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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#621

Originally posted by: dumas
bloody hell that was intense it was anjali and nani who drove khushi away and well arnav is arnav his sister comes first even do she only cares about her happiness they are in so much pain and hurt and they intended to get married loved the update well written perfectly done thanks for the pm

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#622

Originally posted by: bushrayou
sorry for late comments!!

Chapter 4:

you realize with your writing I am picturing the other couple as AR... EVEN though you have them in the FF as other characters... yup and its making me more in love with the story!!!
nisha and sharman... hm...

TWO broken marriages!! what are they doing! This is such a settlement!
i swear my heart pounds really fast when I read this story... i feel like its only getting more heart breaking.

my heart clenched at Shashi asking her if she was okay... how does one answer that!

Hahahahaha! Dont. AR are supporting characters as it is. :p

Awww!

Originally posted by: bushrayou
Chapter 5:

oh... i swear my eyes popped out at Keerti's congratulations...WHY are they soo mean!!! And Keerti... always comes out understanding all...

But it echoed everyday in Chotte's eyes - darkened with pain, screaming for someone to listen, to stop the agony

-damn powerful words!!!! I can feel the emotions you write!

so originally I had guessed that maybe they had picked to get married and had picked each other... but this is different. they have never talked...

why do this!!! god you are going to kill me...

Lol!

They talked but never made the first move to talk...and yep, they havent picked the option of getting married...

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#623

Originally posted by: abhiyaluver1
HEY...!! I AM REALLY CONFUSED ABOUT THIS FF.. CAN U PLEASE PM ME .. I MEAN PM ME "ABB TAK KI STORY" PLEASE (IF U CAN)

The summary till now is on page 69. Read the Author's note.

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Gals

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Posted: 13 years ago

#624

awesome update..
dis is getting more n more intresting..
continue soon..thanxx for d pm.

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#625

Originally posted by: Cute_Gal
awesome update..
dis is getting more n more intresting..
continue soon..thanxx for d pm.

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Firebolt

@Firebolt

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Posted: 13 years ago

#626

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

This comment made me laugh so hard! You are brilliant at threatening! Lol! ;) :D

And I will try my hardest that non DMG watchers are able to read this with no issue but if you have any, just contact me. :)

And as I read your comment again - Hahahahahahaha! Nisha sure has a lot of 'well wishers'! ;) :D

Thank You for such a wonderful comment! :)

Threaten? Who? You?..Blasphemous! 😆 It's only a threat if you choose to answer wrong😈😆

Glad i made you laugh... 😊

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#627

*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my work.

Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 13 years ago

#628

Oh god!

The anguish deepens with every chapter, Rae. I don't know how these two are alive and the other two that hold these two prisoners of their memories..i don't even want to think about them

And he laughed.

I can imagine a manic laughter from a broken man as I read this line. Its scary and sad at the same time.

And one day I'll die
With you in my mind

Heart wrenching words and more apt that any others could be!

Nisha and her father Alessandro - cannot wait to find out more there.

I liked the fear in Nisha's mind about whether he will be able to keep up his promises in the face of his families demands. I would be scared too. He is hardly able to stand up to them. Or maybe the reason hasn't been strong enough yet!

Edited by meera30 - 13 years ago

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 13 years ago

#629

This update is damn good... the anguish of Arnav Singh Riazada was very aptly described. I could actually visualise Arnav in the same mood, being self-destructive in anguish.

Hope his tormented soul gets some reprive.