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jenny

@ajenn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

I like Ratna's idea of Leher transformation before and after. You should think of it.

H, that is a beautiful theme music for Dhruv-Leher. In fact that's my ringtone. The music is really soothing to listen.

Violin playing a major part in this update, it awakes the soul of listener's heart.

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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Beautiful music H
Dhruv is totally trying to avoid her but the rain getting them together was beautiful.
The rain must have washed away whatever facade Dhruv has been putting up and Leher saw his vulnerability.
Story is getting so interesting.
Sorry for disappearing
Seems like the flu season has started late this time
i am dealing with a houseful of sick people
Hope you are doing good H

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hamini_yash

@hamini_yash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Hi,

Asusual I don't have words to describe your update, it carries a strange mystery with it as if it doesnot exist , but you want us to read beyond the layers of words and understand things unsaid till now, its getting very interesting , do continue soon.

As for the soap, I started watching Na Bole tum after you mentioned it in this fiction.Its quiet ineteresting.

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749230

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

I hope all of you get the part that the update was just a random scene I felt like writing after hearing the theme music, I chose for them.

But yeah...we can always use this part somewhere after the story moves ahead a bit.

Right now Dhruv is still standing in the tea shop 😆 as the tea glass is continuing to roll on the floor and Leher is still watching all this in an uncalled for restlessness.

Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Hasini 🤗...sorry for the late comment...i totally understand what Hima is saying...this flu season is killing me 😕...the biggest baby in the house...my hubby is sick now ...he is driving me crazy 😡 😆...coming to the update...i understood it was inspired by the music...u did an awesome job of describing the music as part the scene...

There was music that could make the soul caught up in a trance, nearing a transparency that let others see through them, naked and breathing in its existence. And then there were the ones which he played in the glow of the night, like he was insistent on anchoring all of the world's sorrows onto her frail being, as if he meant for a new depth to the moments that separated them. She felt in every run of the bow over the tensile strings, a drift of melancholy and a withering that seemed to last without end and without her knowledge, she moved to the door.

Could clearly visualise the whole scene ...beautifully written my dear 👍🏼...so u decided to make Dhruv the violin player...waiting to see how and when this scene will come in the story...plz continue with your short and sweet updates...TC 😊

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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Dhruv is still standing n the tea shop
He better make a move soon.
Enough of contemplating.
Grab the opportunity and talk to Leher 😃.

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Hima

@Ramhari

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: --Ratna--
Hasini 🤗...sorry for the late comment...i totally understand what Hima is saying...this flu season is killing me 😕...the biggest baby in the house...my hubby is sick now ...he is driving me crazy 😡 😆

Ratna
u too
i totally understand ur situation.
Hope u keep yourself flu free
take care

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Ramhari

Ratna
u too
i totally understand ur situation.
Hope u keep yourself flu free
take care

Hima 🤗...thank u dear...so far so good...hope i escape it this time...coming to Dhruv...he will move when Hasini makes him move na 😆

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Hima

@Ramhari

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Hima 🤗...thank u dear...so far so good...hope i escape it this time...coming to Dhruv...he will move when Hasini makes him move na 😆

You are welcome Ratna
I sincerely hope and pray that u escape

Hope Dhruv gets one dhakka so that he directly lands near Leher
May be some of the evil family guys should come for Naina or Leher

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640638

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Ramhari

You are welcome Ratna
I sincerely hope and pray that u escape

Hope Dhruv gets one dhakka so that he directly lands near Leher
May be some of the evil family guys should come for Naina or Leher

It's too early for that, hai na. He has just seen her for the first time. Abhi to thoda bonding etc baki hain. Maybe the wet hair scene is a dream he has after a little while. Don't mind me guys, since mine was a whirlwhind thing I always like the slow and easy type of relationships😉.

Where is our author, still out for her show? Kahi koi hero has not made an entry? H come back soon or I will start writing suggestions that will drive u crazy...😆

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