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Janhvi

@shine_bright

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Haaaye Rabba ! Kya likh diya !?

Viniii , kaha see churayia? 😉

Itna ACCHA and YOU ?! 😲

Writingsss the storiess ? 😲

No ways possibless! 😲

Kamini . Itna smart agar phone par baat karti na, toh adhe time hum argue karne mein na bita te 🤣

ANYWWWAYS!

*Amazing - Spectacular JOB *

It was totally an out of the world ..like some Alien wrote it , perhaps a Chocolate one, you know

No , you don't know . That was actually a really good inside joke , which ii am kind of sure you'll miss.

LOL 😆

But but but but - Great jobb ! Loved the way you portrayed the character! I think it was totally beautiful & somewhat reminded me of your dreams of the lifestyle you'd like 😍

Good to know you wrote from the heart !

Loved it , it was a pleasure to read !

I really would love it if you wrote more after you get time from yooour ...Yoga Classes🤣 .

Lekin , apna apna time hota hain 😛

ahaha (:

I * love love love love love LOVE * you ( more than you do )

& keep up the great work :D !

Edited by shine_bright - 13 years ago

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blessed4

@blessed4

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

nice OS ..pl write more !!

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Parneet

@ParneetS

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

wowww this was great...but cuudnt u have just wrote lil more at the end...i wanted AR romance..lol

but amazing..:)

but seriously AR romance is much needed..>:)

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ritu

@janu1610

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Vini welcome back.
Amazing OS.
you described it perfectly . Every word was falling perfectly in my hear .It was like i can visualize it .
very nice moments but you know i wanted their little romance there.
thanks for pm.
do write more.
love n luck.
ritu

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Res...😲

EDITED...😊

Viniii Sweetheart🤗... How r u yaar.?..Missed you so much...you know,when I got your PM,I thought you messaged me something...But when I Opened it..I was Like OS😲...written by Vini.😲..Its so Pleasantly surprising yaar😃...I am so glad that you completed this One..Now coming to the Masterpiece...yesh Its indeed a master-piece for me...you wanna know the reasons...well firstly toh its written by you sweetheart❤️ and secondly woww ,the way you write it.👏..Superb...Right from the starting..each and everything of this OS is treat to read..be its title ,its characterization or its story...everything is so AMAZING.👍🏼..woww AR are FBI agent... Their first meeting,the sparks between them...everything written so beautifully...Oyee kamini,you are so good at writing yaar,kahaan chupa rakha tha ye talent😡..Now keep writing and Post more OS's or FF's...really waana read more from you...Thanks for the PM... Take care😃

Lots of Love

Geet

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Hiii
Awesome os
Loved it
Interesting concept
Loved ArSh
Thanks 4 da pm

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Paramjeet Singh Sachdeva

@hunder

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

pappa to band bajayeee

nice OS vini ji but itna chota kyu?????????? thora zada bara likhna tha na hahaha

chalo ek kaam karo make it a FF

FBI ke do agents ek dusre ko ni pehchante, so shameful, FBI lp doob marna chaiye hahahahaha

arey but is sab ke beech woh criminal kaha se pakra gaya hahahahaha

shit dono ne mera 10 crore ka assignment pakar liya :( hahahahaha

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Alisha

@shininggal2008

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Vini!

Sorry, i didn't read your OS y'day coz i got busy and i wasn't on after that. But i just read it and O.M.G. you shocked me. When did you start being such a brilliant writer. Like for real?! Damm that was one heck of a piece. Fabulous. Ahhh i loved it to core ❤️.

PS. *Surprise surprise* I know i know i am on from my id. Haha remember i had told you i knew the pw, i was just messing something up. Idk i just randomly remembered it today. LMAOO!!

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perfectsmile

@perfectsmile

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Vini, you write ?? 😲

After long, I came to IF to read something and stumbled upon your pm and I am glad for checking my pms.

The OS was great - literally and articulately!
The way you described Riddhima in the beginning was what made it interesting for me. The innocent confusion you put in it only added to it.
And then the end! For some reason, I quite liked the sharp and no-romance ending. 😳

And yes, you definitely have a way with writing.
Keep writing!