HUMTUM (RTMC FF) COMPLETED...

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Thank u guys for liking n commenting on maa ff...this ff complete 150 pages just becoz of ur love...appreciation...suggestion and comment

ur comments always encourage me so thank u so much for all my buddies
ruchi...
ananyashera
anumeha-rajat
ashu1909
bhartikhushi909
dhwanimehta23
freethinker
geetap
glossyglassy
mddmayuri
neha-dubey
nivi-princess
prahelika
pranita
princesspriyart
prithvisanyo
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samantha
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shruja
simran 14
smilee 17
sonalidhone
sparksfly
sweetsudeshna
sweetnandu
sweetshera
sweetsanyo

thanks to all of u guys...
thanks dhanvi di for being my inspiration
thanks shruja di to gave me suggestions
thanks to rashu for being my supporter always
luv u all

previous thread link is here


index

part 46 --page 1
part 47 --page 7
part 48 --page 11
part 49 --page 14
part 50 --page 18
part 51 --page 20
part 52 --page 24
part 53 --page 28
part 54 --page 31
part 55 --page 37
part 56 --page 39
part 57 --page 45
part 58 --page 49
part 59 --page 53
part 60 --page 58
part 61 --page 65
part 62 --page 68
part 63 --page 72
part 64 --page 78
part 65 --page 83
part 66 --page 87
part 67 --page 92
part 68 --page 97
part 69 --page 102
part 70 --page 106
part 71 --page 110
part 72 --page 114
part 73 --page 118
part 74 --page 122
part 75 --page 126
part 76 --page 130
part 77 --page 133
part 78 --page 136
part 79--page 139



now here is the next part

Part 46

now after 14 days

all marriage preparation done in both the house...everyone was pretty happy with the marriage...dhruv and rudra were most excited persons on earth...almost everything was done for tommorows wedding...veer was very busy not in wedding work but in office work due to rudra n dhruv were busy in wedding...

at night

veer busy on laptop when his phone start ringing...he picked up the phone n said-''thank u'n cut the phone...he was very happy n excited...

neha on other hand busy in selecting the dress to wore in tommorow's wedding...when pooja came n said-''neha kya kar rhi ho''

neha-''di samajh nhi aa rha h kya pehnu kal''pooja laughed n said-''bas itni si baat ke liye itni pereshaan ho koi bhi dress pehn lo tum sabhi dress mein bhot sundar lagti ho''

neha frowned n said-''di wo to thik h but mujhe kal or bhi beautiful dikhna h kyunki meri dii ki shaadi h u know meri dii ki shaadi h''

pooja-''ok..ok ek kaam kar tu red color pehan le accha lagega''

neha looked at red color dress n said -''nhi dii...bhot kharab lagega...mujhe acca nhi lag rha h mein koi or dress dekhti hun'

pooja hugged her n said-''thank u neha...aaj tumhaari or veer ki wajah se meri shaadi ho rhi h ''

neha-''dii aap mujhe thank u bologi ab...or veer ko bhi bolne ki koi jarurat nhi h usne yeh sab apni bhabhi ke liye or mene apni dii ke liye so no thanks''

she smiled n kissed her cheek n said-''ok ab tu jaldi se dress select kar le or so ja kal jaldi uthna h na''n she leave

neha looked at her dresses with confused faces...then she dialed veer's number...veer slept on couch with file in his hand when his phone rang again...he picked up with half opened eyes -''hello''

neha-''veer mujhe samajh nhi aa rha h ki mein kya pehnu kal...accha tum btao na mein kya pehnu????''

he closed his eyes n said in sleepy tone-''kuch bhi pehn lo na neha...tum har dress mein bhot acchi lagti ho''

she wrinkled her forehead n said-''aise kaise kuch bhi pehn lun meri dii ki shaadi h''

veer still sleepy-''wahi to tumhari dii ki shaadi h tumhaari nhi''she frwned n said-''rehne do mein apne aap hi select kar lungi bye''then she cut the phone angrily-''veer bhi na koi help nhi kar sakta meri kya karun mein''

he put the phone on table n opened his eyes lazily n talk to himself while moving towards bed-''yeh ladki h ya kya h apne aap phone karke apne aap hi kaat deti h kissiko bolne ka mauka bhi to dena chahiye na''n stretched himself on bed to sleep when again his phone rang...he made his face to cry...he stood up from bed n picked up his phone before he could say something she started her chatterbox -''veer blue color kaisa lagega...ya orange...or mere pass pink color bhi h bolo kya pehnu jaldi bolo mere pass time nhi h...or han mere pass green color bhi h but green accha lagega kya nhi na...chalo chodo green nhi pehnugi...but pink tumhe accha nhi lagta to wo bhi nhi pehn sakti...blue mujhe pasand nhi h or orange dii ko pasand nhi h to kya pehnu''

veer-''neha tumne phone kyun kiya h mujhe abhi bhi samajh nhi aya''she said angrily-''oho meri help karne ke liye phone kiya bolo na mein kya pehnu''

veer smiled n said-''neha mjhe bhot neend aa rhi mein so jaun kal decide kar lenge pls''

she made her face n said-''ok gud nite bye''n cut the phone...he smiled to saw her pic-''damn yr i just love her''


next day

dhruv n rudra got ready with their beautiful sherwaani ...everyone was very happy n busy in their different different works...when veer busy on phone...nivi saw him-''hey bhagwaan aaj bhi phone par laga h yeh''
she snatched his phone-''aaj koi phone nhi samjhe jao or dhruv or rudra ke shehra lekar aao''

he looked at his phone n said-''ok maa par mera phone''she pulled her hand away-''nhi jao veer''he moved towards their room

nivi put the phone on table when it rang,,,she picked up the phone before she could say something..neha again started without listening her-''veer red kaisa lagega mujhpe'

nivi-''accha lagega veer ko bhot pasand h red color''she shocked to heard female voice n gulped the breath...she silently hear her-''tumpar bhot accha lagega''

neha in very slow tone-''ji aap..''nivi smiled n said-''mein veer ki maa hun''

her phone fell on bed with a jolt she bite her toungue n cut it...nivi smiled

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soon malhotras reached at wedding place n they have grand welcomed by sharmas...sapna's n pooja wedding was going to happened in same place...dhruv n rudra sat on thier respective places in mandap then all rituals started one by one...veer's eyes searched someone else...when tanya came ...she wore a pink color dress with blue beads made its beautiful...she looked at veer n said-''hi veer''

he looked at her -''hi tannu tum bhot acchi lag rhi ho''she brightened up to hear his words about her...but in very next moment he turned his face to search neha...she didn't like this n made a angry facce...

he moved when he strucked with aditya-''sorry''aditya-''its ok galti meri hi h''he have some boxes of sweets ...veer took it some of them..n moved towards the store room n they shared some talks between them

after few minutes veer returned from the room n saw her fighting with herself n her dress...she looked damn beautifull taday...as a fairy came on earth directly from the heaven...her red dress...her opened long black hairs...her rosy lips ...made him mad to gazing her...he gazing her outside the room...then he stepped towards the room n closed the doors silently...she caress her dress n combing her hairs in front of mirror...when he came more closer n slid his palm on her bared waist...she was shocked-''veer''
veer-''hmmm

he kissed her hairs from behind...then kissed her shoulder n neck...she felt nervous with his kiss
he moved his fingers on her waist...her body became colder..he looked at her through mirror-''beautiful''she blushed..he packed her in his arms...he moved his finger towards her bodice string when she said quickly-''not again veer bhot mushkil se bandha h mene''he smiled n stretched it to loosened the knot...and kissed her back...she pulled him back n moved towards the doors when he grasped her dupatta n folded it in his hand

she looked at him-''veer mera dupatta do''he smiled-''pass akar le lo''
neha-''nhi tum mujhe nera duptta do''like a child...

veer-'thik h tumhaari marzi''finally she moved a stepped ahead n extend her palm-''do''

veer teasing her-''thoda or pass''she moved a steeped ahead again-''ab do''veer-''thoda or pass''
soon the gap between them filled her-''do''he moved more closer n kissed her chin-''i love u''

she turned her face n said-''i hate u tum bhot shetaan ho gye ho veer''complaining like a child

he grasped her in his arms-''kiya kisne h ?? ''then he kissed her throat n shoulder ...she loosened his grip n turned to moved but he tugged her tightly in his arms...he kissed her back passionately...his kisses n touch made her more nervous...a strange sensation running in her body...her body became colder...veer kissed her eyes n forehead

soon he knoted her string n put her dupatta on her shoulder...she embrced him.

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sweetsanyo thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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reso jii... (shivji)

hum h chalak bacha...

di, tpic main no. 2 bhi mention karo.
cofusion ho raha h

~~EDITED~~
i noe sabse pehle rs kiya tha
n sabse last main editd kr rhi hoon...

sry di,
mujhe yaad tha ki mujhe karna h unres, but bar bar kisi ka phn yah phirr koi kaam aa raha tha.

ud ws as usual sooperbo jii
maaze aa gye

i love neha ki voh kudh hi phn karti h n then kudh hi baat bhi karti h, veer se mahnat bhi nhi karwati h
phn kaat deti h.

sachi kaha red hi accha lagega...
mc pr sab jachta h
she is so perfect for evrythng thing , especially veer...

thn baari h,
veer ki shaitaani ki-

tho ek baar bolni h issi pr.-

''bade shaitaan ho tum, but neha ki jaan ho tum!''

last scene, uff, kya kr diyaa aapne di,

aap sab di's milkr is bachi ko bigad rahe ho bol rhi hoon main riya di aapse...

thnx di for sauc a wondo ud
ud soon
lov u
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
geetap thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congratulations for the new thread 👏
Riyaa16 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: geetap


update nahi aaya😭😭

sorry
sorry
sorry dear
will try to update soon
Edited by tejjo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its ok dear...plz update we are waiting

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Posted: 13 years ago
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1st of all congrats on ur 2nd thread!
the update was awesome...
I have always loved Neer's phone convos...love the way how Neha starts talking the moment Veer picks up the phone...and then tells him tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahe..ANd Veer is like tum bolne kahan deti ho...too good!👏
And this time Nivi pickd his phone...Neha's reaction was too funny😆
And of course the romance was sooo cute and mushy...😳
thx for PM
Luv u...😃
P.S I suggest u post the link to this thread on ur 1st thread also...in case ppl miss ur Pm...then also they will be able to find the new thread!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks dear for updating...awesome update, continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread!!!!!
Very Romantic Update!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Cute update, neha is right dat veer is becoming naughty:* :*
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats dear for your New thread

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