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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Certainly around and reading up your chats. I don't mind reading up your crazy suggestions Avi...

You should know by now that I'm slowly taking in all your snippets and working them into the story.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: ucompleteme

It's too early for that, hai na. He has just seen her for the first time. Abhi to thoda bonding etc baki hain. Maybe the wet hair scene is a dream he has after a little while. Don't mind me guys, since mine was a whirlwhind thing I always like the slow and easy type of relationships😉.
Where is our author, still out for her show? Kahi koi hero has not made an entry? H come back soon or I will start writing suggestions that will drive u crazy...😆


Avi...yes it is too early in the story...we were talking about the short scene...missing our author and the updates...need something to get more ideas...even if half the suggestions are crazy😆



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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

Certainly around and reading up your chats. I don't mind reading up your crazy suggestions Avi...

You should know by now that I'm slowly taking in all your snippets and working them into the story.



Hi Hasini 🤗...glad to see u...how is the workload ?...waiting for the update...any idea when it will be ?...




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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6qsu-3JjLxo[/YOUTUBE]

Another one of my random scenes...😆 Promise to write Part 2 of the story in the morning. Today is sheer indulgence.

In the middle of the night, Naina...rather Nanhi - he preferred calling his angel of mischief Nanhi now just as her mom did, unable to tolerate her imposing stares when he referred to her chavanni - ran out of the room without their knowing and it left them unguarded in the little space between them. The creaking of the door stirred her. With one hand rubbing her eyes, she rolled onto her stomach ready to tumble right back into the slumber from which she'd woken up and just then, in the gleaning through the haze of thick sleep, her eyes caught his face inches away from hers.

Much to her own surprise, she remained still, fluttering her eyes in an effort to clear her sight.

The table fan relentlessly swung to and fro in a semi-circle, sending tracks of the room air in their direction, his long curls suddenly flying away from his forehead, only to land thump down again in the next second. It was the first time she was watching him without his inquiring gaze fixed at her and so she looked on, taking in his angular jaw, the rasping of more than a 5' clock shadow there and the tuft of hair that perpetually came over the side of his face.

What made him a whole another person with Nanhi?, she asked herself remembering the evening they spent walking the streets of old lucknow, eating Qurbani with an embarrassing number of balloons tied to his wrist. She liked to think that he was only trying to give Nanhi a childhood that was free of the horrors that were around them. But just sometimes, like now when she was uninhibitedly raising herself on her elbow, she believed that he did the things he did because he saw himself in the small circle that she and Nanhi was made of.

In that small world of theirs which was as ephemeral as the times that lasted between the flap of a firefly's wings, she wanted to could let go. Bending down, she brushed a light kiss to his forehead while at the same time her fingers boldly, albeit with a shiver grazed his cheek.

"Promise me..." She whispered into the night, "you will be just as spiteful as you are always to me when you wake up..."

Her thumb stoked the remnants of a dimple beside his lips, as she said, "So I can kiss you for the times when you are not..."

That moment, she didn't fear he would wake up to her touch. He always slept like no one or nothing else existed besides him and Nanhi on that bed. She settled back into the pillow and in the shadows that the light played with, she watched him for a little while longer before her eyes closed down...

Forgetting the tinge of sindhoor that had marked his temple while she'd kissed him...

And the absent placing of her hand over his chest, to which he awakened the next morning. To find her confined to her side of the bed and yet overreaching to have her palm centered in the hollow of his chest.
Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Hi,
Well after reading this part I wonder , what is the status of the story? Did I miss something important? Are they already married, please explain.
About the writing , it was like one of the scenes that happens in midnight, the other half deep in sleep. And then it is easy it speak what you want to speak not keeping anything to your self.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
You didn't miss a thing Hamini...

I'm on a random scene writing spree...

Consider this as a scene from much ahead in the future, when they are married, but are yet to express their love for each other.
Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
nice scene. Our Leher being a little bold now, wonder how far along this is now. Nice music. Sorry about the PM thing. My hubby caught the bug from Ratna and Hima's family. Thank God he is not a baby about it but hate that it is going to ruin the weekend. What is Qurbani? It is not what I thought about it.
Edited by ucompleteme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
I'm talking about Khurbani ka Meetha...Its a Nawab special dessert.

Hope all of you feel better soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
i loved what leher said...

this scene in future... seems like is creating story for the present...

i like the chavanni part...😆...i could actually visualize Kunal Kapoor saying that...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Hasini 🤗...thank u for the awesome scene...how do u manage to write so beautifully everytime...felt like i was watching it ...Leher's convo and kiss when Dhruv was sleeping was lovely...wondering what his reaction will be to her hand on his chest and the sindhur on his forhead 😍...waiting for the update 😊


Avi...hope your husband gets well soon...Qubani ka meetha is a sweet made from dried apricots...here is the link for more info...









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