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Posted: 19 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: cool_SK

kiran
its tooooo fabolous
gr88888 haannn
abh agla part jaldi likho
its tooooo intresting
👏

lol
ana

hehehe ana....sambhalo feelings ho..lolz....acha acha post kerti hoon...thanks!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: sun_423

kiran congo dear tumne aaj apni fourth fanfic start ki hain.. yaar how do you manage t 4 of them humse tho ek hi fanfic sambhali nahi jaathi... 😃
anyway a tooo good begining me tho just loved it... 👏 waise i have a doubt who is jasmine i mean who is playing sneha bajaj ??? 😕 😕
ab please agla part jaldi post karo aur us mein hero aur heroine ka intro do... 😉

hehehe....sur...bass yehi to raaz hai...bata diya to kaisay chalay ga..loolz😆...

Acha yara..>Sneha wohi wlai hai jo Kasauti main ati hai na...Prerna ki beti....😃😃...

Hero heroine...humaray...hmmm...dekh ajatay hain!!!!😆😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeev1

kiran tumhara sitak gaya hai kya....fourth story and your exams are coming.... 😡 ...parhai kaun karega 😆 😆 ...waise its cool....becahar kavya..reham kar yaar sharif insaan par 😛 ..her heroine ki entry ka tak hai? 😛

farayyy.......tum bhi?😕...yaar eggjams se ziada important hai yeh...😆😆😆....wailay logon ki representative hoon main...wailapan dikhana hai..😆😆...hehehe...yaar bass kavya...i lve his role....tumharay se milta julta, luza sa...hahahahaha😃😃...bass parho..attay hi hain...HERO HEROINE!!!!!!😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
ok ppl...so i am posting my story now....plzpzlpzlz give ur comments...!

This part is dedicated to farah, ana, surya, shruti,kulbin, sanayyy and two of my other friends: Anushka and Anum....lub ya all!!!!!

The first week of colleg passes by very quickly...they have become good friends and quite inseparable
One day, al of them are sitting in the canteen after the classes have finished
Anju: i guess humain abhi nikalna chahiye takkay jaldi pohanch jaye...
Diya: tujhey kia jaldi hai?
Anju: yaar...tumhai nahi pata na....abhi to main hostel main reh rahi hoon lekin do teen dinoon baad main Mehru Di ke ghar shift ho jaon gi...packing kerni hai
Sneha: main aon help kerwanay?
Anju: nahi its ok...Di aker help kerwa dein gi aj
Diya: hey...tum sab ko yaad hai na kal mere ghar party hai?
Angad, who had just come and sit down syas
Angad: party...kiss liye?
Diya: mera kal birthday hai...
Angad: wow...cool....
Diya: aur kal Bhai ne company ki kisi success ki bhi party deni hai...to hum ghar per sarri party celebrate kerein gay
Adi: tumhara bhai bhi hai?
Anju: Adi...bhai bhi nahi Bhai hi hai
Adi: matlab?
Kavya: Diya ki zindagi ka sab se stabilizing factor uss ka bhai hai...Sujal
Sneha: aur yeh un ke beghari nahi reh sakti...
Diya:obviusly..mere liye mere mom, dad, bhai behen sab wohi hain
Angad: hmm...interesting
Diya: so...all of u are cordially invited to my birthday party tomorow
Anju: Diya..main Mehru Di ko saath la sakti hoon na? actually woh abhi yahan ayi hain Dubai se to un ke yahan koi friends nahi hain...
Diya: yeah yeah sure...
Angad: well Anju....tumhari yeh cousin excatly kaun hain>
Anju: kyun...tum ne janam patri match kerwani hai....
Angad: out of curtsy pooch raha tha...
Kavya: acha Diya...to hum sab kal time per ajayen gay
Diya: Kavya...plz time se pehley na ana...(hahahhaha...laughs)
Kavya: mazak urra rahi ho?
Diya: nahi nahi..laad ker rhai hoon
Kavya: sachi?
Diya: wait,...mera cell bajj raha hai...ruko
She picks up her phone
Diya: hello...oh hi bhai...haan theek hai....ok...no prob...jaldi aiye...bye
Sneha: kia hua?
Diya: bhai keh rahay hain keh woh mujhey pick kerne arahay hain...Rishi ne meri garri kharab ker di servicing ke liye gayi hai
Adi: Rishi?
Diya: mera driveer...and the most irritating person alive
Sneha: i guess ab humain bhi chalna chhaiye..
Diya: so all of u be ther.e..ok..bye
She leaves the canteen...
Anju: main bhi nikalti hoon warna bus nikal jayegi
Kavya: jaan main tumhai drop kerta hoon na...(acting romantic to tease her)
Anju: acha..Diya kia chali gayi...tum mujh se romantic honnay kerne ki koshish ker rahay ho
Kavya: nai tum to meri behen jaisi...
Anju:just kiddin yaar...Kavya tum jao main chali jaon gi...ok
Kavya: theek hai..me leaving..bye ppl
All: Bye....
Anju: ok Sneha bye...
Angad: main drop ker deta hoon Anju...
Anju: no thanks...tum ajo main chali jaon gi
Angad: as u wish
They both leave for their ways...
now Sneha and Adi are left
Adi: aj main tumhain drop ker det ahoon...chalo
Sneha: pagal ho kia?
Adi: kiun?
Sneha: mom ne mujhey heavy bike per dekh liya to sooli per charha dein gi
Adi: kissay?
Sneha: tumhain...
Adi: magar kiun?
Sneha: mom hates heavy bikes...
Adi: to pagal main tumhain gahr se door drop keroon ga na
Sneha: pakka?
Adi: tumahri qasam...ab torr bhi nahi sakta
She smiles and bth leave..
In the meantime, Anju is rushing towards the bus station, but incidentally she misses her bus
Now its very hot, and she feels like fainting
Just then, a car comes and stops in front of her, and Angad comes outta the car
Angad: mujhey pata tha keh tumhari bus miss ho jayegi, issi liye main agaya
Anju: (thinking) issi ki qammi thi...
Anju: thanks lekin mein next bus ka intezar ker loon gi
Angad: next bus...jahan takk mujhey pata hai aik ghantay baad ayegi...uss aik ghantay main garmi aur ho jayegi, tumhara makeup kharab ho jayega aur kia pata bus millay ya phir chali jaye..iss liye behtar hai keh main tumhain drop ker doo
Anju: (thinking) kuch ziada hi over efficient ha...(smiles fakely then says) thanks a lot....
She sits in the car and starts looking out of the window
Angad: yahan se left lena hai na...
Anju: tumhain kaisay pata?
Angad: woh...main ne tumhain hostel jattay huay dekha tha iss liye...(casuallY)
Anju: hmmm.....waisay ab to main hostel se shift ho rahi hoon
Angad: (at once) kyun? kahan ja rahi ho...
Anju: mein ne bataya tha na...meri cousin hain..unhi ke saath shift hor ahi hoon
She starts looking out of the windw
In the meantime...Anju's dupatta slips over the gear handle...Angad doesnt see this and puts his hand on the handle to change the gear
Anju looks at this aat once and gets very angry, thinking that he intentionally did it
Anju: garri roko...
Angad: kia?
ANju: main ne kaha garri ROKO!!!
Angad: lekin hua kia?
Anju: GARRI ROKO!!!
He stops the car, in the middle of a sunsaan road
Anju gets out and starts walking quickly while Angad is walking behind her in confusion
Angad: Anju hua kia yeh to batao?
Anju: ghalti ki main ne jo tums e lift le li...tum to pata nahi kia kia soch rahya thay....chi!!!
Angad: ab aissa kia ho gaya?
Anju: mujhey baat nahi kerni iss barray main...main yahan se chali njaon gi...thanks a lot for ur concern!
Angad: Anju emri baat to...
Anju: bass .....dont dare take my name again...BYE!!
She runs to the otehr side of the road and disappears round the colony corner
Cut to College
Diya is still waiting for her bhai to come, when a car comes and stops in front of her
She hurriedly sits in the car, as the car belongs to her brother
Diya: hey BHAI!!11 (she says without looking)
Voice: Hi!
Diya: TUM???
Rishi: haan Diya main...
Diya: yeh Diya kia hai....mujhey MAAM bulaya karo samjhay
Rishi: yes Mam
Diya: Bhai kahan hain?
Rishi: Sir ko koi zaroori kaam tha iss liye mujhey bheja
Diya: meri garri ka kia hua?
Rishi: 2 haftay lagay gain theek honnay main
She traveld quietl back home...
When she enters the house, she is quite hungry
She goes upto her room to change, when there is a knock on the door
Diya thinks its her bro so she hurriedly opens the door
Instead its her naukrani, Charru....
Diya: kia hai?
Charru: maim sahab khana....
Diya: laga do..bhai annay wallay hain
Charru: nahi woh kahan nahi banaya
Diya: kyun nahi banay?
Charru: Sir ne kaha tha keh attay huay khud le ayen gay
Diya; theek hai jao!
She closes the door...again there is a knock on the door
Its Toooshar, her naukar(jharroo wala)
Diya: kia problem hai?
Tushar: kamra saaf karna hai
Diya: thanku very much....koi zaroorat nahi hai
Tushar: kyun?
Diya: meri marzi...jao yahan se
Tushar: jee?
Diya: samajh nahi ati...JAOO!!!
She closes the door again
Again there is a knock on the door
SHe opens the door, then turns around without looking
Diya: baqwas kero kia museebat hai.....
Voice: ummmm...Diya???
She turns around at once....

Aggay kia hoga, kaun hoga, kaisa hoga?lolz 😆 ...parhtay rahiye, comment kertey rahiye....
Love Kiran
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr888 parttt kiran loved both the partss the story is awesome 👏 👏 👏.......
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
Kiran nice part 👏 ..when is Sujal and Mehraal coming though????? lol introduce them soon....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
well i guess agay obviously sujal hi hoga...omg rishi tooshaar our charu jharu ko naukar bana dia...i cudn't stop laughin 😆 ....keep it up
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
kiran dear such mein bohat zabardast... 👏 tussi tho ek dum great ho.... 👏 👏 👏
charu , rishi ,tushaar ko naukar bana diya... 😆 ek kaam karo in naukaro mein ek aur naam add kar do swayam ka........ 😆
Sujal and Mehraal kahaan hain.. 😭 😭 😭 please un dono ka intro jaldi se do... 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Great story kiran. Waitng 4 sujal's entry in the next part. Jaldi post karna
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
Kiran dear superb, simply fantastic part... 👏
coz Tushaar & Charu r naukar...hahaha 😆
omg Sujal ki entry pe Pause kiya... 😉
nywys can't wait long so plz post the next part soon...
😊

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