SS: Wooing Khushi: Part 11 updated on Page 147

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#861

awesome update loved it that was so cute glad she told him of her right while claiming his clothes loved it thanks for the pm

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nancy_ipkknd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#862

Awesome! Loved his promise of him exercising his rights later...

And Arnav looking 'down' and telling later was downright hilarious :-)

Super wirting as always 😛

nancy

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namedx

@namedx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#863

Fabulous update! Same here, i've pretty much been stalking your thread to see whether or not you'd updated! Loved the wry humour in this one, too good! x

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queenie11

@queenie11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#864

I loved it! I really really enjoy how you're building this up to their actual suhaag raat on their honeymoon - I'm very excited to read the next installment!

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#865

I loved it! Beautifully written!

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saba

@ASR6262

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Posted: 13 years ago

#866

AWESOME CONTINUE SOON AND THANK U FOR PM ME WAITING FOR NEXT ONE 😳

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#867

This was such a great but short uodate , I am loving this ss so much that I can barely wait for ur next update.I am so excited abt this honeymoon

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#868

awww...dat was sooo sweet...the story changed from fun n romantic to very intense romance...loved i ...thnx 4da pm dear...

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Rad

@radix

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Posted: 13 years ago

#869

thanks for PM dear and beautiful update

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Inaya Haya

@lilmzsunshine

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#870

I thought it was pretty good ... you started it off quite naughty, but with the right emotions too - she's new at it, he has to practice self control, plus they have a tumultuous history between them ... so slow and steady will win this one.

I liked the hug in the end, but need to understand what brought it on ... don't want to read too much into it, just yet. Lets see what caused it. Hope you elaborate on each of their thoughts - why Arnav hugged, and why Khushi returned it ...

Waiting for the next part.

-S