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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

dis ud was cute, and like like its style of writing...

anu can't focus on studies, poor gal...

but not evn so poor, she has a wonderful MIL...who loves her more than mother, dats cute!...😃...

loved their bonding.

i love the way u shoe the expression of the characters in here.👏

veer loves his mom n anu so much, that he kiss them before going for the meeting...

lovely veer.😳

even he use to be a cool dude in his boyhood, thats amazing,...😳...n now so responsible.😎

the way anu introduced her house to MIL is amazing again, actually i loved ur writing here, it surely impressed me.👍🏼

so lets see wat happens next...😆

but u noe! u made a real POPAT of us, we all expected a scene with veer eating that tragedy meal...

popat ho gaya hum sabka......

love the ud,

ud soon...

lov u🤗

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: glossyglassy

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Dhanvi

@Freethinker

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

wonderful update dear...thanks for pm...

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

wow what a lovely update
really loved it

bt why veer goes to lunch with ruby...he loves his wife na...to anu ke saath jana chahiye na...kuch romantic scene dekhne ko milte...chalo koi nhi

i read it twice ,u know i loved ur story

nivi n anu convo is vry nice
waiting 4 dharam n sia entry

update soon pls
thanks 4 pm
luv u

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Shreya

@sparksfly

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

editd ma comment 4 d previous ud...

for d 2nd ud will commnt l8r...xams...😭

hope u undrstnd...

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

amazing update dear...👏

but mere veer n anu ka together koi scene nahi tha...😔

but really liked it...to defend herself anu is using her sweet M-I-L...well she has brains...😆

n ruby misunderstood veer's invitation...well veer hai hi aisa akoi bhi deewana ho jaye...😉

n anu threatens him...that if he will not keep his things at place n didn't keep the house clean than she will not allow him to touch her...great girl...😆

wah anu kya raasta nikala hai apni bigde pati ko raaste pe laane ka...👍🏼...n nivi also knew this...

are wah nivi aunty kya baat kahi hai...absolutaly true...that's the time for anu n veer to get three...😳

n yup our anu is just like this...she changed veer's view towards girls...😊

but god knows...when they are going to be serious...

update soon...

luv u...😊

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

thanks for starting new RTMC ss, updates n pm
sorry for late comment
its amazing!
liked the style of ur writing
loved both veer n anu paybacks!!
this time u saved veer but anu will payback him
liked nivi being lovely MIL supporting her DIL
so anu is scared now!! n call nivi!!
loved home showing n kitchen convo between MIL N DIL
liked u used reference of DV in 21st Century partly
it was also amazing ff but disconitnued!1 hope it will too soon continue
so we know we are getting more n more paybacks of veer n anu!!
might be in that way ss will convert to ff

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glossyglassy

@glossyglassy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sparksfly
yay !!! new RT MC ss !!!
d concept is really nice n refreshng !!! 👏

i luvd it !!! ⭐️

both r njoyng marital bliss !!

par nok-jhok abhi cahl rahi hai !! oops...do u noe hindi ???

Veer ...is ...veer !!! 😆

so naughty !!!

well Ananya is also not less !! 😉

watng 2 c Veer's reactions !!

thnx 4 d PM !!!

Thx 4 liking da concept!

I think u hv already read my reply to rashmi'so u must be aware of my language proficiency'😆

Well it's true'Veer is Veer and Ananya is Ananya'well dat's y they make such an amazing pair!!

Thx 4 commenting inspite of ur xams!😃

Hope u'll like the 2^nd part also

Luv u'

P.S.-Y is ur id sparksfly? Is it related to dat taylor swift song? I'm just curious'

Edited by glossyglassy - 13 years ago

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glossyglassy

@glossyglassy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

dis ud was cute, and like like its style of writing...

anu can't focus on studies, poor gal...

but not evn so poor, she has a wonderful MIL...who loves her more than mother, dats cute!...😃...

loved their bonding.

i love the way u shoe the expression of the characters in here.👏

veer loves his mom n anu so much, that he kiss them before going for the meeting...

lovely veer.😳

even he use to be a cool dude in his boyhood, thats amazing,...😳...n now so responsible.😎

the way anu introduced her house to MIL is amazing again, actually i loved ur writing here, it surely impressed me.👍🏼

so lets see wat happens next...😆

but u noe! u made a real POPAT of us, we all expected a scene with veer eating that tragedy meal...

popat ho gaya hum sabka......

love the ud,

ud soon...

lov u🤗

Thx so much for ur comments…dey are lovely & always encourage one to write 😃

I'm glad u liked the descriptions…usually I'm not very good with them…but when I write about VA I feel I write better

Mera kisiko popat banana ka koi iraada nahi tha…when I had started the story I was going to make him eat that lunch but then I thought that it was sounding too much like boy versus girl…isliye socha ki kuch different likhna chahiye…😊

I hope you were not too disappointed…dnt worry…as I said Ananya wil hav her payback

& ya tamil telegu toh mujhe nahi aati…but I hav friends who know it😉

luv u...

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glossyglassy

@glossyglassy

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: ridzzi
amazing update dear...👏
but mere veer n anu ka together koi scene nahi tha...😔

but really liked it...to defend herself anu is using her sweet M-I-L...well she has brains...😆

n ruby misunderstood veer's invitation...well veer hai hi aisa akoi bhi deewana ho jaye...😉

n anu threatens him...that if he will not keep his things at place n didn't keep the house clean than she will not allow him to touch her...great girl...😆

wah anu kya raasta nikala hai apni bigde pati ko raaste pe laane ka...👍🏼...n nivi also knew this...

are wah nivi aunty kya baat kahi hai...absolutaly true...that's the time for anu n veer to get three...😳

n yup our anu is just like this...she changed veer's view towards girls...😊

but god knows...when they are going to be serious...

update soon...

luv u...😊