SS: Part4 Avenging Angel (Arhi, A Princess' Wrath)

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nareshSV

@nareshSV

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

WOW...POOR arnav and khushi why cant they simply express their feelings...

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: nareshSV
WOW...POOR arnav and khushi why cant they simply express their feelings...

If only it was so easy for them 😕

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devishree

@devishree

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

it was superb and emotional

the choice of words pricked my heart

i loved it

cant wait for the next part

poor souls arhi and nice chachu

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@debby_11

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

wow...i loved the way their emotions were displayed ...

i know that he will win her back...hope he realizes that soon that even she loves him...

i loved it completely...continue super soon please :)

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Alice

@alice54

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Awesome Update!!!!!!!!!!

The part where Kushi was looking at him from the top and what she felt at that moment was very beautiful...it reached out to me...

And i really like the nawab he is just too sharp!!!!

Their past also was interesting...

continue soon...

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Suchi

@ChitraF

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Beautiful update.. felt bad for Arnav.. hope Nawab will bring them together...

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VISH

@Vish1435

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

love ur story please add me to pm list.

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JV21

@JV21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

beautiful update...i just loved the last line..." he has his mother's eyes and they do not lie" looks like Darya (Khushi's) chachu is going to play in now...update soon!

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shwetachauhan

@shwetachauhan

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

oh i am beginning to feel really bad for arnav now!!! i think the nawab will be the one who will bring them together!!! he cant stop talking of arnav's mother himself, seems like he knows what love is!! 😃
a great update again!!! do let the fifth part come as soon as possible!!!

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Ashi

@TheThoughtCrime

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Hmm, I really like the first 2 parts of this OS.

IMO part 3 & 4 are sounding forced. Or maybe I just don't buy this royal/princess take on her story.

Firstly, all the dialogue's by Arnav about her 'aukat' in the first months were just hogwash, just a made up reason by him so that he could rationalize why she 'affected' him so much. ASR is nonchalant & cynical, so why did he care about this 'aukatless' small town girl? Why did he think about her or care for her?Taunting her about her 'aukaat' was like a defense mechanism.

So, now Khushi throwing her so called royal status in his face sounds forced. She'd never do it. It's not in her character.

I see you show her suffering too, for being mean to him. It's in her character. That is good.

As for Arnav now getting out of her life before he further ruins it, reminds of Judith McNaught's novel 'Something Wonderful' when Jordan asks Alexandra for a divorce because he thinks he has ruined her life by not believing her. It's one of my favourite books btw.

Edited by Dinarochka - 13 years ago