Lovestories...2011 !! THREAD 2 pt 18 pg 27

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Lovestories ...2011


Love 💔


Maan - "Who falls in Love...Can never rise again.."

Geet - "Falling hurts...but im wishing to get hurt n rise in LOVE.."

Abhay - "falling n rising doesn't matter...wat matterz is d true LOVE.."

Piya - "wat hurts...can not be love...Love is a thing to enjoy n not fall.."





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THREAD 1


INDEX


Part 16 - page 1 - scroll down

part 17

part 18













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Characters



1) maan singh khurana - gurmeet choudhary


2) abhay singh khurana - vivian desna


3) soniya singh khurana - avika gaur


4) savitri singh khurana (dadi) -


5) geet handa - drashti dhami


6) rano handa ( geet's mom n is widow)

7) piya jaiswal - sukirti khandpal


8) aarush jaiswal ( piya's dad n commsioner of police) -


9) samay gariwal


10) gazal khan - shayantani ghosh
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Part 16



geet looked away wid a smile...not able to bear his gaze...
maan too smiled n looked away...

...and d antakshari continued...


( ok d trip is for mumbai...i not writting in detail dat dere reached airports n d plane journey n al...i cur-short it a litle...)

dey riched deir resereved hotel in mumbai.visting mumbai in d strt if winter is a actualy pleasant thing to be experienced.d rooms were divided group vise.geet gazal n piya shared 1 room while sam maan n abhay shared a room.so did d other student.once all freshened up demselves..d real trip to visit d mumbai...

In bus...

gazal wid imensely stunned wid d beautifull and old yet marveloud structure of various properties as d bus moved.everything had its own importance at d same time incredible work.

goshh, dis mumbai seems like a book of art gallery..seriously..." exclaimed gazal in her excited tone
geet showed same enthusiasm as she joined, "very true of u gazal...dis is my 1st visit to mumbia..i never thought mumbai could be dis beautifull..."

"par..abhi hum kaha ja raha hai..." inguired piya as she enjoyed her chocolate

maan smirked n replied, "sir se jake puchhna..." to which piya mocked, "yah right..."

abhay rolled his eyes, "wen vil u both talk normally to each other...nwz, i guess we r going to gate way of india now..."

gazal looked at him confused, "is waqt gate way of india ?...kuchh time me andhera bhi ho jayega..."

maan grinned, "dats d point..."

geet asked confused, " meaning..?? "

maan smiled at her voice n replied, "gate of india is to be watched in d evening...water in d moonlight, d heavenly look of taj hotel and d great bazar to nearby area on kulaba...dats d actual fun..."

abhay chukled, "bilkul sahi kaha maan ne...v might get a boat toar as well..."

gazal voiced excitedly, "god i cnt wait anymore..."

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GATE WAY OF INDIA...

cold wind passed by as a thrunderious wave hit d wall, making a sound.geet's eyes twinkled by d blissfull scene in front of eyes..d beautifull and cold water dat was shining in d moonlight, number of spot-lights here n dere and d various boats..it felt like sum1 has just sketched and kept in front of dem..

geet exclaimed in happiness, "kya etna khubsurat kuchh ho sakta hai..."

" ho sakta hai..." mumbled maan unknown to himself as his eyes were lost in d heavenly beautifull face of geet who was continuously enjoying d scene..

as geet heard him..she turned to look at him but instantly removed his gaze from her n instead rested on water..geet smiled slightly and looked back to d endless water...

gazal carrased her finger on d incredible structure as she smiled, "sahi kaha yaar...look at d texture and d work..."

maan smiled as he shared his knowlegde, "d story behind dis structure is, in 1600,mumbai was in d slavery of portugiz, who handed mumbai to d england as dowry at d time of wedding of d princess of port wid d prince of england * Second charles*...England found out mumbai to be way to much usefull...but mumbai wasn't 1 but was devided in 7 parts...dey did lot of work on mubai n joined it as one...at dat time consrtuction of gate way of india took place..."

"quite impressive maan...tumhe to bahot kuchh pata hai..." ,praised piya in her usual tone.. to which maan bowed in front of her wid looks like thnx-for-d-complement ...

piya rolled her eyes at his antics n ignored him, "but truly guys...dis is so wonderfull..im dying for d shopping now..."

abhay smiled knowing her creaze towrds shopping, "kulaba has extremely good shops..."

"piya...tu shopping ke alawa kuchh aur bhi karti hai kya ?.." asked gazal amused

piya giggled n replied, "i wonder d same yaar..!! "

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geet's heart raced in fear and excitement as she adjusted herself on her seat in a big boat..boating in d night is a great experince..it felt truly heaven to hav a toar in d sea at d night time due to d splash of spot lights in d watery area...

"beautifull..." mumbled geet to herself,spelled by d beauty..

maan, who was sitting beside geet, heard dis with his eyes continuously staring at her and, mumbled, "beautifull..."

geet looked at him surprised n he instanly looked away.geet awkwardly again looked away wid a smile...maan smiled to himself as he knew, she had noticed his eyes on her..it sumwhere gave him a weired satifaction knowing d fact dat u affect d person, u r afftced by..

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aftr deir gate wau india meet..students were taken back to deir hotels.students eagerly waited for d teachers n staff to get into unending sleep as dey made deir ways to deir respctive gangs wid thief steps.as maan , abhay n sam barged into geet , gazal and piya's room..gals were 1st starled to see dem dere..abhay looked at piya flabbergasted...

"OMG"

dat was all he could utter as he saw piya in her pinky knes length nighty wid sleevelace hands..she seriously looked like a softy toy or micky cute barbie doll or sumthing while piya looked at him gasped n soon it turned to anger as she stormed towrds dem...

"just wat d hell r u guys doing here..."

sam smirked at d discussion between abhay n piya n mocked, "hum check karne aaye the..ke tum gals ne thik se darwaza band kiya ya nahi..."

maan instantly completed, "n dekho..we were right..u gals didn't even locked d door.." grinned maan but his eyes searched for d beautifull angelic face, he couldn't find..

gazal rolled her eyes as she muttered, "waise bhi kafi bore ho raha tha..kya yaar..mujhe laga hum sab trip pe fun karenge..par ye sir log ne to jakar sone ke liye bole diya..."

guys dropped demselves on sofa while abhay was still rooted on d same sopt staring at piya.piya rolled her eyes n grabbed him in...

maan looked around but still couldn't find geet n concluded she must be in bathroom...

sam made faces, "absolutely..no fun yaar..."

piya stood up excitedly, "mere paas ek idea hai...sunau ?.."

maan mocked instantly, "koi bakwas sa idea hoga..no ways haa plz...hav mercy on us.."

piya so wanted to kill him but couldn't

gazal giggled as she questioned, "ye geet ko etni der kyu lag rahi hai...(and she called loud)..geet..geet..."

"aa rahi hun..bas ek min.." replied geet loudly from bathroom as d door of bathroom cracked open n d sight before him stopped maan's heart beat as he stared at d incredible sight in front of him, motionless..

wrapped in a blue spegatty top reaching till her thighs and wid a white legins. geet made her way out only to find all d three guys sitting in deir room...

surprised, geet removed d towel from her hairs and her wets curls locks fell all over her face and filled her neck as d water crawled down from her white milky skin like white pearls...

maan had long lost his breaths and dat made his almost cough, in lack of oxygen.geet instantly ran to him wid a water of glass placed right in front of him as she looked at him worried while offering him water...

maan looked at d seducing sight in front of him n felt like he hav never touched a single gal b4 aur may be she is not just a ordinary gal but sum kind of drug dat was slowly addicting him towrds her..he found her slightly bending towrds him as her beautifull hazels staring at him wid so much emotions..he couldn't even find words to speak..

" maan r u ok" ,asked abhay worried as he found him lost sumwhere..

startled, maan looked at his brother instanlty, gainng his senses back, n turned back to meet dose beautifull eyes.taking d glass from her soft fingers, he slightly smiled at her, still lost, n thnked her.

geet smiled at she gave him d glass n turned back to stand on her previous place..

her rozy pink supple lips, her beautifull eye-lashes, her smooth white milky skin and dose waters drops crawaling continuousl, dose wet locks touching her body and dat beautifull combination of clothes on her deadly curvious body...everything about her made maan feel uncomfortable and sum kind of unbearable urge to feel her closer..he tried enough but still couldn't stop himself from stealing glances at her..

geet smied..giggled..laughed wid her frnds but still could feel dose magnetic pair of eyes staring at her continuously n pulling her towrds him...geet had stole glances at him once or twice..wen she was sure maan was not looking at her..atleast she thought so..but maan smiled, as he hav noticed her staring at him n was satisfied wid dat..

piya frowned, "kuchh game khelte hai na..geet tu hi kuchh bata na..."

geet smiled at piya n started to think.maan smiled as he impatiently waited for her to speak..

a thoughts lit up in geet's mind as she smiled widely and announced, "mere paas ek idea hai..."

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Congratulation Mishty for new thread...



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cngrats dear for new thread

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maan lost in her wow ...!
hope he soon realised that he is fallen in love...!
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congrats 4 da new thread 👏
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