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indy12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#851

part 11 pls more arhi 😳

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Jalebi Jane

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Posted: 13 years ago

#852

'You like wearing my clothes, do you Khushi?'

'Na...nahin...woh.. humare...''.

He ignored the mumbled explanations and approached his prey. The image of her nude body wrapped in his robe ensured that he would never look at the garment in the same way ever again.

'Does it make you feel closer to me?', he grabbed her chin in his hand and caressed the satin skin.

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I loved that scene above! So sensual, yet subtle.

Your writing is really strong---not sure why you are so modest about it! Your scenes have a foundation in the real--how the characters speak, react, move--they seem three dimensional to me. Well done!

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#853

Loved it yet again. You manage to write the most normal scenes so intimately. I am not evening talking about the romantic scenes. Loved the part about spraying NK and Mary and her little lamb. Just cute and subtle comedy. Arnav and Khushi were great at usual. Keep it up 👍🏼

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Sonu

@applenpeaches

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Posted: 13 years ago

#854

off to manali... 😃

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arshia

@ashvez

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Posted: 13 years ago

#855

Basab...that was so adorable and sexy.The more he makes it clear to her about being one, the more she gets nervous.He should just play along...and she would get there.

the waist hug was so sweet and Lovable.

Thanks for the update.

Ash.

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hodan1987

@hodan1987

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Posted: 13 years ago

#856

I liked it…didn't understand the hindi sentences but I kinda of got the gist of it. Can't wait for the honeymoon😍

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Yazzy91

@Yazzy91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#857

absolutely loved the update!! finally they are going off to their honeymoon! can't wait to see what happens!!! xx

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yusam

@yusam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#858

THE LAST PART WAS THE TOPPING OVER DA YUMMMY CAKE.. SOO CUTE N ADORABLE.. HE JUST CANNOT WAIT TO GO TO THE HONEYMOOON.. UPDATE SOON HUNN... THNX FOR DA PM.. :)