KriYaansh FF~Rolling Hearts in Deep#2(#3LinkAdded) - Page 53

Originally posted by: awesomeabshu

OMG ohh myy gawd

!!!!

it was so so hawt awesum..☺️

and the sudden confession was out of the universe..

u described the feelings soo nicely..

SH*T cant get out of dis..!!

frst i was like tune kitne din se nahi update kia but when u did it was

like breath takin update..😳

jaldi update karo and no MU between kriyaansh..!!

take it as my oder 😆

Originally posted by: yogini64

Wat a dhamaka update 🥳
love confession,,, making out . . . All in one . . . . Totally unexpected.. 👏
I saw ur pm & dat automatically made me smile . . . . Finally updated..
she's daydreaming of him . . . Selecting design for her 😉
couple dare game!! . . . U rock 👍🏼
rimar dare . . . . I wanna see dat.. 🤣
& kya sexy dare chuna hai kriyaansh ke liye 😈
aisa ki - he confessed to her,,, & she was faking anger,,, but could'nt resist to say her feelings 😍
& they could'nt stay longer away 4m each other,,, the feeling of want . . . To feel their love so close,,, feeling warmth of their bodies,, yet resisting a little . . . . . . . But dat could'nt help them to stay apart ☺️
ohh . . Wats dat wid precap 😔

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

upiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u murder...maar dala aaj tune mjhe
hayeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😍 😍
n helll!!!!!!! u r saying dis crap 😡
pitegi tu mjhe ab

ahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! man dis was too hawtt...all da tym i was blushing n blushing ☺️ ☺️

love da way rey is waiting 4 kriya... n kriya dreaming of rey...awww dat was soo sweet
n upi ye push ups ka idea kaha se mila...bt i love viha dare more...hahahaha 🤣 🤣 basanti in kuto ke samne mst nachna 🤣 🤣

n da way kriyaansh make out...hayeee!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳 dat was too romantic
n dere kiss aww...tune to mjhe aaj pura maar dala re ☺️ ☺️

mai to teko ek badi wali puchiii dungi iske liye...ye le smbhal *muhaaa* 😳
n ek badi wali jhappi b...mjhe na ise aise hawt update deti raha kr n bigadti raha kr 🤣 🤣
luv u bohat sara wala ❤️ 😃

Originally posted by: upasna_mishti

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my quoting code - green !!! :P

Originally posted by: achuAR

Arre bhaiya aise ek saath inne saare Quoting karenge toh meri bandwa banj jaayengi..😆
hello hai bye bye😆😆

Originally posted by: Jiya_ArSha4Ever

Wow finally got to read ur update after so long.
yaa i know m too late now also :(

N what r u saying its crap???? No dear I really enjoyed this one.It was far too special for KriYansh.
aww thankq so much jiya !!
The parts which i liked the most.

1.This line is so so true. Hahahaha
'Eventually all boys were waiting for the galz to come up from their "make-up world "...*sigh* these occasions are made for this torture only ...' Like the part when the boys were waiting for the girls to come down.

seriously you loved this line ? 🤗 me happy !!!

2. Loved the part when kria was selecting the mehendi design.
"Here it it !! for my love " he pointed to a beautiful design with a great work ...' Hayeee even if she was dreaming.
i soso wanted kriya to feel same as rey feels dats why i added this scene !!!!!

3.Now my favourite is undoubtedly the dare game where KriYansh were given to do the push ups. hhehhe this came into my dreams !!*snap*

A big hug to you 🤗 for thinking this idea for making rey doing the push ups with Kria beneath him.

aww hugs to you too for giving such a adorable review !!!🤗


Too too romantic this one. I could clearly imagine the whole scene. N the way they have their love to each other was awesome .
Btw I also like RiMAR dare doing the CAT WALK. Good one.
hehehhhehe thankew !!!!
4. Finally the hawt bedroom scene.So beautifully described with the right words.

Overall a fantastic update dear. thanks a lot for commenting here !!!! 😳😳😳😳😉

Originally posted by: dildostidance19

upi and ankita...🤗

finish reading all the parts yesterday...

all the parts were awesome...

love it very much...

you both are such an awesome writer..👏

waiting for the nest part...

plase update soon amd pm me plz...☺️

Originally posted by: lovely7010

Upi r u serious u foung this update crap!!
its mind blowing update
loved it very much
loved kriya's dreaming part
the dare was awesome n the way they did it loved it
the last part was intense n romantic
finally the confessed...eagerly waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: apurva100

Upiii...tune finally update kar diya...bahut sare hugs update dene ke liye:-):-):-)

update was amazing yaar..i loved it

rey and swayam convo was funny...

and the way rey waiting for kria i love it...
hayye aur kria ki imagination...

and the game part was awsome...
kriyaansh romance is so cute..
pura update mast tha...

Love u

Originally posted by: kaba3003

Mindblowing update:):)
Luvd it:):)
Thanx for d pm:)