AFTERMATH - RTMC SS - Part VI pg 15 *Completed* - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Hayeee Its So Cutee:-):-) Ananya ne to Veer ki laga di;-) Veer to gaya;-) Poor boy:-):-) hehehe I love the update:-):-) plz cont soon:-):-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Thanks dear for sharing ,
first I will read it then comment okey
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
lovly lovly lovly ji
tussi to cha gye ji

veer ki to vaat lag gayi 🤣
popat ho gya 👎🏼
Edited by princesspriyart - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Hey hiii dear
read both ur update
It's AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME yar !!!
loved thoroughly
each n every dialogues n there description It's too good
loved Veer n Anu
they are too cute
I can imagine Rajat n Mugdha
sachme I like ur story
par ye kya khatm ho gayi
jaldi se update karo
can't wait to read next
n their cute fights
really loved it
update soon
lov u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
amazing dear...👏
veer you really need to learn to keep things at place n clean...
just 7 days n you have messed up your whole house...
god poor anu...n really took pity on her...how she is going to tolerate him...????...😆
n loved their romantic convo n veer's effort to convence her not to punish him...😆
but veer anu is really smart...these filmy tricks are not going to work...😉
think of something else...
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
lovely...

veer tried to wiggle his way out...but to no avail...😆

n anu will not melt with his sugary words...😛...he has to pay...😉

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Just finished reading both parts,its very interesting.
The way you portrayed veer's state of mind,when he was hallucinating
his wife and the she really came is wonderful...lol he created all mess in her
absence..like a typical husband...!
and ananya is just like a typical wife...would love to read their story.
continue soon dear and do PM me😊
Edited by --Ruchi-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: glossyglassy

wow! kya timing hai!
wil wait for ur comment dear!😃

dil ka connection kahate isse

mujhe instinct aate h ki meri buddy glossy ud dene wali h😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey 3D! 😆
Pic dikhayi nahi de raha...comment likh de 😃

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