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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: tata_tata
i love HP for missing Khushi :):) every nook and corner of the house will tell Nisha much about Khushi.. the rightful occupant who has clearly been thrown out of the house unjustly!!

Nisha..i love how she didnt go back when Arnav came forward... i loved it.. and i loved how she calmed down HP, the way she did.. within a span of 5 min you showed how similar Nisha is to Khushi, yet sooo different.. love these nuances which you build in..

but Naniji is troubling me... i cannot associate sinister behaviour with Nani.. i am sure she has her reasons for hating Khushi so.. she is willing to let go of her beliefs because look at what she got from a girl who fit all her belief systems to the T.. i just cannot associate this disappointment in Nani with Khushi.. peel the onions, AT.. tell us more about what happened..

Thank You so much! :)

And more on Khushi dynamics with the Raizadas as the story moves forward.

I like all your questions - just hold on to them. :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

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*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my work.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#943

*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my work.

Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago

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meera30

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Posted: 13 years ago

#944

Res for reply :D

appy_12 is going to pull her hair out! :D I like that!

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She denied the stars - Now that made my heart go still with pain. That is how much she has lost of herself. Stars are so Khushi. My heart goes out to her

I like this Payal. Strong willed and so sisterly. I have seen very little of this sister in the Payal we see on the show!

I like how you brought back the dialogues from the Prologue. Even then I knew this particular one had to Arnav and Khushi.

Nisha-Armaan - In some ways losing a friend is just so so much worse than losing a lover right? Poor kids. The entire conversation about forgiveness being dependent on the magnitude of the sin was bang on. Just what you would expect two people in this situation to say.

The sari and the Arnav-Nisha confrontation - Excellent. Those two really are going to kill each other before they can help each other deal with the pain. I liked how she stood her ground and how later she understood that there was something about what Anjali said.

The Arnav-Khushi memory - Just as painful. But much needed for the story. I could imagine the scene in front of me. His anger, her lost eyes, the dance...Brilliant

A lot happened in this chapter, Rae

It was long and i LOVED it!

Bring on the next one!

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shonagudia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#945

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Will edit the comment tomorrow (on weekend)😉

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I don't recognize this khusi at all. She is really not the Khusi i knows all along. So different .
Like this Payal . True to the elder sister Khusi always deserved and not like the dumb in the show. Payal knows what's right and what's wrong. And stood up for the same.
The flash back was really sad.. Khusi stopped believing in start only meat she stopped living all total for me .
Nisha and Arman convo was hard. I never imagine Arman to be like this. But people change with situation don't they.

Nisha and Arnav what a match really . So Nisha started wondering about who this Khusi is .. The flash back was awesome . The whole scene , the dance everything .. I am sure nobody will take the place what Khusi had left in Arnav's life or anybody's life. I really don't know what Nani is actually want.

I am not very fond of dark writing but you really really an amazing writer to bring so many emotions ..

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appy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#946

Rae!! Wait, hold on there.. I have a small thingie to take care of!

Meera.. I dunno how you manage to do that! No, I didn't pull my hair out.. Just smacked my head! :P

Okay, Rae, darling! Thanks for waiting..! :)

Wow, denial! This Khushi is so anti-Khushi.. She's Dukhi! So, I'm very dukhi now! It was heartbreaking to read how she had changed.. And I like this Payal.. She's so.. elder sisterly.. Unlike the Payal on the show!

Dr. Malik and Dr. Oberoi's cold conversation sent chills down my spine.. It was so cold.. Armaan! Armaan and stern?? You have to do a very big Khulasa in future.. Not Kundali ka khulasa, so chill! :P ;)

They were close, right? I mean really really close.. ALmost like Armaan-Nikki.. That's sad man.. Totally sad..

And ASR comes out again.. This man doesn't know how to deal with his demons! Poor Nishi! I smacked my head for the second time when I read that "Change Karo"! And their first confrontation.. She's tough.. She'll last.. But Sharman's waiting for her.. And that dance, that flashback was awesome Rae!

Will we get to see a Nisha-Khushi meeting any time soon? I have that vibe..

In all, awesome update Rae.. It was really really long.. So you're forgiven for no PM and Sharman-less update! I wanna know more about him!

Continue soon! :)

P.S: I hope I got all the facts right this time! :P :D

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Posted: 13 years ago

#947

Right, So I have a few days to my next exam and thought I'd come on to read your updates! Loved all three updates.

Chapter 8

I loved how you described Sharman and Nisha's relationship. The cute little moment they had together when he was working on the presentation. But when he said to her I love you and she immediately moved back that was surprising. Does she fear commitment or is she insecure in love. She may not believe in it due to her past or something related to her parents? It was cute that he did not give up on asking her out and taking her out on dates and then it being ruined so she took him somewhere else :P

Aww Akash bought him home because he was drunk and Payal obviously didn't like the fact and told him to get him out. Now I am wondering what does Akash and Arnav know that Payal and the rest don't know. You have intrigued me with that because Arnav didn't let Akash tell Payal even though Akash pleaded with him :/ .

Loved the way Akash goes because I don't agree with your marriage. Atleast someone had the guts to say it out loud.

Chapter 9

I don't know why but I liked the little fight between Arnav and Nisha, at least by this they'll be finding out through anger what they think of each other. I feel sorry for Hari Prakash but I like that Nisha apologised on behalf of Arnav just like Khushi would. I see Khushi hasn't been properly mention to Nisha. I want her to find out about her so then at least she'd have an insight on how and why Arnav acts the way he does and feels like that.

Aah.So nani wants a traditional bahu who would adhere to the rules, she wants Nisha to adjust that way. Nisha reminds me of Arnav as their similar in many ways. The work calls at breakfast and leaving early. She did not ask for permission, she told them that she was going that I like about her. :)

Chapter 10

Khushi is in denial. She's been saying she's fine but really she's not. She needs someone to be with her, someone for her to talk to when she feels down and she doesn't have that person. I feel sorry for her because she is not even going to Payal about it. Instead she's telling Payal go back to the house but I'm glad Akash and Payal have a backbone in your ff to make the decision of leaving the house as they didn't agree with the way things were progressing.

Loved the little interaction between Armaan and Nisha. That was a needed convo as that little thing told us loads about how they both feel and what they are like. Arnav reminded of Khushi by Nisha wearing a saree. He was manhandling her just like Khushi and I like that Anjali accidently spilled that it reminds him of Khushi. I like the points she picked up that everyone bows down to Arnav's anger and that there is more to this Khushi person than what she has been told. I hope she goes investigating around this and decides to change the marriage around!

Lovely updates all in all. I hope my long comment makes up for the lack of comments I've been giving due to exam commitments. Will be back and active from 16th May. So please keep sending me these pms :).

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fatima2603

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Posted: 13 years ago

#948

Khushi is a shadow of her former self. The way you described how she was and now what she has become - that was heartbreaking. No wonder Payal grew some balls and did what she did. As I have said before...Payash rock in this.

I understand that Arnav is deeply in love with Khushi and misses her like crazy, but he let her slip out of his fingers. It is his own doing. I wonder what his reasons are that Akash seems to know...

Nisha...I cannot believe how alike she is to ASR. And all her past friends hate her...she must have done something pretty big. And when Anjali went up to her to apologize for Arnav's behaviour and mentioned Khushi...it didn't seem as though she was hurt or angry towards her. Perhaps this Anjali is more clued up than the shows Anjali?

And you are right my heart feels like NiAr is all wrong because it loves ArHi. However, I think Nisha may do wonders for Arnav and who knows maybe they will help eachother. And as much as it pains me to say this, if NiAr are meant to be then they will be. After all, if Arnav couldn't stand up for the woman he loved and let people think negative thoughts about her then he doesn't really deserve her.

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Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#949

Once again, lovely update!

The pain felt by Arnav is so raw, that you really do almost end up feeling the same amount of pain while reading. However, I really, really sympathised with Nisha in this chapter.

It's highly unfair to be kept in the dark, but hopefully the reason will slowly start to unfold as the story progresses.

I found it pretty amusing to read how even Atul - the cheery guy, someone who forgives so easily was keeping his distance from Nisha. Which makes me wonder whether Sharman was truly at fault? Or was it just the circumstances, and both Sharman and Nisha wanted separate things at that point in time. I know you will be revealing this as the story moves on, so it's just me saying my thoughts out loud :)

Arnav forcing her to change - so ASR of him. So ASR of him to grab the lady and expect her to do what he wants. In a way the way she stood up and said no, kinda reminded me of how Khushi defied Arnav for the photoshoot dress. He told her to change. She denied. He forced her, she came out wearing a sari. In a way telling him, I did what you asked, that is I changed. However I am not going to wear what you want me to wear.

In some way her fighting spirit is something akin to that of Khushi's. And I am enjoying reading this, because i am sure, this will force Arnav to remember more of Khushi, and therefore the truth will come out faster.

I understand that they are going to meet each other much later, and I am sure that the meeting is going to be electrifying!

Normally angst is not my genre that i like to read, however your story has me captivated!

Great work! :)