~ You're not the only one ~ ArHi FF Ch12NewThread - Page 98

Nice update Rae..

i dont know what to say

... If you're comments are filled with dots everywhere , then just just dont blame me !! Cause I dont know what the hell am I supposed to write ?? Why do you wanna comment when your chapter is like eternal beauty of every damn emotion in the world ??
RES for now !!
Will comment max in 5 hrs

*EDITED*
That was an amazing update Rae !! Ok I guess thats a usual line, but dont blame me , cause Im telling you Ive run out of words for every update you give... Each one as great as it could get !!

I loved the beginning !! A better Payal, someone who takes her stance, someone wh stands up for what she feels us right or wrong ,and someone who stands up for her Khushi !! Bravi Payal way to go !! And Khushi, seriously this one seems so distant, though she's present hear physically she's just missing her very important organ, or maybe herslef, her hearts somewhere deep lost in the whole process !! And that flashback !! That was a heart-breaking one at this point , cause she wants to but can never actually hate him and she's frustrated because of it... And the part where you bring out the contrast b/w the new and the old Khushi , and when you just said she didnt believe in stars, It just brought out the fact how much she's suffered in this whole process !!

Armaan-Nisha convo !! That was a tense one Rae !! Having your best buddy argue with you makes you feel damn bad !! And sometime losing a buddy is more heart-breaking then losing out your love !! And Im waiting for a bit of an insight over here !!And Nisha as much as she guessed it right about Nani, she cant disrespect her !! And somehow her grandmom is more responsible for it !

The Arnav-Nisha convo !! That was a mind blasting one !! The flashback was B-R-E-A-T-H-T-A-K-I-N-G I was just holding my breath throughout !! I could imagine every move, that angry seething look, those totally dazed doe eyes and most of all what that dance could have been !! I loved that part !!

And when he shouts at her !! I was expecting this, but one good thing at the end of the ASR blast, we know he wouldnt let any one harm Khushi's memory and the apology from Anjali just got Nisha a bit more curious about Khushi !! Im just keeping my fingers crossed and hoping that sje doesnt ask Nani about Khushi !! Oh mighty anyone but Nani !!

loved the update Rae !!🤗

PS: Im extremely sorry for the incomplete comment beech me, but my cousin actually shut my lappy and dragged me out !! So a big SORRY !!

Tht was very emotional..Khushi is no longer her usual self 😭 .

This was really very amazingly written...their pain and emotions really came through...eagerly waiting for the next one..thanks for the PM

dat was amazing..
loved it..
carry on.

heya rae..

awesome update dear..

my heart goes out to khushi...i really feel for her...

payal..she feels for her sister..

armaan and nisha? what happened between them?

arnav nisha confrontation was ooo...he just proves he cant give her khushi's place..

arnav khushi flashback was so painful..brilliantly written..

will look forward for the next part..

continue soon..

many thanks for the pm..:)