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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#961

Even you seem to love the old classics! They have their own charm don't they?
Coming to the update, I just loved it!
Firstly it was long😉 and had a little bit of everything.
Loved the Payal-Khushi convo and also the way you explained Khushi's denial nature."denying the hate,she had fallen in love"-just perfect!!
Now I am really curious... what is that big offense that Nisha committed which yields such response from everyone at Sanjeevani. I would also love to know how exactly she got acquainted with the Raizadas? From the bits and pieces I seem to gather her grandma and naniji are friends of sorts, did I get that right?
And finally dear Arnav,poor guy tormented with Khushi's memories and connecting everything to her,feel really sad for him😔
Loved the flashback too👍🏼
Great update Rae😊

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#962

awesome update khushi denied the stars can't believe that arnav and his family really broke her spirit the two nani's are friend so they intend to turn this in to a family bond everything reminds arnav of khushi yet he is holding back himself from going after her do they really think this marriage will solve anything and can't wait to find out what nisha did that everyone at sajeevan hates her loved the update well written very intense well written thanks for the pm

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#963

Rae...my heart bleeds for his pai...what can I say...I am partial to Arnav!! I know Nisha and Khushi are also suffering...and i empathize with their pain as well...but for Arnav...what do i say🥺

What does nani have on him...what emotional blackmail...that he has succumbed to this samjhota for a marriage when its so obvious that he is not over Khushi nor will he ever be? Why is he complying??

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sRistee

@crazy44

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#964

"Denying that her parents had left her, she had found them in the stars

Denying that life had miseries scattered around, she had found a sense of joy in every little moment.Denying the loss of innocence, she had stretched her childhood,Denying the hate, she had fall in love,And therein the nature of her denials had changed.Now she didn't deny hate, she just denied her anger over it.Now she didn't deny the loss of innocence, she just denied that she was young.Now she didn't deny misery, she just denied she was miserable."

this was hearbreaking !! i had tears in my eyes😭 !! and you wrote it brilliantely rae!! i could actually feel the pain khusi was going through !! why is love so difficult *sigh *

i really like payal in here!! she is strong and i how i wish CVs could show this side of payal in the show !

and you added the lines of the proluoge !! wah wah😉

coming to nisha - armann it was hertbreaking to see two old friends talk about forgiveness ! its difficult when you loose your oldest friends and hurts the most too !! that was brethtaking !!

and khusi in arnavs memory , that was heartbreaking and really really painful !! i dont know what to sayabout this couple , they just manage to evolvve diffrent kinds of emotion in my heart!!my heart was bleeding with pain 😭and the nishi arnav part was brillaint!! they really are something !!

all in all a perfect chapter full of pain and emotions !!well written rae!! loved it !!

thanks for the pm😊

*edited yet again *
i forgot to mention
Kya hua tera vaada
Woh kasam woh iraada?
Bhoolenge hum jiss din tumhe
Woh din zindagi ka aakhiri din hoga...
I LOVE THS SONG! theres not even a single day where i doNt listen to ths song! its very sPecial song!

Edited by crazy44 - 13 years ago

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#965

The convo between Payal & Khushi is really nice & I like Payal who really cares 4 her sis & even has the guts the other day 2 throw the mighty ASR out of her house.

All the flashbacks between ARhi r very painful & much needed at least 4 now as there wont b any Arhi moments as u said.

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anumber1

@anumber1

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#966

My comp is being dumb. Check your inbox!😊

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#967

omg beautiful...loved it dear n thnx 4da pm...

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#968

What an update.. A total melting pot of emotions.

Khushi's predicament just breaks my heart.. She really has lost everything if she's lost her stars.. I'm glad that Payal is so angry on her behalf..

I'm more and more intrigued as to what Nisha has done to make everyone at the hospital hate her so much.. Looking forward to seeing that part of the story unfold..

Arnav's pain is painful to witness... But there are so many things that could remind him of Khushi.. Is he going to explode every time? Poor Nisha..

Looking forward to the next part.. :)

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#969

Lovely update.. Seeing Nisha in a similar saree got back memories of Khushi..

Waiting for the next update.. 😃

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#970

It wasn't a request and she didn't need it to be either. These moments happened by chance, she had realized in her heart and her treachourous, thirsty heart craved for it, her body screamed for it at different levels no matter how much she would deny it later and so she followed his lead, placing her palms over his strong shoulders, trying not to hiss out loud feeling his fingers graze against her bare midriff.

That was a wonderful update. And the lines above strike a chord with the Khushi we have being seeing in the last few episodes. And Arnav's reaction when he saw Nisha in the very same saree Khushi had worn, was so him, and painful. Brilliant job with describing each of their emotions, A, K, N and Anjali too. I really want to know her side of the story. I mean why does she have this helpless edge to her character here? But anyways, I was waiting for you to update this one, so thanks, you've done a great job 👏