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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
WOW MERI DONO KHAAS N VERY SPL BEHENE CHAT KARING 😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: dmg_mjht_d3_rox

<font size="4">WOW MERI DONO KHAAS N VERY SPL BEHENE CHAT KARING 😳</font>

Aakshu tu aying bas teri ho kami thi jaan
meko fever h abi !!:'(
au me missd u !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
jaan tujhe feverhaui?????kaisi hai meri rasgula tc yaar
kal tho exma haina?????ab kya????
tc ha
missed u too rey u knw tht how much i love u
puchchi muah*10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
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i kne meri hi kami thi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: upasna_mishti

N meh lives in dehli !!'
tu kahan rahing ????



am living in indore for now...

results ke baad pata chalega ki kya hoga...

PMT tu issi saal degi??????

ya fir next year...

toh matlab 2 years mein 11-12 khatam...

hey akshu tu kya kar rhi hai...

missed u rey


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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
I am sooo srry Upi...I must be the last 1 to cmmnt...anyways this was amazing...I just luved it...it was amazing baby!! srry once again!! n jaldi update karna!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh gosh u killed me with ur beautiful update it was awesome .
I have send u buddy request plz add me and pm me nxt post
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
M so sorry for commenting late...
that was awesome... upi jaan.. teko dher sari jhappiyaan aur pappiyaan for this beautiful update... loved it... waiting for another strip... lOve you jaan.. muaaahhh
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: anniemathias

oh gosh u killed me with ur beautiful update it was awesome .
I have send u buddy request plz add me and pm me nxt post

hey hv accepted ur request !! wil be updating asap !!!


Originally posted by: d3_rox

I am sooo srry Upi...I must be the last 1 to cmmnt...anyways this was amazing...I just luved it...it was amazing baby!! srry once again!! n jaldi update karna!!:)

tanx teh !!! koi nai will b updating today chk out !!


ty chetu !!! <3


Originally posted by: lovekriyaansh

M so sorry for commenting late...

that was awesome... upi jaan.. teko dher sari jhappiyaan aur pappiyaan for this beautiful update... loved it... waiting for another strip... lOve you jaan.. muaaahhh

meli jaaan !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! muah teko b !!!! me jaldi updating !!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys m back with the second part this strip !! thanx a lot for appreciating the last update !! so now i dedicate this chap to my guru j's !
wandering who is this guru ji ??
lemme tell !
my guru ji's are my two awsum behenas !!!!! the two most fab writers i hv ever met !! *~ prenu *~ *~ anky *~
i seriously adore u both just lobh ur both writting !!!!!! m madly in love with u two !! 🤣 🤣
this crap doesnt worth dedication to "YOU " BUT STILL :D
n one more things my guru's ... Love you both !!!!!!!!!!!!!

PS: ITS THE KRIYANSH VERSION OF ... I TOO HAD A LOVE STORY !
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~~~ **perennis amor **~~~ endless love *~~~ part 2




The morning ... ahhh i felt the warm sun rays on me !! which made whole room to shine in an mischievous golden paint !! pure irresistable sent of her's added a flavour to that morning !! in fact in every morning !!

I Looked , and my eyes were stuck on you
I tried to move the black in them , but they were stuck like glue !
Looking at you for real , I noticed your eyes
That's exactly where your beauty lies !
So genuine , so honest , so beautiful , so deep
With a glint of light , some naughtiness did creep

Finding my dream coming true

I PLEADED my shivering lips to bring out the words I had
kept for you
There were so many things to say
I can remember none of them at all
BUT, I dont lose with that , I do things my own way ...

{ guys this short poem is again of my fav author ... me luv dese lines too 🤣 }

" I'm so happy because I found you. And I'm even more happy because we're both so perfect for each other. "


" We're perfect for each other because we sleep on opposite sides of the bed.
And perfect is somewhere in the middle, tangled in our sheets and skin, filling the air with the sweetness of my breath mixing with yours. "


A
nd it's that perfect feeling that I wake up to each morning. And I feel so good!

"You and I are the perfect thing, the only perfect thing in the whole wide world. !

Her wet hair ... falling on her soft skin ... Actually were tickling my nerves !

Her pure inocent melodious voice ! ahhh that was the first thing which i want to hear every morning !

Her cute actions !
<3 ...
I want to capture her every sight !!

Her endless cute talks !!! sumtimes i didnt even knew when her talks started n when dey ended ! because i was always busy reading her lips !
haha she is adorable !!

~~~~~~~~~ " kriya's pov " ~~~~~~~
I
luv to wake him up every morning !

N he doesnt even know the first thing dat i use to do every day !!!!!!??

The first person i use to see is " him " n he does'nt know this ...or ...does he ??

He is unpredictable !!

He use to tickel my senses ...every time ...wen...he's around me ... or kilometer's away frm me !
ahhh ... we are " WE " !!!
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"Love " is our precious possession !!
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~~ back to rey's pov !
After finishing my breakfast 1 ...
!! WAIT !

* confused why i used " breakfast 1 " haha lemme clear ~ my first breakfast is her sweet , magical , sight !! she luked so preety in the morning ( not only in the morning ...whole day she drove my senses away to sum fairy land ) ! her tension free face ! her wet hairs ! ahhh Is dis all less in comparision to that healthy stuff dat all of u stuff in your mouths everyday ? haha m more lucky in dis case *check n mate * *

so aftr finishing my breakfast ... Waiting fr what !! ... i go ahead fr my second innings ... of having breakfast ... with her !! 🤣

Those cute baby faces which she made on seeing broccoli in plate ! awww I feel pity !!

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Her carved bodylines ! ahhh i use to grab her waist evrytime n dat too in different way everytime !!
n her sweet blushes ... they added to my craziness heights !

It was so special to be in heaven all the time !!
When I was away form her !
The only thing i use to do is " stick to my laptop" 🤣
On the screen
Gazing at her picture ...
I found mysefl falling with the rising heights
Falling in Love with her
Couldn't resist saying - I Love You !
The madness added
When the picture said it too ...
🤣 🤣 🤣

I gave plenty of reasons to the people around me and my fellow mates to think that there was sumthing wrong with me . Or , to be precise , with my brain ! .
When you see a guy talking to his laptop , at times looking outside at the clouds , smiling , then looking at the screen again and smiling one more time - you cannot be blamed foe feeling that his top floor might be VACANT !!!!!!!

Her cute talks ! I used to brush my hairs whenever i thought of her ... n den realised i actually messed my hairs !!!! n den got back to my long trail of setting them again ! 🤣 🤣


On those family funtions or rather gatherings ...she kept adjusting her chunni which kept sliding down her right shoulder . N when asked to have sumthing ...On her mom insistence she use to pick up a few cashews from the dry fruit bowl , leaving the dhokla and rasgullas ... her favorite vanilla dipped choco chips .. because they would mess her lipstick .

N when evry one was busy on fighting over food in an historic way ...i was busy in ...gazing my lady !

At times she looked at me , and notices how I was looking at her with everyone around and she use to silently pleade me evrytime to take my eye's off her .

But men will be men . !!

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love overdrives you ! ahhh same happened to me * sigh*
scraching every bit of tissue in my head was trying to make things work out but my Lady !!!!!! she wanted to discuss her commotions ! I told her whole situation where i was trapped n we finally came up with a decision !!


" i ... take a vow ...! " i said

" i ...take a vow ...! " she said !

" dat we'll nt call eachother till evening !!! i said

" dat i will call you evry second !! " she said *gigling * n den she corrected

" dat i will nt call you unless there is some kind of emergency...!!


But u know what the one who broke this decision was "ME " !!

I called her in just a hour later !!

" oh boy !! This decision makes me feel like I've struck my foot with an axe , by mistake " i said her .


" No, dear it's not like you've struck your foot with an axe , " she started politely , then shouted , " Rather your foot wanted to lick that axe and , willingly , you jumped on a sharpened one , that too bare- foot !! Now enjoy your wounds !! " she fumed ! "
hahha 🤣

But as i hv said u earlier

" i do things
... in my own way "... n u know what she gave me those tricky ideas... infact trained me How to handle her !! see down how she did that !!!

It was a hot sunday afternoon . We were watching same movie on our televisions ; she in her home with her mom n I at my place . And i did that becuz she sent me an sms telling me to watch that movie !
In the movie , the heroine was packing her bags after having a big fight with her hubby .

At that very moment she calls me up . And putting herself in that women's shoes , I don't understand why , she says , " you know what ? If somedaY I am so angry that I want to run away form you ... just do a simple thing ...???

" Simply run to me and give me a tight hus , no matter how much I hit u then ...But give me a warm , tight hug . Dont utter a word . Just hold me in your arms for sometimes ...and then little later help me unpacking my bags . !!!!!!! " she said in her childish tone !

n I did same to manaoify her !!!
Its just that she is my everything !!! my friends rule my heart my she owns it !!
I n your capillaries blood flows ! but in mines ~ her sensations flow in an irregular yet continous manner !!

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so guys how wat it !!
did u liked it ??
if yes den SPAM !!!!!!!! the thread 🤣 🤣
with lods of luv
- upi aka pasto !!!!!

Edited by upasna_mishti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Hey guys
this strip is purely inspired frm "I TOO HAD A LOVE STORY "by " RAVINDER SINGH "
i cudnt resist posting it here with kriyaansh in it
Edited by upasna_mishti - 13 years ago

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