KriYaansh FF~Rolling Hearts in Deep#2(#3LinkAdded)

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Anyaa_012

@Anyaa_012

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#501

n he finally came up with three possibilites !!!!

1# may be kriYaansh fight ?
2 # or may be kriYaansh fight ??
3 # or may b... may b kriYaansh fight ???
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Iiieekkss!!!:D i luvddd that part sooo muchh!!!:)
Awesomee:):)

The way u just discribed the scene where rey was singing was damn touchyy for me!!
Beautifulll !!the wayy kria ..reacted on the pain in his singing!!!:$
aaawww!!!:)
u havee written this partt vryyy beautifully!!:) 👍🏼
awesomee update soon and thanxx for PM!!:)

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Madhurya

@maddieee

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#502

Upi it's too hot to handle... me likes this update a lot... a lot means a lot... u are an amazing writer sweety.. do continue this ff😊

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#503

smoking update thanks for the pm

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Snigdha

@Arsha1994

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#504

awesum...

luvd d updt...

d way rey ws waitin fr kria..

kriaz day dreaming..

couple dare...push ups..mener herd of dem..it ws awesum idea...

der make out session ws hawtt..

thnx fr d pm..

waitin fr d nxt updt..

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Puja

@puja_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#505

Awesome update...
Luvd it...
D confusion...vry well xplaind...
Kriya's day dreaming ws amazng...
Den couple dare game ws fab...
All couple's dare wer gud pr kriyaansh's ws d best...
Luvd der cnfession n make out session...it ws intense n hawt n romantic...
Waitng fr nxt part...

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Shailja

@---Shailu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#506

Wowww!!!!

really Fab update pasto !!!

I Luved it truely !!!

Wow...the push ups...boys reaction to it nd the session between kriyaansh...

hayyyeee...Awesumest update !!!!

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Anki

@KR_anki_ArSha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#507

upi and ankita...🤗

finish reading all the parts yesterday...

all the parts were awesome...

love it very much...

you both are such an awesome writer..👏

waiting for the nest part...

plase update soon amd pm me plz...☺️

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: pkriyaansh
res
unres so finally u updated from d starting dere were confusions beteen dem realize nahi kar paa reha the and skipping oder parts coz it is a KR ff so focusing on dem only aah d dare was chummeshwari upi dii and doing push ups a tough kriya rey ki neeche haaye loved it so much and finally i love u and uske baad ahem ahem hawttt scene dat was chummeshwari and promo se dekh ke lagta hai ki koi bahot bada tist aane wala hai😊

awww thanks so sos so much palakh !!!
it feels great when ur hardwork gets so much appreciations !!!! yup keep your beats still m going to update soon 😉😆😃😛 🤗

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#509

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha
*Res*
**Unres**

Loved d way rey was waiting for Kriya to come down..

Swayam n Rey convo was amazing...

Kriya's day-dreaming seemed to be so real..I loved it.

N then d couple dare game...it was superb.

Even I wondered how Kriya wil do push-ups before dem but glad d lights went off..

Wow...couple push-ups...i never heard or saw...but here it was out if d box.

U explained it well...

N then their make-out session...

U made it hot n romantic without crossing d words..

I liked it sorry...loved it!!!

Fantabulous updt.

awww thanks a ton snigu ...
seriously i was scared shitless for this crap !! but you guys ,made it special !!!!!!! thankq snickers !! will be updating asap !!