KriYaansh FF~Rolling Hearts in Deep#2(#3LinkAdded) - Page 52

Originally posted by: crazysky

it was rocking update
loved its length n
loved the emotions n
confusion about their emotions was simply outstanding...
loved it..
i wish u update soon..

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha

awesome update

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

snigdha...

mujhe comment karna tha pehle...

galat hai..😛

and upi tune usse usse link scrap di and mera first comment karne ka mauka chala gaya...

gandi bacchi...

main kitna chahti thi ki i want to be the first one to comment...

so issliye pehle main saari complaints karungi...😛 ( pissed off eyes hai)

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

okay so u have no idea how many times i have read the update... i just can't get enough of it u know... u read kinni bar !! itta pasand aya kya ??😳😳

so loved how u started the chapter... i mean the confusion so very well portrayed...
thankeq vaishu i mean portraying confusions is always like a trap for mee ...😭 m glad it came out well

u know u wrote very well abt her return.. so true and so beautifully projected...

then how boys were waiting and reyam convo...


me too wanted rey to wait for his girl ...aaa m always liking to make rey appear like dis ...uber cute "rey"
well i seriously believe that rey came there and she wasn't dreaming...

but then the couple dare - very innovative... loved it...
hehhe dat was my dream ...seriously ..it came in my dream !! bwahhahaa


and how rey was saying in her ears.. sensuous... seriously such a lovely sight to imagine... and then the confession done.. loved it... the best part so far... and then how she ran away...

u displayed it well u know the confusion and how kriya was as opposed to her outer appearance and how rey consoled her and didn't wanna see his kriya like that... very well reflected...

and then the kiss and how did he just wanted it to continue and the making out session.. that was so... *no words* awww seriously thanks a ton vaishu ...you don't know how guddy me ijj feeling while quoting ur comment ... n its always like dis ...

and then the last paragraph of how he just wanted to show how much he loved her not worrying anything abt anything else just them and then how he vowed to get all the clear all the confusions off her head... that was the aww moment...

sorry cudn't help u a lot yesterday.. but agar kabhi kar sakun so do tell me...

seriously which angle was this crap... it was one of the finest piece of ur creations ( am not telling boz of the romance but boz how u projected the whole thing)

so thumbs up from my side... 🤗

the last lines u wrote it or somewhere quoted??? churai h ..kahin se vo ... shushhh

Originally posted by: RockStarHuda

Awesome Update UPi...

Me was Very Interested To Read... Ahem Ahem Scenes☺️ 😈

ha... Kriya Accepted Her Love... Atlast

Sorry for The Late Comment

Me= Lazy To Comment..

Now Update Fast.. waiting for Next Part

Originally posted by: LOV_ARSHA_KREYA

Wowww it was fantastic update dear.. (1st. kria's day dream abot rey<3

hehe i luved this scene tooo infact i wanted kriya to feel the same feeling which were there in rey's heart !!

(2nd. kriyansh dare push ups<3
awww me glad as quoted earlier it came in my dream hahaha
(3rd. kriyansh confession<3
their confession is incomplete now ...wait for real fullfledge confession !!

(4th. Kriyansh hawt n romantic scene hayeee loved it so so so so much.<3<3
😳😳 *blush*
😳😳😳amazing,mindblowing,supeb,rocking,chumeshwari,hawt,romantic,faadu update... Loved it alot.. Please yaar ab koi misunderstanding create mat karna and update asap egarly waiting for next !!!

Originally posted by: spicyrays

wow... amazing update... hmmm... loved it... lastly kriya acceptd her feelings for him... thnx for d pm...dear...

Originally posted by: --Kinjal--

Res😡
unres😆
amazing part
lovd it...
Beautifully written upasna...and so big...gr8 work yaar
thenkew kinjal !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ya its biiiggg on ehehhe

lovd the mind talking lines of kria...
Truth and dare game was nice...
Oho light gone at rite time...
heheh credit goes to me 🤣

Kriyansh dare scene was awesomeee
*ahem ahem * 🤗

finally she admitted she loves him


superb fabulous update...
And u call this crap???
U urself read it once again then you'll know its so amazing

aww thanks sososo much kinjal will be updating soon !!

waiting 4 d nxt part
thanx 4 d pm
sorry 4 making u wait...
heheh agli baar late hui to me maar dalungi hahahhahah

Originally posted by: Ritu_ArSha

sooo finally u updated...it ws a g8 update 2 read...👏4rm the strting til the end luved each n every part...reyam convo😆,the restlessness of boys😆,the confusion in kriya's mind,the make out scene...😳ausum...👏on a whole...superb update...👏so do update soon...😊

Originally posted by: achuAR

aww...kinna cute hain dono...😍

meri tarah cute tha na ye :Paur hawt bhi hahaha

U r super creative...😃

hehhe thankq thankq aaachuuu

I mean..really pushups??😳

Where do u get those ideas from???😲

ye idea's muje meri guruji 's ka dhyan krne se aate h hhahhha

soon he reached the no. 10 th ... he ended it by whispering in her ear " Kriya ... I feel for you ... n i know you too feel the same ... i love you ..." he could'nt stop himself ... n his planted a kiss down her neck . ..

*ahem ahem * tu in scenes me khud ko imagine kring kya ::P

oh..my gwad!!!!😍

Super Romantic...😉😳

hehhe tere liye romantic kiya h mene isse hhhaa
Gr8 effort Pasto...👏👏

chalo kisiko to meri hardwork nazar aayi hehehhe

Par tune PM kyun nahi bheji...😡😡

I got the link from our group...😭😭

arrerre baba roi roi nah kr agli baar se pm pakka ...😉

Originally posted by: dmg_mjht_d3_rox

😆UPI woh res wala comment ko chod😆😆😆

awesome update upi n anki di waise yeh update likha kisne upi ne ki anki di ne?????

ye mene lika h !!

upi ab toh tu khush hai na maine pad liya😆😆😆

hehhe haan me supa khush !!!!

kuch samaj toh nahi ayah mujhe but understood tth swaron getting married😳😳😳

loved kria's pov her confuison in the start loved the way u described it jaan

then reyam waitng for thier respective girls 😳😳😳

aww tth part was cute

kria imagining rey n he was with swayam so sweet😉😉

n then the game swaron dance hayeee😳😳

viha bsanti act mujhse aur achu se inspiration li kya😆

rinni over amar n cat walk😆😆😆 ehehehhehe

tu bhi na upi jaan

ma bhi kya 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

nimmi ka crazy dare

n kriyaansh wah kya dare mila n lihgts off

they are alone 😳😳😳

i loved rey's push up

but kash thoda aur hota na i mean kash push ups scene thoda aur long hota it would be lovely to see rey dng push ups n kria under him lol*nauty minded u see😆*

hehehe agar thoda aur lamba push karwati to bichara thak jata fir aage ki ramayan me vo kese perform krta !!! bwahahhaahhahah


then the beatiful confession ahhh it was amazing n then the ahem ahem

the kiss😳😳😳

the passionate yet lovng kiss

they needed them aww tth was soo cute

n then i serisoly loved the way u described it meri rasgula i just loved it

love you rasmalai !!!!!

he ahem ahem scene was out of thw world loved it alot aur likhn aisae hi *i tld u m nauty minded*😆

hahhahha bas likh diye kisi tarah !! :P talent h mujme ...:P hehehe

aur likh warna i wont talk to u😆

hawww you wont tok to me 😭
😭

it was hot n paasiontae awesome eveything perfcet on its place iloved it it was super HOTT

awww tuze pasand aya na sab !!!??

Watching her by my side ...so close was like a dream come true ...perfect though things in her heart still jumbled ...but i m trying to solve them . i will tear them apart ... be with me ...every time ... i will make you safe ..."


i loved this above line its soo beautiful man aww juts love ur thesetype of lines makes me connect with the charcters😃

@ bold : jaan seriously quoting ur comment is like drinking water aftr many days !!!!!!!!! loving ur lamba comment !!!! muah !!!!

ab next paert main mujhe kuc samaj nahi ane wala so i better read the ff from start lol i ,loved it awsome job meri neechdhi hui behen i loved it

hahha haan jaldi jaldi se pooora padh abi takj ka 😉
n thanx for making me i mean forcing me to read this update as it was beautiful

heheh anytime baby !!!!!

love u alot muah

love you baby !!!

puchchi*1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

muah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: shenz_kriyaansh

Rey waiting for her... n SwaRon part was also cute...

loved the couple dare game

Kria's dare to do push ups... lights off.. every1 moved except KriYaansh... Rey doing push-ups in a new way actually romantic way... n way of confession was truly amazing...

haye!!! n their romance was AWw!!!

really amazing update

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: luvcookie

Mindblowing update

luvd it to the core

ty fr da pm 😊