ArHi FF: Colors of the Wind; Th-1 Prologue - Ch-6B - Page 5

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Tara

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow...the description of the scene is beautifully written, especially Khushi's thoughts...and I love the way Khushi told him the truth and the way he realized it. The ending as well, with the definition of knowledge so creatively weaved into the story..this was amazingg, would love to read more, do send me a pm if u do! 😊

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starlight06

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Posted: 13 years ago

Very nice wonderfully written ⭐️

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appy

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Posted: 13 years ago

No PM?!

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But you have to continue! Because this is what we've all been waiting for, what we all want!

Make it an FF!! Pleeease! :D

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meera30

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks everyone for all your comments!

I am very seriously contemplating turning this to an FF and hopefully i should be able to do some writing over the weekend :)

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SankaDevi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

I love how you've added all the dialogues from the flashbacks! It makes the story come alive even more! Looking forward to the SS!

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-bansi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Beautifully penned down..

The hurt, the shock, the calmness to handle the situation...awesome..

Beautiful..!!

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Bibliobibulus

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Posted: 13 years ago

Beautifully written.. Hope you decide to continue this.. Please PM me if you do.. Thanks.. :)

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lara3110

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Posted: 13 years ago

Superb start, ⭐️ Please continue and as requested by one of your fans, please turn it into an FF or SS

Either way, excellent job.

Please PM me, too.

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mariam42

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Posted: 13 years ago

beautifully written, send me a pm wen u (hopefully) turn it into an FF, have added u to my buddy list, thanks 😍

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meera30

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Posted: 13 years ago

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