KriYaansh FF~Rolling Hearts in Deep#2(#3LinkAdded)

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@MyDarkPassenger

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#481

u dont know how many times i read this update..it was just too good, not vulgar at all but really beautifully portrayed... whole make out session was too hawt and yet adorable... you have chosen the correct words... without making it bad!

aww... KriYansh are the best!

great work! 👍🏼

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annie mathias

@anniemathiaskr

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#482

It was awesome update their was a confusing of feeling

it was minblowing awesome lenght

waiting eagerly for nxt update

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raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#483

awsome update...
Lyked the dare part nd kriyansh romance part...
Thankx 4 d pm nd update nxt part soon

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achuAR

@achuAR

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#484

aww...kinna cute hain dono...😍

U r super creative...😃

I mean..really pushups??😳

Where do u get those ideas from???😲

soon he reached the no. 10 th ... he ended it by whispering in her ear " Kriya ... I feel for you ... n i know you too feel the same ... i love you ..." he could'nt stop himself ... n his planted a kiss down her neck . ..

oh..my gwad!!!!😍

Super Romantic...😉😳

Gr8 effort Pasto...👏👏

Par tune PM kyun nahi bheji...😡😡

I got the link from our group...😭😭

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Ritu

@--Ritu--

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#485

sooo finally u updated...it ws a g8 update 2 read...👏4rm the strting til the end luved each n every part...reyam convo😆,the restlessness of boys😆,the confusion in kriya's mind,the make out scene...😳ausum...👏on a whole...superb update...👏so do update soon...😊

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@Black_Stone

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#486

Mindblowing update

luvd it to the core

ty fr da pm 😊

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#487

upiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u murder...maar dala aaj tune mjhe
hayeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😍 😍
n helll!!!!!!! u r saying dis crap 😡
pitegi tu mjhe ab

ahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! man dis was too hawtt...all da tym i was blushing n blushing ☺️ ☺️

love da way rey is waiting 4 kriya... n kriya dreaming of rey...awww dat was soo sweet
n upi ye push ups ka idea kaha se mila...bt i love viha dare more...hahahaha 🤣 🤣 basanti in kuto ke samne mst nachna 🤣 🤣

n da way kriyaansh make out...hayeee!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳 dat was too romantic
n dere kiss aww...tune to mjhe aaj pura maar dala re ☺️ ☺️

mai to teko ek badi wali puchiii dungi iske liye...ye le smbhal *muhaaa* 😳
n ek badi wali jhappi b...mjhe na ise aise hawt update deti raha kr n bigadti raha kr 🤣 🤣
luv u bohat sara wala ❤️ 😃

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#488

Wat a dhamaka update 🥳
love confession,,, making out . . . All in one . . . . Totally unexpected.. 👏
I saw ur pm & dat automatically made me smile . . . . Finally updated..
she's daydreaming of him . . . Selecting design for her 😉
couple dare game!! . . . U rock 👍🏼
rimar dare . . . . I wanna see dat.. 🤣
& kya sexy dare chuna hai kriyaansh ke liye 😈
aisa ki - he confessed to her,,, & she was faking anger,,, but could'nt resist to say her feelings 😍
& they could'nt stay longer away 4m each other,,, the feeling of want . . . To feel their love so close,,, feeling warmth of their bodies,, yet resisting a little . . . . . . . But dat could'nt help them to stay apart ☺️
ohh . . Wats dat wid precap 😔

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akshara

@--Akshu--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#489

res

SORRY MERI BEHEN HAVE TO READ THE FF FROM START

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akshara

@--Akshu--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#490

😆UPI woh res wala comment ko chod😆😆😆

awesome update upi n anki di waise yeh update likha kisne upi ne ki anki di ne?????

upi ab toh tu khush hai na maine pad liya😆😆😆

kuch samaj toh nahi ayah mujhe but understood tth swaron getting married😳😳😳

loved kria's pov her confuison in the start loved the way u described it jaan

then reyam waitng for thier respective girls 😳😳😳

aww tth part was cute

kria imagining rey n he was with swayam so sweet😉😉

n then the game swaron dance hayeee😳😳

viha bsanti act mujhse aur achu se inspiration li kya😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

rinni over amar n cat walk😆😆😆

tu bhi na upi jaan

nimmi ka crazy dare

n kriyaansh wah kya dare mila n lihgts off

they are alone 😳😳😳

i loved rey's push up

but kash thoda aur hota na i mean kash push ups scene thoda aur long hota it would be lovely to see rey dng push ups n kria under him lol*nauty minded u see😆😆😆😆*

then the beatiful confession ahhh it was amazing n then the ahem ahem

the kiss😳😳😳

the passionate yet lovng kiss

they needed them aww tth was soo cute

n then i serisoly loved the way u described it meri rasgula i just loved it

the ahem ahem scene was out of thw world loved it alot aur likhn aisae hi *i tld u m nauty minded*😆😆😆😆

aur likh warna i wont talk to u😆😆😆😆

it was hot n paasiontae awesome eveything perfcet on its place iloved it it was super HOTT

Watching her by my side ...so close was like a dream come true ...perfect though things in her heart still jumbled ...but i m trying to solve them . i will tear them apart ... be with me ...every time ... i will make you safe ..."

i loved this above line its soo beautiful man aww juts love ur thesetype of lines makes me connect with the charcters😳😳😳😃😃😃😃😃

ab next paert main mujhe kuc samaj nahi ane wala so i better read the ff from start lol i ,loved it awsome job meri neechdhi hui behen i loved it

n thanx for making me i mean forcing me to read this update as it was beautiful

love u alot muah

puchchi*1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

Edited by dmg_mjht_d3_rox - 13 years ago