An excerpt from 'his' diary - Page 5 :)

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Alisha

@shininggal2008

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Wow' it's rare to read such excerpt. I loved it.

Every word had meaning to itself and its beautifully written.

Great piece <3

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ssh57

@ssh57

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Good OS but wish it had a happy ending, though it did end on a optimistic note.

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diyaa1pk

@diyaa1pk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Oo hi vinni...is dis really u...kahein fever tou nai hoo gaya...name change nee kafi asar kiya hai...
Hmmm...nice piece of work ...
I can foresee a famous writer...if u keep on writing like dis...
Looking forward to more dhamakas frm ur side...
Xoxo

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Paramjeet Singh Sachdeva

@hunder

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

pappa to band bajaye 2

accha tha but thora zada hi emotional tha...

Edited by hunder - 13 years ago

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youth_showsfan

@youth_showsfan

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

hey it was a cute one short story

u hav written it beautifully

do write more

nd thnx fr d pm

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namita

@namita18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Comments Updated on page 1 and 6

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Madura

@Redrose21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Amazing one shots. Loved the way u described the feelings. Beautifully written. Pls add me in your PM list.

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Maitree

@..Maitree..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

That was SO SO good Vini! :D I loved the writing style...and the message you brought out . Also Armaan's (I'm supposing it to be his diary) emotions, inner struggle and finally facing the day was beautifully written..You should write more :)
ILY!
Me..LOL. See the username! :P

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princess52

@princess52

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

hey ...

waahhh

kyaa bat hai?????

tchh danm ...mien apni nautanki strt nahi kar sakti like WHR THE HECK WERE U ?AND WHY DID U STOP CONTINUING UR OTHER FFS AND WHY N WHY ??lol

coz mien hi nahi thi:D

anywayz...both the os were really cool..i didn't knew u were romantic...;)

i just love the way u write n i m literally looking forward to read something from u ..i don't know i just feel like i m reading ur thought or u know..i just don't know how to put in words but i think u know why i meant:)

abut the second os i m sure something was bothering u ...itna sad koi likhta hai kya...so just gmail me why happened

love u vini

muahhh

ps: i m always there...i know nowadays i m al gayab ..but remember i m just a phn call away ..whnever u need to talk just give me a miscall :)