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Originally posted by: lilmzsunshine
So I'm back.
Now - where to begin.First things first - phew!!! It's not Riddhima!!!! I feel so relieved, almost elated. I dunno why, but I can handle Arnav-Khushi separation better than I can handle AR ... I can honestly tell you if it WAS R, I woulda stopped reading there ... or atleast have tried to - your writing IS addictive.So, now - onto the story. I love Arnav's tortured soul. But what makes this different from other flash-back cum splitting the two and having them move on is your intriguing prologue. She obviously had a few things to say too, and it wasn't the one sided onslaught of anger and cruelty we see in the show these days. I liked how she's also seemingly the wrong here and there, atleast that's what I deduced from the prologue.lets see where you've taken KKG.Dying to see how this pans out ...But if it DOES end not-so-happily, I am expecting a similar story on KKG. Only to get a third one where the two meet again, after each has been married ... oh the possibilities ...But I digress.Lovely, just lovely. Eagerly waiting for more.-S
I hadnt even for a minute imagined Riddhima as the girl...I cant separate AR either. Lol! :p
Khushi wont be weak, I can promise you this. My female characters will not be weak. Thats all that I will say on the subject. The aim here is to explore all four sides...so lets see how that goes.
Thank You for a wonderful comment! :)
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