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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome but ab ab maan manofying geet kuch jabardast tarike se hona chahiye continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg finally the truth is out me happy
but cant see geet getting hurted cause he dint have trust on her love towards him
\update soon neha
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n superb update...

ek chhotisi mu ne dono k saath saath meet armaan aur ridz ka bhi zindagi ko dookh mein doobo diya...kitna suffer kiya sabne...maan ko puchna chahiye tha...

bonding b/w geet n her frnds...its really amazing...

thank u fr such a lovely update...

really loved it...

will b waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago



updating guys in few minutes...

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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks a lot guys for your support and love..
without your support i couldn't be able to write it more..
so thanks a lot..
love you all and hugs to you..
neha
Edited by neha5058 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

part-12

he went some club and drunk badly...taking with him his lifeless body... pouring his heart out..holding a whisky bottle in his hand drenched in rain walking alone in empty roads... crying but tears are not showing due to rains.. tears are mixed in rain... talking to himself how could he do this to her? how could he thought like that meet is armaan's daughter? how could he thought like this that geet loves armaan? how? how could he? sitting in some corner on empty road pouring his heart out.. screaming loud like he is asking to god why he did this to him? why he let this happened with her? why he didn't stop him? he became a lifeless body.. his mind is ot working.. he only wants that geet will forgive him.. that's only one thing is roaming in his mind... he somehow managed to went back to his home...taking his lifeless structure with him... geet is very restless whole night.. couldn't sleep for a second.. on the other hand armaan & ridhima also very disturbed coz of whole incident... where dadi doesn't know anything till yet... next day at noon maan went geet's home for begging for hs mistakes... but he didn't found her there and ridz denied to tell him anything about her... she also doesn't know where geet went with meet.. there is no clue about her.. both are very worried for her and here maan is asking again and again for geet from them... he is very restless... suddenly he knew that where she went.. may be his 6th sense will work and geet will be there.. he immediately left from her.. hoping that geet will be there... armaan & ridhima didn't knew that where she went without informing them... he immediately called to adi and told him about his private jet... in half hour he will be on airport... after half an hour he left from delhi in his private jet... on the other hand geet & meet both are sitting on hills... niharing the beauty of valleys and snow.. after so many years she is there.. on these hills... again.. where her heart is shattered into many pieces again she is there.. collecting her heart again... but this time her daughter with her.. this is the same place where she lost her parents but todays she became a mother... meet is continuously blabbering and asking questions about this place... meet insist her to sing that song for her but geet is denying because she used to sing this song with maan... but she can do anything for her daughter, for her angel... he only reason for living in this world... she was all alone when this nanhi angel came for her like a ray of hope... in her lifeless life... meet insist her very much so she can't denied her... she starts sing the song which is most fav song of both of them... which was completed by maan.. due to this song maan fell in love with her... after so many years she will sing this song...

Dil ye bechein ve

Raste pe nain ve

Dil ye bechein ve

Raste pe nain ve

Jindari behaal hai

Sur hai na taal hai

Aaja savariya

Aa aa aa aa

Taal se taal milaao

Taal se taal mila

she sang the song for him.. like she is waiting for him.. may be she is hoping that he will come here yet she had waited for him whole 7 years but these some hours like a hell for her... her life again become a colorless... without him this song is incomplete..without him her life is incomplete...meet is all lost in her sweet melodious voice which she used to hear in her sleep when geet telling her some sweet stories like a song...

Saawan ne aaj to mujhko bhigo diya

Hay meri laaj ne mujhko dubo diya

Saawan ne aaj to mujhko bhigo diya

Hay meri laaj ne mujhko dubo diya

again rain is started... drenching their body.. mixing their tears in rain.. like rain sky is also crying with her... she is remembering their sweet romantic pals... she used to cherish those sweet moments with maan but today there is no sign of maan... she is all alone with her sweet little daughter...

Aisi lagi jhadi sochoon main ye ghadi

Kuchh maine kho diya kya maine kho diya

Chup kyon hai bol tu sang mere dol tu

Meri chaal se chaal milaao

she is thinking about their love.. her voice is eching everywhere.. after so many years someone is singing on these hills... still she can feel those laughing moments like she can still hear his laughter.. his husky voice whenever he came close to her whispered something in her ear and she was lost in him... before she used to sing this song for her parents but now she is singing this song for maan, for meet.. for her life... she still believe that maan will come to her...take her with him forever...

Taal se taal milaao

Taal se taal mila

she stop in mid... because after this maan used to sing with her...she still remember when first time maan sing those lines and she ran away scared from him... but suddenly again the same voice fell in her ear... the same emotions she can feel in this voice.. meet's eyes twinkled in joy she too feel the same as geet is felling.. hoping that maan is that person who is singing... meet also hoping that after this her father sang this song for her mama...

Maana anjaan thi tu mere vaaste

Maana anjaan tha main tere vaaste

Maine tujhko jaan liya

Tune mujhko jaan liya

he changed the song this time... this time they are not strangers... they knew each other from so many years... geet stood up and looking at him with so much love.. her hope is come true.. and same as with maan.. he knew where geet went... this is the same place where they started tehr love...

Aa dil ke paas aa is dil ke raaste

Jo tera haal hai vo mera haal hai

Is haal se haal milaao

he stretched his arms for her again on the same place... and again she ran for hiding herself in his embrace... she hugged him immediately and meet also by side ways...

Taal se taal milaao

Taal se taal mila

both sang together... after sometimes he loosened his hug and fell on his knees hugging her by her waist hide his face in her abdomen...then he looked at her with moist eyes...

combining his hands in front of her and begging her for his mistakes...he cried in front of her...

geet whispers maan..he at once caught her by her waist hiding his face in her abdomen again...begging from her... voicing only one thing... i am sorry geet...i am sorry geet...i am sorry ...i am really very sorry...please forgive me geet..please geet..please give my life to me back..please geet...

geet stroking his hairs ..i knew this sorry word is not enough for what i have done with you.. i knew that i am not able for forgive bu you... i knew that... fir bhi sorry geet for everything... for everything...

geet-mai to kabhi aapse naraz thi hi nahi maan... maan raised his head to face her...haan maan.. mai hamesha se jaanti thi ki aapne jo kiya aise hi nahi kiya hoga..mujhe aap par itna bharosa to tha hi par shayad aapko... maan pressed his finger on her lip...her words piercing his heart... i trust you geet..i trust you but i didn't trust on my love.. i thought my love..my love..words are not coming from his mouth...she hugged him at once.. she only wants him..only him...

please geet..mujhe maaf kar do..meri ek mistake aur..

geet-sshh maan... i know that...maaf karne ka to sawal hi nahi hai... maan looked at her questioningly..

geet-mai to aapse naraz nahi hu...

maan-sach geet...

If you ever left me,

I think I would go crazy.

My whole world would crashing down.

I would cry forever.

... If you ever left me,

my heart would never beat again.

My world would be a dark place,

if you walk away.

so please don't leave me baby.

I love you more than you could know.

I gave you my heart long ago,

so treasure it always,

and I'll be yours.

geet at once pressed her lips on his...taking out her tears...cupped his face...his eyes popped opened at sudden kiss but he love her... he again falling on her...she become a mature girl but still a kid by her heart...maan respond her back with equal flavor...nibbling her lips...then they heard giggling voice...they looked at meet while kissing who is standing beside them..giggling at their act...they immediately broke their kiss...geet's cheeks crimson red & looked here and there...same situation maan is also facing..not able where to look..but he sat on his knees and hugged meet... tears fall from geet's eyes...

meet-paa...

maan-haan paa... aapke paa aapke paas aa gaye hai beta..

meet-hamesha ke liye? he nodded while crying but tears for happiness... he took meet in his lap and hugged geet by side ways..

precap

armaan proposing ridz

and

marriage preparations...

tell me friends how it?

i know you all are expecting much from me but sorry guys i am not very good in all this so i kept it simple.. but touchy little..

hope you all like it..

waiting for your response

love

neha

Edited by neha5058 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

fabulous main is part ka bahut wait kar rahi thi its too good continue soon aur bahut khush bhi hoon kyunki is part ka itna wait kar rahi thi aur isi ke liye main first bhi hoon comment karne main 😊

Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
edited~~

awesome update neha...
loved it to the core...
awww maan is drunk... ppch... even though i am angry on him but cant see him in that position too... so sad for him...
maan went to geet's house but she is not there...
all are worried about her... n maan lied dadima that he is on some business meet...
maan guessed it right... where his jaan is... thats cool,...
ahhh again the same song...wow...
i am in love with this song...
meet is so sweet...
so geet remembering all those old moments which she spent with maan...
finally maan came n continued his part...
loved it...
geet ran into his arms... wow... oops they r kissing in front of their daughter...
oh god... poor meet...
finally geet forgive him n they r together again...
me very very happy neha...
precap is interesting...
continue soon dear...

love u...
hugs to u...


Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow!finally maan met his angel and poured his heart out..
That was so superb..
highlight in ds ss is the song..
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for the update
update soon!!!!!!!!!!

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