ArHi FF: Colors of the Wind; Th-1 Prologue - Ch-6B

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nimra21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Loved it! Specially how Khushi's maturity in handling everything.

Please continue!

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enigma17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Eloquently and beautifully written Love the portrayal of an intelligent Khushi turning the tables on ASR.
Squirming at his own hidden secrets whilst questioning another's

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bluetaj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

you know after I read..the 1st thought that came to my mind and words out of my mouth were..beautiful. And I couldn't help seeing a lot of readers seem to share and express the same. Its beautifully written..justifying the depth of the subject in discussion.

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

meera a premise full of potential...love to see how you would take this...plz keep me posted if you choose to continue...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

I just luv ur literature the way u have penned down every thing so perfectly is just awwwesome...

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manasisharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

hey, great piece.. loved it.. i want khushi to use her brain in serial as well. i dont want her to cry , i want to see strong khushi coming out and proving her innocence. plz continue and PM me...