~ArHi FF: The trodden paths~ ch4 pg69 NEW--13/7))

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

This is going to be epic. I can just feel it :D

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meghnas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

beautiful prologue...especially loved the three versions of the quote 😊 fabulous writing as always 😊😊

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insanelycrazy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

thats wat u whipped when u were barely trying?!!😲

it was awesome!! and i've got all curious now! i wonder wats this all about. she thinks he's dead? and he knows she thinks he's dead but he's playing along? and they have a child together too?! sooo curious!

and khushi paralyzed or something? because you mention her use to dancing and stuff and tapping foot, plus in the banner there's a pic of her in a wheel chair, so ya i was just wondering. and if it is like that, i wonder how it happened! soo sad :(

i loved how that line where u said they want to be away from each other but who are they when destiny want them together? (nope i don't remember the line but the gist is still the same naa! so i'm off the hook 😛 )

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--drama_queen--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

OMG di the prologue was sososos sad 😭 it made me cry AGAIN.

ohh great now i cant wait to read chapter 1.

i wonder when ur gonne update chapter 1...

lolz you always write such a nice FFs.

it makes ppl cry.

i was crying in my bedroom nd suddently the door opens.

nd all u see my little sister laughing at me for crying over a story.

she was trying to cheer me up.

btw is khushi paralysed?? 😭

and she thinks that arnav is dead? 😭

and i wonder why isn't arnav going next to her to tell her that his not dead.

ohh mannn now i just cant wait to read the next chapter.

di good luck for ur exams.

and i hope u update the " heart remembers " the reason i breath " and this one soon. this are my fav fav fav fav fav FFs ever.

di now i'll start bugging u telling u to update this 3 FFs.

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priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

very interesting
prologue was so nice
👏👏👏
and the quotes u used are so beautiful
❤️
pls continue soon
and pm me

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purplekid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Damn girl! That was FINE! Loved how you're writing for pleasure! Please continue soon!

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yanka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

you must be kidding when you say that this is not upto your standard!! this is beautiful... you write so effortlessly... and you capture emotions so so well... look forward to the updates of this FF too... will this be on hold too till May?