n veer uska mouth bandh kerne k liye smooch kerta tha use!.. :D.. bechari ko poora bolne bhi nhi deta tha!

Sharam k mare lal lal gaal award goes to the scn- jab neha k haathmei mahendi lagi thi n veer knitted her blouse string on back, hugged her, teased her kissed her, and she cud not do anything bcz neha k haatho mei mahendi thi'

Wahwah! Humara hero! Scn award goes to- jab neha ko kisine party mei cheda tha, veer usse pehle party ke bahar leker aaya , neha ko caar mei bithaya, n den party mei vapas gya just to kick the butt of that filthy man jisne neha ko cheda'and den he returned agn'it was super duper gud scn .

And many many more- neha ka veer k liye hkeer banana- aapna haath bhi jalana! :-) veer na naak chadhake neha ko gol gappe khilna on beach..neha ka jurr se confidently tintokali per chillana- ki mere veer kbi kisi aur ko pyaar nhi kerr sakte- neend mei bhi nhi-(wend at bitch said ki she is pregnant wid veer's baby ), pooja n neha ka sisterhood scns'rudran veer n dharma ka botherhood scns..

Isha k cute scns..

Altogether a very satisfactory story..hum bhot khush h iss story se..

I wil always remember dis story for throughout life!...kuch na uch kbi nakbi yaad aata hi RAHEGA!..

Thnx for giving us all muratians dis story-

Di aap ek jaadduu ki jhappi le lo isske liye tho!.. >----( "." )----<

Thnx for giving Tanya too- muje tintokali ki bhoot yaad aayegi- jitni gaaliyaan di h na usse- dil se di h'itni faltu ladki!..but chalo- jate jate I wud just say to her ki- gud bye- hav a veer n neha-less life'go to a veery verrryyy far distant place for eva.

Ek cheez di jo aapko bhi hamesha yaad rahegi- vo h meri , sanyogita prc ki n GEETAP ki poem aapke liye to update sooner n sooner'

Remember-..kyaa fun time tha vo on this hum tum ff.

I evn seriously respect the patience u had while writing this big story for us'in love of our murat.

Thnx for giving us all muratians dis story-

Di aap ek jaadduu ki jhappi le lo isske liye tho!.. >----( "." )----<

oh my god im speechless after this comment😊
thank u for ur appreciation
thanks for ur love
thanks for ur lovely comment
thanks for ur support
n thanks for ur jaddu ki jhappi
was always waiting for long comments...n after reading ur comments i felt very very happy...
this story is very special for me also becoz this is my first imagination on rtmc...
mein itni badi story isliye likh payi kyunki readers hi itne acche n supportive the...

thanks to all my readers😳
love u all

n rashu u know na i love u too much three much four much🤗
this comment is my gift😊 i really feel very happy just becoz of u

thanks again darling for loving my story
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Posted: 12 years ago
ur very very welcome-!!..
and yes- ur ashiqui two banner- its super nice... banner ka bhi dekh kerr ye bola meine- haaye!!-- kya sizzling sawaan h!... hot barsaat h!... ☺️

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