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@flutterby

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Posted: 13 years ago

#981

hey rae... sorry for the super late response... i have read ur ff till part 7... i dont want to rush into it... i want to read it slowly bit by bit enjoying, as u weave ur magic.. ⭐️ but rest assured i will read the rest and comment a little later... the best parts till now according to me were 6,7😍... i loved how u described khushi and arnav's agony, pain... 😭 it is so heart breaking... how both are lost in each other's thoughts without being with each other... they really r entwined in two bodies with one soul... 😍 i really am not that much into the other couple... as much as i feel for arnav, khushi... i loved how u described arnav's myriad emotions... laughter, sobbing lamenting... and khushi with the knife... that was a masterclass... 👏 thanks for the pm and ur patience with me... despite me not responding.. 🤗

ps- u r a big chor... 😉 especially in the 3rd chp... where u described nk announcing khushi's name in italics...and then letting the cat out of the bag... nisha as mrs raizada... well,enjoy ur chocolate cereal... 😛

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#982

And still not really liking Nisha!

I know I know, I say this in every comment of mine but I just cant help it. There's just something about her that makes me want to make her disappear.

Oh well, gotta live with it!

Anyways awesome update Rae!

Continue soon :)

-Pria-

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@Anisha_91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#983

Rae!! Just read up to chapter 6 will continue in morning.

OMG!!! Loving this FF! seriously its just brilliant loving the concept. Amazing job Rae...your writing style is just fab. Gonna continue in morning...awesome job so far x

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#984

Thanks for the PM, the showdown between Nisha and Arnav was intense. I also like how Nisha didnt bak down. Im intrigued more and more by Nani's behaviour and her reasoning and also as to why someone like Arnav is actually following her decision given that he normally gives 2 hoots to things like these.

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#985

Oh wow, AT, this is such a powerful, intense story, all verystrong personalities and in so much pain and anguish, so unlike 'ab main kya karoon'!
The pace is perfect and I will keep my hopes for a future. whenever that is to be, when A and K are reunited. Am waiting to see what went wrong in N and S's relationship.👍🏼

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@Anisha_91

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#986

Rae just read chapter 7 and 8...OMG Khushi and the knife part was intense! Rae it was written beautifully gave me shivers. You are an amazing writer do you know how amazing u are?? like seriously!! . I so wanna read more on why He didn't defend her stop her! Chapter 8 enjoyed it a lot more on nisha and sharman. Will continue reading soon x

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#987

oH khushi!! ahh I hate that she is in so much pain!! and Arnav I dont even know what to say about him...smh

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aditi07

@aditi07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#988

Just read the last few...sorry for late comment...exams are coming so little irregular with comments!
wow...beautiful updates...very intense & touching multitudes of emotions...
loved the chapter on khushi...brilliantly written...wonderful thought processing...& the connection wid colour Red...bang on!! even liking payal's characterization over here...very strong & has courage to speak up...liked it that she left RM...now she seem like khushi's sister in every sense! what intrigues me is what does akash knows wch payal doesn't...something about why didn't arnav say anything or tried to stop khushi when he knew that she was innocent!
must say Nisha is a keen observant...great at understanding the unsaid...& noticing the small bits! wonder what wrong has gone between her & all her colleagues...wen sharman himself that he committed a mistake for wch even he wouldnt hv forgiven himself..then y does it seem that her colleagues accuse her of something...guess we'll have to wait a bit to find it out.
Now that last update...wow loved arnav's outburst⭐️...the way he remembered khushi's tiniest details...& couldnt see nisha even in khushi's look-alike clothes...let alone giving her the place that khushi still holds in his life...glad that anjali understood the reason & accidently let it out...loved the scene!
wow...loving the story...beautiful writing...amazing concept 👏👏
continue soon dear😊

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3llie

@3llie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#989

What can I say that no one else has. I read almost all the part in
One go and I must say each part kept pulling
Me in deeper!! Excellent!!!

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#990

Res

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I just read all of this! And I must say, kudos to you!

I am speechless, taken aback by the pain, the anger,many the helplessness that each of the individuals feel. Arnv, khushi, Nisha, Sharmsn, Payal, Akaash, and even Anjali.

Your depictions are so powerful!

Of course I am curious about what happened between Nisha and Sharmsn, but I know of will reveal it it time..

I don't like naniji here... In fact I respect mami for not fawning over Nisha. I don't have anything against Nisha, just that I thought mami may fawn over her because she is a doctor, and a part foreigner!

Kudos! 👏

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