SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148

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Priya Sharma

@Priyart12

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#321

m bhi aa gyi 😊
chlo to shuru krte h aaj k safar

veerrr itni tej drive nhi krte
accident ho gya to 😭
m bhi na kubh bhi bolti hu ulta sidha
kanha ji is ldke ki raksha kra ~_~ (praying)
dhire kaise chlayega dil ko to chand ne chura liya
nhi nhi kabja kr liya 😆
daku rani chand, shera ka asar aa gya 😆
ye lo ho gya na accident
chlo sukar h ki bhut tha nhi nhi bhutni 😈
mujhe PRC yaad aa gya fir se
vo bhutni wala scene yaad h jb sanyo bhut bni thi 🤣
wah meri memory 😎
ye bhutni kha se aa tapki ab beech sadak (road) pr 😈
kuch gadbad mat krna smjhi bhutni

phle vo crown n ab ye map 😲
kaka dhunding map me kya h 😲
kaka ji jyada dimag mat lgao
hm btate h isme kya hoga
isme hoga PRC wala KHAZANA
ye rha

wao kya baat h mene ek khazane ka rasta nikal diya 👍🏼

awww ye bhutni fir aa gyi 😡
mene mana kiya tha ise aane ko
fir bhi aa gai 😡
LANGDE BABA ko bulana pdega 🤣 😈
langde baba ki JAI 👍🏼
ye lo aa gye lande baba

awww chand aa gai veer ko sulane
so cute 😳

veer bhi kitna sota h
is pr bhi mera asar aa gya 😆
3PM tk soya hua h 👍🏼
uth jao baby ab 😆

veer karing flrtng 🤣
vo bhi nhi aati 🤣
poor boy 👎🏼
yeah aayegi aayegi ek din tumare pass jrur aayegi 👍🏼

Edited by princesspriyart - 13 years ago

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#322

ok.. who was that lady😲

pls reveal some secrets na Dhanvi..

update was gud

but pls cont soon

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#323

beautiful update!
so veer seeing his death!
n wht kaka got ? Map? is there any way to come out of tht curse?
he saw tht lady in his house too!! chand console him
but she is affraid coz of her mother's past n grandmom forcast n warning
and she decided to not falling for veer!! but heart is not with her!!
chand working n veer sleeping
veer u should make hard work to get her

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#324

great update

who is the woman in white dress?

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Shreya

@sparksfly

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#325

di...

dat was magical !!! 😃

Shikhar has bcum like a drug...i need its dose 4m time 2 time...

is nashe mein bohut anand hai...😆

d ud was superb !!!

both r completely crazy over each othr...but dont want 2 admit it...😛

Veer u r soo.. naive ...

u still thnk dis is LUST !!!

dude, dis is MUCH more than dat...😉

y is Chandni not listng 2 her heart ??

wat happpnd 2 her mom ?? 😕

pehele hi itna suspense kafi nahin tha kya...dat ek white sari lady ko bhi aapne hamein aur Veer ko haunt karne ke liye nhej diya !!!!

she really scarred Veer !!!

Chandni sab kuch chod kar uske pas aa gaye.chalo us ghost / angel ne kuch to accha kiya... 😉

has she a ...cum 2 giv Veer a warng...🤔

Chandni ka imagntion made me...☺️...

n Veer ke flirty line...😳...

full on flirtng...

u r awesum di !!!! 👏

d lines were fabulus !!

ab i will hav 2 find new words 2 praise u...😆...aap bhi same words sun-sun kar bore ho gayi hogi...

but kya karun...abhi mujhe itne hi aatein hai...thoda compromise kar lijiye...😉...

luv u...🤗

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#326

amazing n shocking update...👏

veer n chand feel for each other but always want to denie it...murakh(idiot)...😆

n WHO WAS THE LADY IN WHITE DRESS...???????...GHOST(BHOOT)...😲

but poor veer...he was totally scared...n me too...

but loved chand very much...after hearing his voice...she didn't think of anything and directly run to his room...😳

but as u said in previous updates that this family has a curse on them...that every boy died as he reaches to the age of 21...and he will be safe only if a pure hearted girl touch him...toh kahi inki death ki wajah ye saya toh nahi...jo inhe jeene nahi deta...😕...plz suspense zayda mat badao...

sometimes i really feel...that u should change the name of this ff from shikhar to sharapit...totally suspencial...😛

i have never thought that this story will took this turn...i mean totally different...👍🏼

n u know what...i m not able to sleep tonight...couz the way u described the bed scene of veer n that lady...after reading that...i m feeling like some one is also behind me...ab raat main mujhe yahi baat yaad ayegi...

n next day veer was sleeping till 3 pm...and chand is working since morning...veer don't u know that chand likes to wake early in the morning...so try to catch up with her...😉

n finally my favourite scene...veer n chand...😍

u know what...i read whole story but the best part of the story is always...veer-chandani scenes...

n the lines which u used for both of them...haila damn amazing...👏

n their is tip for veer n chand...

never denie what your heart says...couz your heart will never suggest you wrong thing...

chand try as much as u can...avoid him or do anything...but u can not change the destiny...

n veer u r rite that one day she will come to you...n u too...but that will not be the lust...it will be love...n she will come to u to save your life...

but i m really disappointed with you...first u updated tum mere ho regular than why not shikhar...😔...i really waited for this update...after prithvi...shikhar is one...for which i eagerly waited to update n want a regular one...😔

but all in all update was amazing...now a days...shikhar is on my mind...day n night...😍

update soon...

luv u...😊

Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago