PAYBACK - RTMC (Three Shot) Last part pg 8 - Page 5

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

RES ITS GOOD TO 1ST

i read it.

i wanna give a big comment.

so u need to wa8 till tomorrow...

iit dekar aa jaon pehle

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i just lov ur desc , i noe u noe dat, but still can't stop praising u ... thank u thank u 😳

i lov bonding of MIL n DIL...

BUT MUJHE VEER N ANU SCENE KE BINNA UD ADHORA LAGTA H ...

kya karo rtmc fans ko aaj kal sab khaali khaali lagta h...

pata nhi kab aayenge vapas!

so veer craked the deal...

i knew it...

i believe him...😊

ud soon, wid a veer n ananya scene...must...

actually i'm pretty releived ki finally main xam khatam ho gaya...so i shud upd8 by 2mrw😃

lov u . ud soon.

luv u too 😃

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

nice...thx di! (Can i call u di?)

veer was saved this time...

i hope he gives his lunch to some1 n gets scolding from that person the next day...😆

haha...😆 ...but Veer forgot & is already heading home...so dat is nt possible

love the bond between nivi n annu...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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Part 3

veer got the deal..nice...n a promotion too...

waiting for their confrontation...where anu will be thinking something else...n veer unknown abt his lunch...

u knw i had initially planned a scene whr both of dem wud say sorry 2gthr...& then Anu wud ask him y he ws sry & he wud say bcoz he 4gt da lunch...& wen he asks her...she'll be in a fix...

but i myself gt confused...😆...so i've written it a bit differently...hope u'll like it. 😃

continue soon...

Originally posted by: tejjo

very lovely part dear...
So she scared from veer...or veer even don't know abt lunch..
Oh im happy that veer got the project.,

amazing update
bt mujhe pm nhi mila ...this is not fair...lekin phir bhi meine padh liya...hahaha

waiting for their reaction
update soon
luv u

Originally posted by: prahelika

lovely part glossy😃... thx!

phew! thank god!my veer is saved from the aweful lunch anu made in purpose... i think u r only 1 who's relievd...evry1 wntd him to eat da lunch😆

ruby likes him😳...well who wouldn't like him?...silly me🤪...

ruby admires him...doen't seriously like him...hope i didn't mislead u wid my writing...& ofcourse who can escape Veer's charm?

😉

for the first time i liked that he forgot about the food made by his dearest wife...😆

and here anu taking precautions to protect herself from his wrath😆...

Nivi is a cool mom😎...love her...

but she did provoke her to some extent😆...

Veer reminds me of the veer from DV...*I miss those golden days😭*

now waiting for the next...

the image of VA dat i hv in mind is similar to DV...playful & loving...😊

plz update soon dear...

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Veer got the deal final and promotion too😃...

and here anu is restless thinking about the mishaps that could occur due to her little prank...😆

i'm waiting for part-B😳

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about the hint-

if I link up the two sentences quoted in italics then I can macome to only one conclusion that a doppleganger of Veer is coming😕...

ermm...plz excuse my over active brain...

pata nahi kya kya sochti rehti hoon...😆

I'm very eager for the unfolding of this mystery😳...update soon...

haha...i like the way u think...but apna Veer toh unique hai...no duplicates

mystery last part mein reveal hoga..hope u'll njy it 😃

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Awesome update but y did u stopped at dis point???

plz continue soon...

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

awesome update dear..😊