Lovestories...2011 !! THREAD 2 pt 18 pg 27 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrast on new thread Mishty

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratulations On The New Thread
Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CONGRATS FOR THE NEW THREAD

THEY ARE SO AWARE OF EACH OTHER, BOTH ARE STEALING GLANCES AT EACH OTHER
BUT IT IS ALL MAAN'S FEELINGS
WHAT DOES GEET FEE
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congratulation for new thread
awesome part
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Congrats 4 new thrd. NICE UPDT.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Finly got a grab on LS-2011 now
hushhh...

N abt the lst prt...
Omggg gudness...maan lost in her...wen will dis casonova realise
he is fallin fr an angel...
Luvd it...nxt soon plz

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Part 17



a thoughts lit up in geet's mind as she smiled widely and announced, "mere paas ek idea hai..."

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Morning arrived n dey were taken to siddhi-vinayak mandir..deir hearts felt at bliss and peace as dey entered SIDHHI-VINAYAK mandir.aftr bowing deir heads in front of LORD GANPATI, den made a group sit in outer shed.sam smiled as he noticed geet's head covered wid dupatta.

"yahan par sirf ek hi ladki well cultured hai.." said sam casually

gals looked at him confused n den checked each other to find d difference, piya rolled her eyes as she d only difference was geet's head dat was covered wid dupatta..

geet smiled as knew sam refered to her, "aisa kuchh nahi hota sam...its just different lifestyles.."

piya agrred instantly, "exatcly, we dnt hav our heads covered, doesn't mean we dnt believe in god.."

sam got a bw, "okk ladies..i got d point..now plzz dnt bash me.."

maan smirked, "u deserve dat dude..for irritating princess piya.." to which abhay rolled his eyes n gave up, knowing dey wud never be at good side..

piya twisted her lips and thought of not fighting, for a change..

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a day went very well, visting so much other places and finally in d night, dey got very special dinner arranegemtn n were left to hav fun for sum times, as d teachers also celebrated deir trip..

d group was just chit-chatting but maan's wasn't in mood to let go of his chance.he consciously helf geet's hand.geet looked at him confused wanting to be answered. Instead, maan signalled her to keep quite and dragged her to tarrace and deir hotel..

both giggled as deir reached tarrace

"maan tum bhi na..is taraf mujhe khich kar lane ki kya jarurat thi...wo log pareshan ho jayenge ke hum dono kahan gayab ho gaye..." asked geet, still panting...

maan smirked, "dats d fun yaar..let dem search us...i had cum here last night...just see dere.."

saying so..he convinced her to close her eyes and took her to d end of tarrace. geet slowly opened her eyes and was left specchless...d mumbai in d night looked like a city of dreams..d lights were spread so beautifully it looked like sum1 has decorated his dream home for special function...d spectacular necklace of mumbai was decorated wid unlimited vans dat were continuousally drove to deir respective destinations...every looked dreamy and unbelieveble...

" mene etna sundar..aaj tak kuchh bhi nahi dekha..." mumbled geet lost in d beauty..

maan smiled at her facial expressions, "dekha..agar me tumhe yahan nahi lata...den u wud hav missed dis..."

geet nodded her head wid a smile again looked at d beautifull and colorfull mumbai..

"tum mumbai to kayi baar..aaye ho ge na.." asked geet curiously..

maan smiled as he simply bent dow a itle from tarrace and answred, "haan..kayi baar...mumbai me humara ek banglow hai..to hum visit karte rehte hai.."

geet got really excited, "sach me...yahan par tumhara ghar hai ?..." maan giggled at her excitement for such a small thing n giggled, "haan baba..agar kal possible huva..i vil definitely take u all dere.."

"pakka.." asked geet excitedly

"PAKKA.." maan giggled..

geet smiled as she once again stared at d beauty so did maan...

"tumhe pata hai maan...papa ke jane ke baad..dis is my 1st trip.." geet said as her eyes filled up..

maan instantly put his hand on hers and he was dwelled in her beautidull teary eyes, "geet..its ok..calm down.."

geet walked a litle away from him, "papa meri har khwahish puri karte the...aur mumma..mumma ne bhi humesha meri har khushi puri karni chahi hai..par me mumma ko apne kisi bhi bachpane ki vajah se pareshan nahi karna chahti.."

maan walked near her n put his hand on her shoulder as support and mumbled assuringly, "u r a great daughter geet..u should be strong n not a cry baby..."

geet made cuty baby face, "im not cry baby..."

maan giggled at her cute red nose n teased, "ofcorse u r..look at ur red nose..."

geet looked at him fake anger and rubbed her nose, making it more red and maan laughed, laughed n laughed..

"u r so mean.." chided geet making faces and walked away from him..

maan ran aftr her n gave her a teddy bear hug from back, it wasn't intensional,,it was just a natural act, but d simple act of maan, made geet look at him in surprise..

maan felt litle relucant, he loosened his hold around her n took a step away wid a slight smile.geet smiled as she turned away from his eyes,,but d blush dat cripped on her cheeks didn't go unnoticed by maan..

he felt an unknown confidence as he once again held her hand, b4 she walk away..

she looked at him surprised, as he started to pull her closer,,he felt so lost in her dat he didn't even realise he was pulling her closer, geet too walked closer, lost in him.. Walking closer n closer, d moment passed n geet found herself just mere inches away from his breaths..maan's breath quickened to hav her so close to him..he lost dat last bit of self control and brished his nose wid hers..

her eyes twinkled wid unknown excitement..sumwhere nervousness and a very different feeling wid no name,,dat was started to bulid up in deir hearts..

just small movements here n dere and she felt his lips brushing her cheek dat were already red..d desprate unknown feeling was alrdy making d situation vulnerable n maan's burning touching and like cheery on d top..she wriggled slight as maan's arms gently came around hers..

"maan..." mumbled geet, as her closed, lost in d trance.. but maan was long lost into d moment..

geet shivered in excitement as maan kissed her jaw confidently dis time..maan's lips started to increase making a line from her jaw to her neck n geet's skin felt in fire..maan was dwelled in pleasure and her delicate skin was like sumthing dat drove him creazy..

he bite her neck in pleasure and his finger sunk in her waist.but his bite brought geet to her sense...

she felt sudden tense, realising wat r dey doing...she wriggeled into his embrace but couldn't bring maan to his sense..maan dipped his face into d hollow of her neck and kissed her diply..geet sheivered in fear and started wriggled forcefully mumbling, "maan plzzz...maan...chhodo...maan..."

her continuous wriggle disturned maan, as he parted his lips away from her skin..still brushing here n dere and tighetened his hold around her..

her eyes pleaded him to look into her eyes, trying to gain his sense back but long lost maan wid closed eyes, brushed his lips on hers..

a moment passed...

and he slammed his lips on hers...

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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owaa dear...so much happy to read this...n I cant belive...Maan Kiss Geet OMG...I am realy shoked😲...next kya hoga jank liye excited hu...plsss mishy joldi update krana...plsss😆

Edited by Mayamaan - 13 years ago
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awesome update mish
loved it so much
Edited by megh_piyashi - 13 years ago

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