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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#521

*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my work.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#522

*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my work.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#523

*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my work.

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#524

Wheee! :D

*edit*

Well.. When you started with "Is that clear? Any questions?" It was like you were asking us that especially since it followed that A/Note :P

Nisha.. Circumstances have made her put up a cold and indifferent front. But she had to try hard not melt when confronted with some solace from a person like Dr Keerti. I'm really really really curious about what happened in the past!

All fake.
But then who cared?
Nisha, Arnav and Khushi would answer that question without a moment's hesitation.
No one.

Why would all three of them not care? Were you talking about not caring for Anjali?! Or is it a general statement cause they are all in some sort of denial and putting up a facade?

Loved how she put the receptionist in place. She's attended Boarding School and is now with her grandparents. What about her parents? You mentioned her Dad. But there seem to be issues at various levels. Abrupt end. I wanted to know what she says. :(

Thanks so much for updating Rae! Ur a sweetheart! 🤗

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appy

@appy_12

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#525

res!

See?? I'm here!

Nani doesn't like Khushi??? Why?? Don't say 'reasons'! Ok, Nani hates Khushi.. Anjali sees something amiss in her Chhotey'e eyes! And she isn't very happy with this alliance.. I'm guessing Shyamu is no more.. At least with regard to your FF?

Nisha, Arnav and Khushi would answer that question without a moment's hesitation.

No one.

Loved those lines! Awesome!

And wow. Keerti's thoughts made me go back to Sanjeevani days.. Rae! I love you so much for bringing Sanjeevani in here!

Oh, and Nisha Francia spent her growing years taking 'classes'? I'm liking this girl.. The way she snapped at the receptionist and crossed her legs. Well, I can see her as the lady ASR.

And this could all go right based on her answer. What's she gonna say? Mostly yes, because they're doing it for their family already!

Hmm.. Rae darling! This freaking awesome!

Continue soon, ok?

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#526

Gosh, the angst in every scene is palpable.. So much pain.. To the extent that they're all pretty much dead inside.. :(

Very nice update.. And I hope you update again soon.. Really want to read more.. Khushi's story, and Sharman's.. Am very interested to know their back stories.. And of course, am looking forward to the time when all four will come face to face.. I can imagine Nisha's facade cracking a little, and the ice queen spitting some fire.. :)

Thanks for the PM.. :)

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Harshnee Vora

@harshnee

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#527

luved it. continue soon. looking forward to the next update. thx a lot for the pm

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Gargee

@Gargee

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

#528

You know you're a Brilliant story teller right? Yeah? Good... Glad that's out of the way!

Now. The Update.

May I suggest you changing your name to 'Voldemort'? Evil Woman! You left us there? Really, Now!

First you write such a Chapter- and then leave it without Nisha's response- Why? Do you not Love us? Please- Please!- Update soon?

Oh... I bow to thee Lord- or Lady rather- Voldemort 😆 That really was a brilliant update!

Thanks for the PM- but do know that I waiting for the next chapter- eagerly!

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#529

Once again, beautiful song choice, never heard any song by her before. This is not exactly related to the update, but you must post songs with every update, it makes the story more endearing 😊

I like how you perfectly you described Nikita's hesitation, as well as the others, though it is sort of sad, and I'm really eager to know the reason behind it.

Nani's cold behavior, her adamant words are striking in this chapter and so is Anjali's helplessness. I really feel for her.

Loved those lines-

But it echoed everyday in Chotte's eyes - darkened with pain, screaming for someone to listen, to stop the agony and Anjali hated that she could do nothing to ease it, no matter how desperately she wanted to - she was the reason for those emotions in the first place...and the cloud of unpleasant memories started settling in...

And should I decipher from the last few lines, as , Arnav still is hanging on to some hope that Nisha would break off the engagement, and he can still be loyal, sort of still be attached to Khushi and her memories?

And the way you have described Nisha's demeanor here, gives a soothingly appealing, and intriguing touch to her. Though I can't help but wonder that before her parents forced her to be prim and proper, she had a totally different side to her.

Fab update.The story is getting more gripping with every update. 😊

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catalyst

@catalyst

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#530

i loved the update...seriously i m feeling a lot more dizzy with arnav getting serious with this relationship and talking to nisha and saying that theres no going back...i wonder what will happen when khusi finally enters into his life!

khusi has always been my favourite character - she is unique in her own way..plzz can we get some more on khusi's feelings i mean khusi's pov!

i cant wait for you to continue and reveal the entire plot!

do continue soon!

thnx for the pm!:D:D