SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148

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Nandini

@Nandini25

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#811

lovely update

sarita's n Acharyaji's behaviours are quite mysterious

Awe finally Veer gave up on Chandni

But chandni made it up to him n I just luvd 2 see them 2gether with her consent

Mumbai wapas lautne ki dhamki kaam kar gayi

update soon

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Bells.E.cullen

@Bells.E.cullen

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#812

wow luved it very much...
really amazing...
veer luvs her alot but den also he hurts her every tym...
kafi sudhr gya hai hai phle se... hope vo chandni ki baat maan le n alcohol bhi chod de... i 2 don't lyk dis part of his...
but lyk chandni me 2 can't stop myself from luving him...
n very very very happy dat chandni kissed him...
i was waiting 4 dis... but wats d matter wid dat soul... n y it follows veer...??
superb...
thnx 4 d pm...

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Shreya

@sparksfly

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#813

wow di !!!

luvd dis one !!

Chand finally acceptd his luv !!!

yay !! im dancng !!

n dey kissd...in d rain...

so romantic !!

im super happy !!!

Veer is a total charmer !!all d ladies likd him 2 !!!

ure descrption of d scene was awesum !!

plzz reveal d ghost ka suspense !! n d old ladie's words...

i luv d fact dat i get 2 read dis amazng ff evryday !!

thnq 4 givng daily updtes !!

luv u di !!

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#814

Thanks for updates n pm
sorry for late reply
loved all updates!!
liked how story proceeding
so chandani found that stone 'mehrangarh' written on it
liked scene of bath tub! it was funny!
chandani saw some1 behind veer!
and he saw some1 like chand!
might his death
loved veer changing n taking interest in business
and he saved chand from those boys too!!
and she is feeling jealous with all ladies liking veer
sarita n acharyaji's statements are confusing more!
so chandani's view about veer is changing!!
chandani trying to go to mehrangarh
its getting very interesting!!

Edited by shruja - 13 years ago

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Sonali

@sonalimurat

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#815

very nice part

loved it very much

Chandini n Veer went together and she told him to quit habit of drinking

abhi to maan jao veer

He loved by everyone present in house all ladies

ohho ..loved her grany shama's answer when she grasp veer hand

jelous and chandini ...ehem ehem ...

n the scene loves in chandini room

n Chandini agreed his love

that's gre8 1!

Awesome part

update soon di

love u

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disha

@disha15

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#816

Me so happy ki im gonna go out n dance in the rain

Finalllyyy 😃

Di i soo sooo love you!

Ok so strting part..i was really pissed she told bout alcohol while serving 😡

But im so glad she did MENTION IT TO HIM later.

And see see Chandni,Veer has changd so much,he didn't lie,he clearly said ki he likes it.

N now im pretty sure he is gonna quit drinking soon coz he knows she doesnt like it n this was the first time someone tried to stop that habit of his,that too who better than Chandni to do this? 😳

The old ladies hitting on Veer? 😃 haha..i knw they meant well..but still.budhaape mein jawaani 😆

And im not pissed that Veer was rude to her this time..im on Veer's side!Obviously if she keeps rejecting him again n again n again..what else was he supposed to do?He was really hurt coz he honestly loved her

But when he left angrily..i was like...oh wait..please dont bring tragedy now 😲 anyways,thank god chandni ran to go talk to him!

The whole ending ka scene 😍 oh my gosh!

Di i loved the way you described the last part..i could imagine the entire sequence happening (ya ya i was imagining myself as chandni n Rajat as veer ☺️ )

Loved the update!Loved ur writing!Give yourself a pat on your back 👏

Edited by disha15 - 13 years ago

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Swati Agrawal

@swati_prithvi

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#817

Thank u..thank u..thank u..thank u so much for dis superb UD dear..

aftr reading this UD I jst felt that I wanted to see this only yaar..

U wrote so b'fully..I jst luv dis part lot..

It seems like U wrote as it is...I was thinking..

U r mind blowing dear.

lods of kisses & hugs to u for this..

thanks..waiting for d nxt 1..

2morrow I'll b lil busy so I can't promise that I'll giv comment 2morrow

bt I'll try my bst..

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#818

Originally posted by: disha15
Di i loved the way you described the last part..i could imagine the entire sequence happening (ya ya i was imagining myself as chandni n Rajat as veer ☺️ )

gandi bachi, veer pr dore daal rhi ho.....

o no!..

yeh lo chandini, tumhari sautan bhi aa gyi

(disha no harsh feeling...sirf leg pulling h :P ))