SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 84

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tejjo

res


superb update di

loved it thoroughly

im scared when he kiss her chand ki tarah mujhe v laga ke is baar he can't leave her
bt he such a nice person

i know chand ke pyaar ne use bhot sudhar diya h

bt phir v he always hurt her
kyun???

Bt di i love u
4 such a sweet twist

she kissed even in rain
which she hate
ek baar mujhe laga ki yeh chand ka dream h
bt it was reality


n i loved this scene most
veer mumbai kyun ja rha h??
Chand ko lekar jana pls
hope everythning will be fine between them

di wo white dress wali girl ka suspense jaldi khatam karo

thanks di for lovely update
n regular update

update soon
luv u

Thanks for such a wonderful comment sweetie... will update soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kareena1994

Amazing update and thanks for the pm

Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

reso jii

wil edit soon
~~EDITED~~
wowie, god, di..
so as i told u i m gonna do bangra as n wen chand will accecpt his love...
so me doing it finally on ur shikar ff again...

wow, it feels gr88. i lovd chand's reaction...

so, lets strt frm 1st...actually strting frm back is beeter chaoice as can resist ma self frm dat prt...but ..its ok, i shud not confuse u wid sequence...

''its ok.. i can manage wid cold drink''... lovd dis line, so just awesomely cool.
coolest dude.

so, kamini trust him, so she asked him to accompany chand.

god, all aunties latuu on veer...
veer h handsome banda, bechaga nhi koi,...
bass chand hi pata nhi kaise resist kr rhi h usse...

why did sarita aunty behave so???
hmm.. mystery.
🤔

chandini is actually jealous of those old women... hmm i noe...(leg pulling)
literally he is complete opposite to wat those old ladies noe..
if dey noe his truth, god dey all will mass suicide..🤣
only chand is brave enough to bear his truth...

'' happy b'day to world's most beautiful lady once again'' veer lightly embraced kamini...

YEH LADKA KABHI NHI SUDHERGA, BY GOD...

he entered her room, she in nite gown...ooo...
looking to hoottt...
i noe, veer wont stay back..

awesome scene...
is dis wat u want??''

cute n damn romantic scene...
next evn better, better... it ws best..
1st d way he said'' the person who said that love is most powerful force in dis world ws wrong, i lovd u for so long n for nothing'''...he left..
i ws so shattered..
bt wen chand ran to his car, me again jumping jhiil went up the hill...

she dinn care for her family too... only him him n him..

god, rain ki bhi badi achi timing h, as if the whole atmosphere is celebrating their mingle...
vry romantic kiss, lovd chand's response...

so they r gonna talk now,
he rested his foreheads on hers, he is satisfied now...


the one thng i wud like to highlight ws..

the most uniqne description of hairs till now...overcooked spaghetti strands...(she luks yummy dis way...i lov spaghetti...))😉

dis ws so easy to visualise u noe, i lovd dis line here.

lov u


thanks for your sweet comments baby... as i always say i love reading your long comments...it makes my day...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ridzzi

amazing,superb.awesome,stupendo fantabulous...👏

what an update...''i will manage with the soft drink''...haye di devil sudhar gaya...and he didn't lie when she asked him to stop his drinking habit...and chand is feeling wiered when her granny's are getting close to veer...chand she is your granny don't get jealous with them...😆
and after that...goshhh really for a moment i too thought that this time he will surely get her by force but no...he moved from their making her realize that he loved her and she is just hurting him...
and now finally chand understood what she was doing...and i think veer has said that he is going back to mumbai forever just in anger hope he is not serious...
and di last part...that rain and chand's stepping forward for their relation...oh superb...she always hated rain but today...cauz of veer it's seems different...finally chand got to know what she always wanted and now veer is satisfied too...😍
ab us chudail ko dekh lenge...ab wo unka kuch nahi bigad payegi...akhir humare love birds saath jo ho gaye hain...but di why did you stoped their...??????...
continue soon...(waise no need to say kiu ki ap toh regular update toh dete hi ho but kya karu iske bina pura comment adhura lagta hai...adat pad gayi hai ye likhne ki so update soon)...😃
luv u...😊

hey sweetheart...thank you so much for so wonderful comment...will surely update soon...luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetshera

lovely update

sarita's n Acharyaji's behaviours are quite mysterious
Awe finally Veer gave up on Chandni
But chandni made it up to him n I just luvd 2 see them 2gether with her consent
Mumbai wapas lautne ki dhamki kaam kar gayi
update soon

thanks for the wonderful comments dear...much appreciated...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Bells.E.cullen

wow luved it very much...
really amazing...
veer luvs her alot but den also he hurts her every tym...
kafi sudhr gya hai hai phle se... hope vo chandni ki baat maan le n alcohol bhi chod de... i 2 don't lyk dis part of his...
but lyk chandni me 2 can't stop myself from luving him...
n very very very happy dat chandni kissed him...
i was waiting 4 dis... but wats d matter wid dat soul... n y it follows veer...??
superb...
thnx 4 d pm...

thanks for the lovely comments dear...i am glad you are liking the story...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sparksfly

wow di !!!

luvd dis one !!
Chand finally acceptd his luv !!!
yay !! im dancng !!
n dey kissd...in d rain...
so romantic !!
im super happy !!!
Veer is a total charmer !!all d ladies likd him 2 !!!
ure descrption of d scene was awesum !!
plzz reveal d ghost ka suspense !! n d old ladie's words...
i luv d fact dat i get 2 read dis amazng ff evryday !!
thnq 4 givng daily updtes !!
luv u di !!

thanks my sweetie...loved your comments...😊

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