SS: Part4 Avenging Angel (Arhi, A Princess' Wrath)

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Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

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emistry

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Posted: 13 years ago

That was really good! I cant wait to read part 5!!! 😊

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 13 years ago

good one - pls continue soon

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BSRaizada

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Posted: 13 years ago

So beautifully written. Plsupdate the nxt part soon

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Dee (Daisy)

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Posted: 13 years ago

Mary looks like I'm one of the first to read & comment. I was hoping to see your update soon and glad I checked.

This really is getting more interesting, glad to see Khushi finally not have anything to worry about regaring her own family and her status and was glad when she put Mami in her place.

Feel sorry for Arnav, looks like he's suffering for his misdoings and feels that there's no retribution for him, I was so sad to see him compare himself with his beastly father and glad that Nani could reassure him

Khushi's Chachu seems to be a very sensitive and sensible man and hope he'll be the one who helps reconcile and reunite Arnav and Khushi

Can't wait for the next update

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Parker27

@Parker27

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Posted: 13 years ago

Amazing update :) loved the last line . It reminded me of Harry potter !!

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subiscs

@subiscs

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Posted: 13 years ago

loved the update 😊 cant wait for chapter 5 😊

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Sumi

@mumz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hmmm nice to see the Awadh palace...(bara imambara) just visited that place last summer...loved the setting...Lucknow being my home town and all...there is a maze of corridors called the bhool bhulaiya if you don't know...the guide left us there and told us to find our way out...amazing experience..

Your story is building up quite nicely...feel for the broken Arnav and also Khushi who is caught between anger and love.

looking forward to the next part...

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fire.vs.ice

@fire.vs.ice

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved it!!!! Pleeez update soon!

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: mouse72
Hmmm nice to see the Awadh palace...(bara imambara) just visited that place last summer...loved the setting...Lucknow being my home town and all...there is a maze of corridors called the bhool bhulaiya if you don't know...the guide left us there and told us to find our way out...amazing experience..

Your story is building up quite nicely...feel for the broken Arnav and also Khushi who is caught between anger and love.

looking forward to the next part...

Ah yes, my research showed that a past Nawab commissioned that. The family doesn't exist now, but since I was showing that they do, I figured that would be their family home 😳 Funnily enough, Khushi references the bhul bhulaiya on her first visit to RM.

Could not have put their states better. Khushi is getting spastic like him. Mad one second and outpouring with love the next. He's getting more consistent. He is very sure of his love for her and puts her best interest first.