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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#141

wow simply superb...👏

so mugz got a call from mehra arts and she accepted...she agreed...yipeee...

and mouli...bloody b!tch...she cheated him...whatever rajat did with her was good...no no not good it was gr8...she deserves it...chudail...

and rajat make that over...i am really jumping on his decision...good work raj...

and mugz...you know what me myself didn't want mugz to take raj's help...i want her to do something herself...but on the other option if mugz took his help then it will also help both of them to get close...well both the options were good...but lets see what is written for them...

continue soon...

luv u...😊

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samantha1987200

@samantha1987200

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Hi😊

I really love the update, the latter part was so emotional, really well written😊

Plz ud soon😊

Cheers!!!!😊

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#143

.res
loved it i mean i just love this part
bhot khush hun mein is part ko padh kar
i wish ki rajat ne 2 slap mare hote us mouli bitch ko one on each cheek i just hate her from first part idiot kahin ki
hw can she do this rajat...whom she love...she is really a witch

bt gud part is that ki rajat ne usse break up

n now at dis situation rt n mc need each others love n support...i wish rajat realize his luv 4 her...n mugs is so cute she helped him in every situation..dis is called true love

update soon
means vry soon
becoz i am vry excited to read nxt part

thanks 4 pm
luv u

Edited by tejjo - 13 years ago

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glossyglassy

@glossyglassy

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Lovely update

I really like the way u hv incorporated PRC into the story

And their 1st meeting waws so sweet and innocent

I hope after this heartbreak Rajat realises who he really loves

Upd8 soon

Thx for PM

Edited by glossyglassy - 13 years ago

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#145

it was superb
i loved the chapter
i could imagine whole scene
finally its over wow...
loved rajat n mugdha scene
awe so caring n touchy..
u portrayed maulis confusion really well
hatsoff to u

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dhwanimehta23

@dhwanimehta23

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#146

nice update!!
Finally Rajat broke up with that evil Mauli!!!
I think next update will be much more interesting!!!!😛😛😛

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Dhanvi

@Freethinker

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#147

was eagerly waiting for your update...loved it...

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Nandini

@Nandini25

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#148

Poignant update

so finally Mauli's true colors r revealed

well Rajat deserved that now he'll understand Mugdha's pain n how it feels 2 be heartbroken

I think now mugs will help him come out of his dejection n in this process they will come closer

Thank God this Mauli is out of the scene.

update soon

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#149

awesome just awesome!!!!!! I was dying to read this update.Thanx dear for such a lovely nd long update.

The flashback scene was too good, the conversation between little kids was cute nd innocent. They love each other. now rt is tasting his own medicine. the pain, the trauma mugz faced due to him , now he is going through it nd in this also he needs help of our mugz.

when dat new entry is coming i mean the another guys entry for mugz to make rt jealous???

plz ud soon nd take care.