Pyaar Ki Kahani...Kuch Sunni Kuch Sunani! - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
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kiran its a wonderful part really enjoyed it
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
kiran dear just superb too gooddd..... i totally loved it....... 👏
hmm tho tumne sujal aur mehru ka intro bhi diya aur unhe dance partners bhi bana diya ... coolllllll....... 😃 ab chalo un dono ko jaldi se life partners bhi bana do........ 😆
kiran plz jald se jald continue karna........ 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome story kiran 👏
cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😃

ohh... now i like it even better....

cont soon

Edited by destinyz - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wah fantastic part kiran 👏 👏 👏
gr8 na sujal & mehru dance partner simply gr8 😊
cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey just read ur whole fanfic...its just brilliant!! continue soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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NICE PART....gud job.....cna't wait 4 da nxt part...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Kiran dear too good.. 👏 Simply superb... 👏
Do cont soon.... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi ppl...hanks fro comments....so here is the enst part....hope u like it even better....commentofy!

The next dya, everyone reaches the college at the same time...First come Adi,Sneha and Kavya....Angad enters a little while later...
All 4 are sitting in the cafetaria...waiting for their class....all take Maths class together
Outside the college, a black car stops....its A Mercedes
Sujal looks at his sis sitting with him....Diya
Sujal: so....we are here...
Diya: yeah..
Sujal: chalo have a nice day...Bye!
Diya gets out of the car then leans in frnt of the car to talk
Diya: hey Bhai...i was wondering...ap hi pick kerein gay na college ke baad?
Sujal: haan...wahan se airport jo jana hai akhatay
Diya: Ab Rishi ko na bhejiye ga...plzzz
Sujal laughs...
Sujal: tumhain late ho raha hai...bye
Diya: Bye
She runs up the stairs....and into the college
Sujal is about to start the car when he sees two girls coming in front...
One is wearing a blue coloured shalwar kamiz....and another walking with her
She is wearing an orange coloured sarri...and her hair are all open, with beautiful earrings...and she is wearing high heels..wearing shades
After seeing the girl...he was just unable to start the car
The girl in blue spotted the car...came towards him and leaned in front of the window
Anju: Sujal Bhaiyaa!!!
Sujal: Hi Anju....kaisi ho tum?
Anju: bilkul theek...
Sujal: let me get outta the car...
He gets out of the car...and leans against the car door...talking to Anju...and with her was standing the same girl, checking some files
Anju: office ja rahay hain?
Sujal: hmmm.....abhi kuch dair baad interviews hain na naye employees ke saath
He spares a glance to the girl...in the sarri
Anju: 0h...main ne intrudce hi nahi karwaya...Sujal Bhaiya yeh hain meri cousin Mehru Di
The girl takes of her shades with a jerk of her head
Sujal is enthralled with all her acts...jab woh ussay ghaur se dekhta hai to ussay woh jaani pehchaani si lagti hai
Sujal: arey ap....
Mehru: oh....AP!!
Anju: ap jantay ho aik doosrey ko?
Mehru: ANJUU!!! Kal party main...remember....
Anju: oh haan...
Sujal: kaisi hain ap?
Mehru: main bilkul theek hoon...
Sujal: so...u r a student here???
Mehru laughs out aloud...he is attracted with her laugh
Mehru: nahi nahi student nahi...part time teacher hoon...
Sujal: TEACHER?
Mehru: kyun...lagti nahi hoon kia?
Sujal: obviously not....ap bhut young lagti ho
Mehru: thanks...actually main yahan secnd year students ki teacher hoon...nayi employee hoon...internship ker rahi ooon
Sujal: aahaan...
Mehru: aur abhi mujhey aik company main apply kerna hai....i am a fashion deigner..so i am going to work in a company if i get the job
Sujal: i see...
Mehru: i know yahan ziada scope nahi hai iss ka...lekin mein ne Dubai se further studies ki hain...i have even handled 5 shows on my own....fashion shows
Sujal: kaun si company main apply ker rahi hain ap?
Mehru: abhi to aj ke liye PROVOGUE fashion house main interview hai....naam sunna hai ap ne?
SUjal smiles
Sujal: jee...naam suna hai
Anju laughs
Anju: DII!!!! Ap bhi na...
Mehru: kia...kia hua?
Anju: Provogue Fashion House ke MD....Sujal garewal..yehi hain
Mehru: kiaa??? i mean...ap?
Sujal: jee main...
Mehru: i am so srry...mujhey pata nahi tha...
Anju": di main chalti hoon...Bye Bhaiya!
She leaves....
Sujal: iss main sorry ki kia baat hai...waisay bhi ap kal se office ajaiye ga
Mehru: KIA?
Sujal: interiew ki zaroorat nahi...u r absolutely fit for the job...
Mehru: lekin...
Sujal:lekin wekin kuch nahi....ap ne apnay barray main mujhey jo bataya hai bhut hai...no degrees no certifictaes
Mehru: mein aissay kaisay...?
Sujal: look....as the ehad of Fashion Department, mujhey aik aissay employee ki zaroorat hai jo experienced ho....aur saath hi main fashion sense khud bhi rakhta ho....and i must say...u are a purely Indian fashionable, beautiful woman
Mehru blushes at this
Mehru: phir bhi...formality ke lie aj ana to parray ga
Sujal: haan...woh to hai...to ap ajaiye ga
Mehru: aik baat boloon...
Sujal: jee bolain...
Mehru: main ne kabhi nahi socha tha keh ap itni barri company ke head honnay ke bawajood itnay humble hon gay
Sujal raises his eyebrow
Mehru: i mean...ap jiss tarah mujh se baat ker rahay hain...pata chlata hai keh achay khandan se hain...lekin ap ki baaton se yeh nahi lagta keh ap kitnay barray businessman hain
Sujal: tahnks...
Mehru: aik aur baat...
Sujal: bolain...
Mehru: ap mujh se age main barray main...main to ap ko ap boloon gi....lekin ap mujhey ap na kaha karain
Sujal: kyn?
Mehru: mujhey acha nahi lagta keh koi mujh se barra aur bhut respectable mujhey ap kahay
Sujal: theek hai...jaisa ap kahain
Mehru frowns
Sujal: i mean jaisa tum kaho..
mehru: better...aik aur baat
Sujal: bolain...
Mehru: main office ke bahir ap ko Sujal bulla sakti hoon...
Sujal: jo bulana chahay bulla lain
Mehru: Thanks...
Sujal: ab main kuch bolloon?
Mehru: jee...
Sujal: aik to....tum bolti bhut ho...doosra...tum sach main bhut khubsurat ho....aur sab se important...tumhain latee ho raha hai aur mujhey bhi..to see u in office
Mehru: OH!! theek hai...see u...Sir
Sujal smiles and gets inside...Mehru looks at him leave then smiles
After the car has gone....she moves inside the college...still in a haze...she dint know she would get the jobb so easily

CANTEEN:
Diya, Kavya, Angad, Sneha and Adi are sitting...drinking milkshakes
Kavya: to assignment complete ker li Sneha?
Sneha: haan...yaar bhut hi mushkil thi...aik lafz jo samajh aya ho
Angad: kaun sa assignment?
Adi: yaar woh Sir ne diya tha na...Maths wala
Diya: oh nooo!!! Main ne nahi kiya...
Kavya: dont worry....
Diya: worry kaisay na karoon?
Kavya bends down, opens his bag and take out a booklet
Kavya: main ne ker liya tha tumharay liye
Diya looks at him with her mouth open
Diya: tumhain kaisay pata tha keh main ne nahi kia?
Kavya: bass....mujehy pata tah keh tum nahi karogi
Kavya then hands her te booklet...she sees taht its all complete
Diya: Kavya......thank u sssssssssssssoooooooooooooooo much...i lurrrrvveee u!
Kavya: reallY?
Diya: serious na ho jana...mazak ker rahi thi...tum se to darr hi lahgta hai...pata nahi kab kia soch lo
Everyone laughs at this....
Sneha: yaar yeh Anju kahan reh gayi?
Angad: ummmm....shayed aj late aye
Adi: tumhain kaisay pata?
Angad: nahi kal woh apni uss cousin ke ghar shift hui thi na...shayd late ho jaye..guess
Kavya: hmmm...kafi information hai tumhain
Diya: acha suno...kal tum logon ko maza aya na party main?
Sneha: bhut ziada...
Kavya: it was hell lot of fun!!
Adi: tumhain gift pasand aya?
Diya: oh yeah...thank u so much..i loved the gifts
She spares a look towards Kavya and says very silentluy
Diya: tumhara gift sabs e ziada pasand aya ( a photo frame with their photos)
Sneha: lo...Anju agayi!
Anju comes towards the table...then sits down hurriedly
Anju: Hi pplll!!!!!
Diya: tu itni late kyun ayi?
Anju: yaar Di saath thi...i have got a wonderful news forr u ppl...this is sooo shocking
Angad: bolo na kia hua?
Anju: guess who is ur new teacher for Fashion Arts?
Sneha: bol na kaun hai
Just then Mehru enters the canteen area...she is holding some files in her hannds...she spots Anju on the table and starts walking towards them
The final year students are looking at her as if she is someone outta the world
Guy1: yaar yeh nayi student kaun hai?
Guy2: jo bhi hai....hum se to young hi hai
They are sitting on the table next to Anju's
Anju smiles at listening t this
Mehru reaches the table...greets everyone...then bends down to talk to Anju...Angad gets up and gives her a seat...she sits down after thanking him...then starts talking
Mehru: hi evryone
evr1: Hi!!!
Anju: Di ap sab ko janti ho na...Sneha, Adi, Angad...Kavya...aur yeh hai...Diya!
Mehru: Hi Diya!
Diya is eyeing her with a deep look
Diya: Hi
Mehru: sorry main tumhain kal nahi mill payi....main ayi thi kel birthday per jaisay hi milnay lagti kuch ho jata aur hum na mill paye
Diya: no problem...abhi to mill rahay hain na...
Mehru: Anju...mujhey tumhain bhut achi news sunani hai
Anju: bolo bhi Di...
Mehru: mujhey job mil gayi!!
Anju: WHAT??? itni jaldi? kaisay?
Mehru: bass...Sir ne na certificates dekhey na degrees...kuch questions kiye aur kaha...kal se office ajana
Anju: WOW! That's great...
Mehru: phir bhi formality poori kerne aj jaon gi office....appointment aur contract letter mill jaye...phir kal se job
Angad: thats great enws! kaun se office mein apply kiya tha?
Mehru: Provogue Fashion House...uss ke head hain na...Sujal Garewal...unhi ne job di hai
All eyes turn from Mehru to Diya
Diya: what?
Mehru: kia hua??
Diya: ap ko Bhai ne job di hai?
Mehru: Sujal tumharay BHAI hian?
Diya: fortunately...yes...lekin Bhai ne pehley to kabhi kisi ko aissay job nahi di...
Mehru: what do u mean?
Diya: matlab...Bhai harr employee ka pehley poora bio-data lete hain..certificates, degrees, experience...ap ko itni jaldi job kaisay mill gayi?
Mehru shrugs her shoulders..
Mehru: thats wat surprised me..
Diya: phir to ap main kuch bhut special hoga jo Bhai ko bhut pasand aya,...isi liye to itni jaldi job mill gayi...anyways Congrats
Everyone congrats Mehru...still she is confused....after 4-5 minutes she gets up
Mehru: mujhey late ho raha hai...mujhey Sir se baat kerni hai classes ke barray main
She leaves...
Kavya: Anju....tum ne bataya nahi keh tumhari cousin college join ker rahi hai....kaun se year main hai?
Anju laughs
Anju: stupid...thats the surprise...woh student nahi teacher hain
every1: WHHHHAAATTTT???
Anju: yeah...internship ke liye woh college mein part-time job ker rahi hain...woh bhi Fashion Arts ki teacher
Sneha: meaning...Mrs. Kakaar ki jagah Mehru Di teacher ayi hain
Anju nods
Sneha: WOW!!! itni young teacher...maza ayega
Diya: well...she sure is now in our lives...24/7
Anju gives her a look
Kavya: main bhi aker Fashion Arts ki class le sakta hoon?
Anju: kyun?
Angad: yaar humain bhi itni young aur pyari teacher se parhanay ka haq hai
All laugh
Sneha: chalo yaar..late ho raha hai...class main chalo
Sneha, Anju and Diya get up to go to their classes
As soon as they leave..many guys come over to the guys
Guy1: yaar woh larki sarri main..kaun se year main hai?
Guy2: nayi entry hai?
Adi: jee nayi hain..lkein TEACHER ke torr pe
Everyone is surprised

Class:
Sneha, Anju and Diya come out of the class after attending their lesson
Sneha: i must say Anju...she really knows what she is tecahing
Diya stays quiet
Anju: lets wiat for her to come out...
Mehraal comes out of the class...gathering her files
She gets out of the class, doesnt see Anju and Co. anywhere and starts walking down the corridor
Anju: Diii!!!
mehru turns around
Mehru: how was it? theek tha na....
Sneha: it was great...
Anju: awesome,...humain pehley kabhi itna maza nahi aya Fashion Arts main
Diya: good job...
Mehru: thanks...
Anju: so..u going to the office now di?
Mehru: college main tum mujhey MAAM bulaya karo (with a mock imitation of teachers)
Anju: ohhh!!! ohk Ma'am
Mehru laughs
Mehru: nahi nahi its ok....haan main abhi office ja rahi hoon...college ke baad tumhain driver pick ker ke ghar le jayega..ok?
ANju hugs her
Anju: ok bye...best of luck!
Mehru: Bye!!
She leaves the corridor and moves out...
Dooo comment
Kiran
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 Mar gayi!!!Itni acchi story!!!! 😃 😃 😃

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