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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Edited by upasna_mishti - 12 years ago

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

Endless Love

Days pass by somehow

but nights now are a wagon of pain
Injuries may heal with time
But marks will always remain
Restless on my comfortable bed
I toss and turn and try to sleep
But thoughts are bulking my head
And have formed a huge heap !!
The past is flashing its scorching light beams
Tearing me at the seams
The darkness of my life is more visible in the dark
And now I am trying to give it a voice , trying to speak my heart !!!

Again ... i m going through that desperate feeling .

Something within me was going numb ...

Second by Second ...

Making me realizing that " m Alone " !!

Moments later i could feel that something innocent was being burnt ...

A dead silence persisted in my mind

Amid the ordeal of surviving without her ...

I want to run away to some place where I could be alone with just her ...just her momories for company !!!

" LIFT ME UP ... ... LET ME GO !!!!!!

I had pain in my aching heart !

WAIT !!

WHATS HAPPENING !! ???

i cant breath ...

i wanna move but why my legs are'nt moving...they are still .. crap whats dis ...!!??

sumthing was shaking me up

making me come back to the place where i was !

suddenly the chain of despondent thoughts was broken by sumone ...

I opened my eyes . I could'nt hear that voice clearly neither was able to see that lovely face ...which brought me back to reality ...

ahhh! that scorching light ... phew but my shadow (here resembles his sumone spl ...) saved me frm dat irritating light !!!

but i was so pleased ... My heart felt so light . ... ahh i heard my love's voice clearly ...

"Rey !! rey !! wake up !! whats hapenned to you ? my love said shockingly .

I realised that my fist has actually cluched her dress !!!! my poor boy !!

"oh !!boy !! ...it was a scary dream ! ...just a dream !!! " i told her releasing her dress !!

i slowly stood up still nt fully awake !

"Rey !! are ...are you ok !? she exclaimed with her worried eye's n chocked voice .
" I am fine " i tried to relax her ...!!
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I was still not able to understand why that scary dream is back to my head . ...(i tried to calm myself)
...may be fear of loosing her still resides inside my heart ... heart which was not aching ...cuz of her magical velvet touch ...!!!

At that moment i dont know what gave me the courage to raise my right hand towards her , to reach her face .

my hand reached her face helping her to tug her hairs cehind her ear !

The human touch was so incredible !! so pure ...electrifying !!!

My love still worried ! but how she look beautiful in dat too !!!! * sigh* she was mine nah !

I put my arms around her and bitting her ear I said "~~ oh ! boy i love you ~~ "
feeling my fingers on her face she closed her eye's and I felt her breathing getting heavier by now ...!!

I watched her . Her good looking face , her deep black eye's in which i wanna take a deep dive !...the lines on her forehead appearing , vanishing ...sumtimes getting deeper steeper ...n again appearing !

Her curved eyelashes . her cute nose . Her soft lips on which i gently rubbbed my thumb ...Her hands gripping the bed sheet ...
My eyes were silent observer to this moment we both were captured in !

My mind was hypnotized and fingers were still trying to understand the beautifully carved face . Occasionally I felt her warm breath on my cold numb fingers...!!

Then i again wispered in her ears " I love u n i never wanna loose u again " With that I rested my chin on her shoulder !

" I love u too " she spoke out in her sweet melodious voice and moved her soft fingers all the way from my forearms to the wrist , then the palm and then finally into spaces between my fingers .

At that moment I felt so complete . I realized how , just like me she too wanted to live that moment as if it should never end .

I held her in my arms for sometime . Holding your beloved in your arms that way is such a different feeling . But that it would be so magical , so enpowering i never felt dat way !! its well said " To understand certain things better you have to experience them . And love is one such thing "

We were speechless again , just feeling each other . But who needed to talk ?

Silence was talking at its best .

we broke our deep hug . I am still not sure what was so beautiful about the side of her neck , underneath her ear , to which her long earring was drawing my attention. I stared at her neck and I stared at it some more. Her beauty was trapping my senses . And my senses were freezing every second ...
she wasnt wearing a show off kinda dress ! she was simple ...yet most beautiful women on earth ! I came very close to her neck and withoust uttering a single thing . I kissed her there .

I did not see her expression then , as i was still feeling her neck and the sweet smell of her body . This happened in no time and she was not in a condition to react either . When she gained her senses in a while , she responded by raising her face , letting me get to her neck , beneath her chin and I went ahead , kissing every cell of hers. Our eye's were closed . I grabbed her in my arms , felt her arms stiffening and gripping tightly the corner of me shirt , her voice expressing what she felt .

She almost left herself in my hands . i leaned on her a bit . together we were sliding down , every single second . The kisses and passionate hugs continueed till we felt on the bed .
it was so magical ...to have her beside me ...our hearts maching each others speed ...

Lying partly on the bed and partly on her , she was becoming mischievous and I was no different . I blew upon her eyes, which made her lashes go sown further , gently closing her eyes! gawd !!!!!! her cute gestures made me absolutely mad !!
All i wanted in that moment to have her into my breath ... deleting all worse memories ...memories of pain ...starvation !!!!!!

The wisp of air moved on her forehead from left to right, back to her eye's , then her cute nose , scrolling between her lips and finally it was lost in the air between us . I touched her nose with mines after which i rubbed it against hers , just like mothers do to their beloved babies to express their eternal love ! . She was too , a beautiful baby ! My little kriya !!!
soon our faces were close to each other , slightly tilted at opposite angles , our warm breaths falling on each other's lips . n finally we kissed !
it was so beautiful to have her beside me ...i cannot even describe it !!!!!!!

"oh boy ! i love u n always will b with u " i vowed to myself ! i will grab her this time so tightly so that i cannot loose her dis tym ...

"I rubbed my nose against hers one more time and repeated , " I love you so sos so so very very much sweetheart " .
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SO GUYS DO COMMENT N HIT D LYK TAB :)
WITH LOVE
- UPI :

Edited by upasna_mishti - 12 years ago

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Yipee 1st one to comment
omggg
So beautifuly written...lovd it to the core...that lines u wrote in the start were amazing...
Oh glad to know they are together...love them...last scene was amazing
waiting for the next part...
thanks

Edited by --Kinjal-- - 13 years ago

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akshara

@--Akshu--

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

RES ~~~~~~

UNRES

MERI BEECHUI HUI BEHEN

I WAS WAIITNG FOR A STRIP LOL

THANX MERI RASGULA FOR DEDICATIGN IT TO ME I SERIOSLY LOVED IT JAAN

so romantic

ahh miss kriyaasnh ka romance

this was dam beautiful loved it

how do u write so nice yaar????

main toh iska adha bhi acha nahi likhthi lol

loved it alot thanx for dedicatign such a romatic cute kriyaansh strip to me

To understand certain things better you have to experience them . And love is one such thing "
this line was just awesome

loved it meri behen keep rocking n dedicat more to me dedications will always be welcumed

Edited by dmg_mjht_d3_rox - 13 years ago

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Neethu Uthaman

@-Neethu-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Pasto ki bacchi u scared me in the beginning. I was like What The... Thank god it was just a drm. And and and Rey got married to Kria!!! DINKA CHIKA!!!! Awww their romance was so sweet and elegant. Beautifully written. The end part was amazing. Superb dear. ( abhi yeh rone dhone ka chakkar bant kar koi mujse pyar nahi karta n all. Stupid ladki)

Edited by neethuuthaman - 13 years ago

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dmg_mjht_d3_rox
RES ~~~~~~
UNRES

MERI BEECHUI HUI BEHEN

I WAS WAIITNG FOR A STRIP LOL

THANX MERI RASGULA FOR DEDICATIGN IT TO ME I SERIOSLY LOVED IT JAAN

so romantic

ahh miss kriyaasnh ka romance

this was dam beautiful loved it

how do u write so nice yaar????

main toh iska adha bhi acha nahi likhthi lol

loved it alot thanx for dedicatign such a romatic cute kriyaansh strip to me

To understand certain things better you have to experience them . And love is one such thing "
this line was just awesome

loved it meri behen keep rocking n dedicat more to me dedications will always be welcumed

meri jaan !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! muah !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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akshara

@--Akshu--

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: upasna_mishti
meri jaan !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! muah !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

heloo maine inna bada comment kiya aur tune sirf ek line main reply kiya?????

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

Upi totally loved it...😊

Rey's dream..gosh!!!🤡

Even I was scared by d way u told at d starting...👏

Atlast it was a dream n he is now married to Kriya Ghai...😃

Loved deir romance...☺️

N esp. d final sentence she can never go!!!Just killed it..⭐️

N pls pm me wenever u write anything...😛

N write so many works...😉

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

it was amazing and thakns for the pm

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

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haye!!!!! meri jaan kya tha ye
awieee let me take a breathe first
hoo!!!!!!! IN...OUT
IN OUT
IN OUT
okkk nw coming ...dat was soo beautiful upi...loved it yaar
dere romance hayee!!!!! 😍 😍
kya kahu uske bare mai...n dose starting lines woww man...truly u protrayed our KRIYAANSH soo ki jst want to say CHUMESHWARI darl
badi si n tight sii jhappiii le le tu phele...awiee yaar
love u...love u 4 dis
muhaaa dear...muhaaa