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Srijanee

@luvflicksgirl

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#601

very beautifully written...😳👏

love your ff

do cont soon

thnx for the pm

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nimra21

@nimra21

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#602

Wow. That was one great chapter!

Both of them are in great pain and barely holding themselves together. You are doing a great job portraying their emotions. Well done.

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#603

bloody hell that was intense it was anjali and nani who drove khushi away and well arnav is arnav his sister comes first even do she only cares about her happiness they are in so much pain and hurt and they intended to get married loved the update well written perfectly done thanks for the pm

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#604

sorry for late comments!!

Chapter 4:

you realize with your writing I am picturing the other couple as AR... EVEN though you have them in the FF as other characters... yup and its making me more in love with the story!!!

nisha and sharman... hm...

TWO broken marriages!! what are they doing! This is such a settlement!

i swear my heart pounds really fast when I read this story... i feel like its only getting more heart breaking.

my heart clenched at Shashi asking her if she was okay... how does one answer that!

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#605

Chapter 5:

oh... i swear my eyes popped out at Keerti's congratulations...WHY are they soo mean!!! And Keerti... always comes out understanding all...

But it echoed everyday in Chotte's eyes - darkened with pain, screaming for someone to listen, to stop the agony

-damn powerful words!!!! I can feel the emotions you write!

so originally I had guessed that maybe they had picked to get married and had picked each other... but this is different. they have never talked...

why do this!!! god you are going to kill me...

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...
Hawww!! Cliffhanger...You evil girl 😆
Btw I loved this chapter..so arnav & khushi are apart coz of that creep..I hate him.😡
Anjali..ughh!! tubelight kahin ki..she wakes up when the damage is already done. I'm sorry to say but I hate her too!! 😡
I knew it!! They are being forced by the family..But why is nani upset? She used to adore Khushi..well I know I'll have to wait for the story to unfold gradually..but I'm a little impatient you see. 😆
Yay!! Armaan & Riddhima are engaged & nikki is there too. This Nisha girl has a tiff with everybody yaar..literally nobody on this planet loves her except that sharman guy of course. I feel bad for her.
Finally..Arnav asked the expected question. Go Nisha..say No..Say you are not happy with this relationship..Go..Go..Go..I'm with you. (I sound like a cheerleader..don't I? 😆)

P.S.-I loved the summary vala idea.
P.P.S.-Thank You for replying to my comment..I know Khushi slapped him..don't worry 😆
P.P.P.S.- I imagine Nisha as Karishma Kapoor. Reason: She has blue eyes & her name was Nisha in Dil toh pagal hai. 😆 (Please ignore my stupid logic)

Everyone hates Anjali! Lol!

Anyway, Thank You for the comment! :)

Glad you like it and also that you sound like a cheerleader cos that makes me feel like the story has gotten you involved...so Yay! :D

And about Nisha...more on her and Sharman as the story unfolds. :)

And Karishma Kapoor...hmmm, not bad. :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#607

Originally posted by: Aveiro
Awesome :D

Thank You! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#608

Originally posted by: icegurl789

thanx for the info!
its somehow that i cant bear to see nisha with arnie boy...i do appreciate your effort having a total different character like nisha aka female ASR in your ff...arnav and nisha both suffering,tormented souls lost their love but hez only reserved for khusi..i want them together no matter what!
they are one of the mesmerizing,breathtaking couple i have ever witnessed onscreen!
i m pretty excited to read how you bring back khusi into arnav's life...the story is getting more and more gripping with every update!
patience thats the thing...i will have to just sit back and read how arnav gets his khusi back which he definitely will right???
do update soon!:D:D

I cannot answer any of that but I agree ArHi are one fantastic pair. :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#609

Originally posted by: Ri_luvs_ArShi
That was fab and suspensive as usual.
I am loving this and all the susense.

Really curious to find out more about Khushi and Sharman's lives.
Nisha really sounds like the female version of ASR but there is only one ASR.

I think that she will definitly say "Yes" because of their families and all and I am sure that at the same time Sharman will enter her life to win her back.
Not sure about Khushi😕

Just imagine Arnav and Nisha in the mandap and Sharman shouting:"Yeh shaadi nahi ho sakti"😆 Like in the movies.
Sorry for my stupid thought,wont do it again😆

Keep reading to know what happens cos I will let my updates do the talking! ;) :D

Thank You! :)

And I just imagined the last scene in my head...hahaha! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#610

Originally posted by: zaniax
Fabulous update..i love d whole concept and it's beautifully written 👏👏 thanx for d pm..will be waiting for the nxt part.

Thank You! :)

Glad you are enjoying it.