AFTERMATH - RTMC SS - Part VI pg 15 *Completed*

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Freethinker
very nice...superb...cont soon...

Thanks di! Wil upd8 soon 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: tejjo
Hey glossy welcome back dear Hi dear!

sorry 4 late comment
its awesome n fab dear 😳
loved it thoroughly
liked his half awake situation n ur description is really awazing Thank u...i had fun writing it

im fan of ur writing dear aww! I'm honored...coz i really like ur writing!😃
wow he missed his wife so much..so sweet
lovely update

thanks 4 strting new ss

cont soon...wil do
thanks 4 pm
thx for comment...luv u😃
luv u

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glossyglassy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

PART II

"VEEER!!!" she screamed with all her might.

This time Veer was sure he heard someone scream and it was not the crowd. He could actually feel the house tremble with his name. HIS NAME?!?! WHAT ON EARTH?!?! He ran towards the source and found himself going to the bedroom.

He saw Ananya sitting on the bed and screaming what sounded like his name. He was stunned. What was she doing here? Was she real? Was he hallucinating? Could she time-travel? Was it an earthquake? But the ear-splitting noise seemed to be very much real and he would have to stop it soon if he didn't want to end up deaf.

He rushed to 'Ananya/or what seemed like Ananya' and put a hand on her mouth, "Is it really you? Why are you shouting? You scared the heck out of me!" She stopped screaming when she felt his hand on her mouth. She bit on it hard. "Aaahhh", he yelped. "Well that was proof enough" he muttered under his breath.

She ignored it and yelled, "Veer, I went away for a week and u have turned the house into a zoo...garbage bin...huh? What do I call it?" "But I tried my best..." She cut him off, "I can see how well u tried. Look at this mess." She went to the bed, "this...your laptop, briefcase, files...for god's sake this is a BED and this..." pointing at the floor, "Can't u choose a t-shirt without creating a mess?" Veer had just come to accept the fact that the apparition was actually his wife and now this. He gulped looking around him, knowing that he was in trouble, deep deep trouble. "Anu, I'm sorr..." "I'm not finished yet. What about the hundred things u have taken out to gorge upon? And your shoes, I almost tripped over them. And don't you know how to use the washing machine? Huh? And did u by any chance enter my kitchen?" He violently shook his head, relieved that he had done one thing right. "Thank god! So, how did you eat?" She interrogated folding her arms. "What you had cooked lasted for a few days and then, I had breakfast and lunch in the office. Dinner was either take-away or sometimes neighbors sent in." he said like a child telling his mother about his day at school. "Hmm..." she had calmed a little but Veer badly needed a lesson. "Okay since you have created this mess, you will clean it up without any help from anybody." She said strictly. Veer's head shot up realizing that she had punished him to do something equaling death. Veer and cleaning up had never been hand-in-hand. "Please Anu, don't be so harsh." he said taking her hands in his. "Veer" she said sweetly freeing her hands and patted his cheek and then said strictly "Get to work, dear. Now! " Veer realized that he landed himself in a soup and had to swim out of it faster than Michael Phelps.

He took her face in his hands and traced a finger along her cheek. "Anu darling, I've been waiting for you for 7 long days. Don't make me suffer now." he said giving her amorous looks. "Veer" she said dreamily holding his hands and kissed them. Veer brought her closer thinking that his ploy was working. "Veer, don't try to trick me with your romanticism" she replied cheekily. "Anu, don't call my love deceitful." he said trying to convince her. Anu rolled her eyes and said, "Wow that sounds so filmy. Don't tell me you watched romantic movies." "No ways," Veer replied fervently, "I hate romantic movies. I was just watching this movie where a conman uses these words and succeeds in wheedling money out of the woman." He said disclosing the secret to his emphatic dialogue. "So you're trying to con me with your filmy dialogues, huh? Sorry, won't work here." Anu said dashing his hopes.

"Anu it's not that. It's just that I missed you so much sweetheart." he said earnestly and took her in his arms. Anu was a bit surprised at the sudden digression in the conversation but knew that he meant it and didn't protest as she too longed for his touch. "I missed you too, dear." She hugged him back. "I thought you were coming tomorrow" He murmured against her hair. "Hmmm...we came early...so I thought I would surprise you." He pulled back and kissed her forehead saying softly, "I loved the surprise." Ananya smiled as he rested his forehead on hers and gazed at her.

After some time, they parted. Veer smilingly looked at her and enquired, "So..?"Anu replied, "This does not mean you have been let off" Veer's bright face fell. "I'm going to freshen up and want the bed cleared up by then...and then the rest." She ordered and went to the washroom "What if I don't do it?" Veer braved the question. "Oh! Then nothing, just that you'll bear the brunt." she replied calmly and shut the door.

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So here's the 2nd part...tell me what you thought of it!😃

Sorry for any mistakes

Edited by glossyglassy - 13 years ago

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rashmi gautam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

reso jii

i have read

buh will comment in detail in evening, it ws aweosme

don't like ma res plzz.

~~EDITED~~

yeh lo jii, hum bhi aakhir kar edit kr hi dete h😳

bichari anu ke tute udd gaye, aapne room ki halat dekhar...

sacchi main kya shock hoga na!!😲

anu strong gal h, isliye usse sadma nhi hoa, verna she was sure to collapse by god.

veer, god kitna mean aadmi h,

biwi ke sath romance bhi purpose k saath kata h,

lekin hapy to noe ki purpose se jyada, sache dil se romance karta, biwi ki sacchi main bhot yaad aayi thi veer ko,😳

he is too cute here.

bahot pyaar karta h banda anu se...😳☺️

anu k tho bagh khul gaye

lekin yeh kya

romance ke baad anu vahi khukhaar biwi bann gyi...😉

the way veer told her abt his meals, like a innocent child ws really so sweet n cute...😳...

shukar h banda kitchen main nhi gya.

verna tho blast ho jana tha building main,😎

veer h pata h, tumne aapni building ko ek bhot badi tragedy se bachaya h

kitchen main na jakr😳

verna tumhara kya bharosa ki tum gas stove pr kab mahar baan ho jatae...

aaj mera poora comment hindi main h, kya karu, bass yun hi likh diya...

padh lena.

veer, plzz listen to ananya...

do it as she says

verna bachu, boori tarah pachtaoge...

vaise agar pachtaoge nhi tho humme story kasise milegi...😉...

last time tho anu k khane se bachh gye the tum...

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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glossyglassy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo
reso jii

i have read

buh will comment in detail in evening, it ws aweosme

don't like ma res plzz.

wow! kya timing hai!

wil wait for ur comment dear!😃

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riya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Lovely update dear
loved it thoroughly

i really like their fight session
enjoyable update as i wanted
thanks 4 such a awesome story

pls cont soon
thanks 4 pm
luv u

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Shreya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

hey !!

conzos on d ss !!🥳

likd d use of prologue...gives it a nice feel...👍🏼

as usual u've written beautifully !!! 👏

words...n descrption gr8 !!

bechara Veer...totall devdas mood mein hai...😔

he thought he was imagng Ananya !!! 🤣

itna dreams mein lost hoge to.ye to hona hi tha...😆

poor Ananya ...usse to hesrt attck aane wala hoga...😲...

njoyd it...

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Shreya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

here's ma unres -

to scream ne Veer ko reality mein tle aaya...sapne se jagane ke liye scream...😉..

bechare Anu...must b livng one of her worst nightnares...

Veer gr8 job ...u cr8d SUCH a mess in just 7 days !! 👏

Anu bohut strict hai Veer ke saath...well aisa nahin kiya to her house will bcum a dumpyard...🤢

likd d romantic Veer...😳...but ANu noes evry ploy of his...😉...such resonance dey hav...

luvd it !! ⭐️ n u...

gr8 wrtng !! 👏

Edited by sparksfly - 13 years ago

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glossyglassy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: tejjo
Lovely update dear
loved it thoroughly

i really like their fight session
enjoyable update as i wanted
thanks 4 such a awesome story

pls cont soon
thanks 4 pm
luv u

Thanks dear!

i'll try to cont 2mrw or day after

thx for comment...luv u😃

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glossyglassy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: sparksfly
hey !! hi!
conzos on d ss !!🥳thanku u...😃

likd d use of prologue...gives it a nice feel...👍🏼 evn i thought it seemed cool😆

as usual u've written beautifully !!! 👏

words...n descrption gr8 !! thx a lot

bechara Veer...totall devdas mood mein hai...😔

he thought he was imagng Ananya !!! 🤣

itna dreams mein lost hoge to.ye to hona hi tha...😆...par abhi ananya usse aisa shock degi...sare dreams tut jaenge😆

poor Ananya ...usse to hesrt attck aane wala hoga...😲...read the 2nd part..u'l knw😊

njoyd it...thx..luv u...😊