~ArHi FF: The trodden paths~ ch4 pg69 NEW--13/7))

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truth1-1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

this is sooo good...i love the banner/siggy, especially arnav's pic in it!

thanks for the pm n i hope u update soon😊

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DarkDove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Hey Lyraa!

Wow! This looks damn interesting!

What happened to Khushi? And she was looking for a third star? She has a child!?

And Arnav watching them from a distance?

Love the lines which came along through blueish/purple...

This really seems interesting! Please update soon! hehhe joking! no pressure! I know you must be busy with exams ect...

I love your writing style!

xxHaffie

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blurey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

ohhh dats really grt👏

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aakriti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

heya

interesting start...

will look forward to reading further..

continue soon..

many thanks for the pm..: ]

and good luck for your exams...

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Hunnybunny3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Wow..if that's what you come up with in 5 mins then expectations are at an all time high ;0) Loved the prologue. Just trying to figure out who the 3rd star is. Does Khushi think he's dead? And in the banner khushi looks to be sitting in a wheelchair. Is she paralysed? Ooh too many questions... Please update soon and thanks for the pm.xx