SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 31

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Nandini25 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
luv the scene between Veer n Chandni
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

great update

loved the light moment between the two
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Posted: 13 years ago
diii... !!!!!!!!!!
dat was wwwooowww... 👏
d ud was captivating ...😍...mind blowng...so engrossng...so passionate...so romantic...😍...so poetic...😍...so beautiful...
i LUVD it !!!! 😃
d lines were...fabulus !!!!
onions r really nice...coz it gmade both of dem smile...😉...
Veer has strong feelngs 4 her... care , anger toward d person who made her cry...n...passion 4 her...instead of only lust !!! which is a gr8 improvmnt !!! 👍🏼
Chandani is IN A SPELL wound by Veer... 😳
i luvd dat scene... 😳
it seems like dey hav known each othr 4 evr... 😍
im in luv wid SHIKHAR !!!! n u di !!! ❤️
ur writng is fabulus !!!! 👏
d emotions r perfectly describd !!! my heart was poundng as i was readng it !!!
dats wat i luv abt u...
u take us on a fabulus journey ...n charactrs seem like reality...n their emotions r so beautifully shown by u... 👍🏼
luv u di !! 🤗
plzz... ud soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
veer n chandani
haayeee main sadke jawa maza aa gyi sweety padhke

continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
haye di kina acha wala update tha...i m so happy...thank u for this wonderful part...🤗
veer said that he will chop that person who made her cry...😲...god...man he is immersaly in love with her...😳
n veer those are the onions who made her cry......so now chop them...😆
n damn man they were so close...di i m super excited while reading that scene...really...those scenes were really amazing...☺️

''...she turned to pick up the vegetables when she banged into him and was about to fall when he hold her hand...and for a minute Veer and Chandni were lost...''

Palchinn palchinn uljhi uljhi ek raina,

Dhadkan dhadkan bikhre bikhre se chaina,
Meelon chali hai gumsum yeh khamoshi,
Kitna bhi samjahu,Mann yeh maane naa,
Teri bandagi, jeene naa jeene naa,
jeene naa de teri bandagi
jeene naa jeene naa,
jeene naa de teri bandagi
jeene naa jeene naa,
jeene naa de teri bandagi
jeene naa jeene naa,
teri yeh bandagi…

''...Chandni's thought while she looked deeply in his eyes "why can't you let me remain in my senses...why I want to shrink in your arms?...why I want to hide in your chest as if you are my ocean..."


( Iss dil mein guje reh reh kar,Aur bijli sa garje,
Heiraan kare par reh jaaye,Badal yeh bin barse,)

''...Deep in his heart he said to himself "you don't know Chandni, my eyes search for you everywhere...i live and die when I see you...i think of you every moment, stop me from getting close to you..." he closed his eyes and took a deep breath...''

(Tode jiya mora,Tode jiya yeh mora,
Kaisa jog laaga re,)

''...he was so close to her...for Chandni it was like a spell...she couldn't stop him from touching her...''

(Tukdo mein bat jaau fir bhi,Tute naa..
Kaisi tadpan hai yeh,Chore chute naa..)

''...she felt all the world around her like a magic... as soon as he touched her cheek... she felt her cheeks burning in fire...''

(Thandi pade jo yeh so jau mein,
Ek rakh ki lakir ho jau mein fir shayad,)

''...Veer's hand on her waist made her completely lost in him...''


(Teri bandagi jeene naa jeene naa,
jeene naa de teri bandagi,
jeene naa jeene naa,
teri yeh bandagi…

bandagi..teri bandagi..)

''...it was difficult for him to control his feelings...her soft hands were holding his hand...he moved his hand forward and touched her hand... Veer looked into her eyes as if he was waiting for her since ages……...''

(umeed ka din dhalte dhalte keh jaaye kabhi mujhse,
wo raasta kyu puche jo rootha hai tujhse,)

''...his arm curled around her slim waist... making them more closer...her hands automatically lifted up to touch his chest...both were looking into each other eyes...''

(chup chup kar kehte hai mujhse yeh armaan,
dil ki sunn le kar le khud par yeh ehsaan,)

''...he came closer and touched his forehead with hers...''

(iss aag mein jo mein pighlu agar,
khud se mila saku naa mein nazar fir shayad,)

''... there was silence around...nothing heard, no words were said...only their hearts spoke...''

(Teri bandagi jeene naa jeene naa,
jeene naa de teri bandagi,
jeene naa jeene naa,
teri yeh bandagi…)

''...Chandni embarrassingly walked towards her room, and closed her door from behind... "why was I so unconscious, what kind of effect is this" she touched her burning cheeks...she felt restless...''

(Palchinn palchinn uljhi uljhi ek raina,
Dhadkan dhadkan bikhre bikhre se chaina,
Meelon chali hai gumsum yeh khamoshi,
Kitna bhi samjahu,Mann yeh maane naa,)

''...Veer walked upstairs...he couldn't think of anything else... the passion was becoming a pain, a torture...the distance between them was killing him...he wanted to get her...''

(Teri bandagi, jeene naa jeene naa,
jeene naa de teri bandagi
jeene naa jeene naa,
jeene naa de teri bandagi
jeene naa jeene naa,
jeene naa de teri bandagi
jeene naa jeene naa,
teri yeh bandagi…...)😍


di really ab toh humse bhi wait nahi hota...na jaane kab realise karenge...dumboos...😍
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update dear😃...
loved the kitchen scene to the core😳...
love changes a person in so many different ways😛...
once veer's soul is redeemed h'll be the most passionate and compromising hubby ever😳...
chandi's one word and he's ready to do cookery works😆...
but he cut his finger...and chandni is so caring and concerned for him😳...
and sucked his finger☺️...
one tiny cut made her worried😳...
i wonder what will she do when she will come to know about the death curse on veer...
plz update soon dear...😊
luv u...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Sbb onion scene was so cute thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princesspriyart

yeah yeah yeeppiii akhir mil hi gya ud 😆
M 1st 😛
ye lo to mera cmnt 😛
ye chandu ko to meri or rajat ki adat lag gai sone ki 😆
m bhi bhut soti hu
kitna bhi sula lo my fav hobby 🤣
i luv sona
are aqe gold wala sona nhi sleep wala sona 😊
kaka ache wale kaka
kitne ache kaka
btati hu btati hu ki kaka ji ki itni tarif kyu
are kyuki kaka chandu n veer ko akela chod kr chle gye 😳
kisne rulaya chandu ko btao btao veer usf abhi chop krega 😆
Onion ne
veer -awww 😲
kro kro ab kro 🤣
awww poor veer ungli cut gai 😭
uuummm jo aage hua hone do m in my LALA LAND 😳
dont disturbe me 🤗

thanks sweetie for yourwonderful comments
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank you so much sweetie..loved your sweet comments...that made me so happy

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">🥳party party party party...</font>


<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">aajao oye sab shikar readers...😉...</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">milke party kare, gulchaare udayein......</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">dhool bhajayo oye...</font>


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<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">(di aap dhol ko tho nhi bhole na!, india culture ka atoot, unbreakable part h yeh...)</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">aur bhangra bhi hoga...(aaj kal main saare ffs par yahi kar rahi hoon.)</font>


<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff"><img src="http://i1206.photobucket.com/albums/bb443/sweetsanyo/Boston-Bhangra-2008-INDIAnewEnglandcom.jpg" alt="" /></font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">di bhangra tho banta h, after all aap chandigarh ki kudi n main haryanvi chori, khoob jamega rang jab mil-baitheinge teen yaar, aap , main aur shikar ff ud...</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">okay ab aap yeh soch rahe hogr ki kahin meri sweetie sweetsanyo-rashmi pagal tho nhi ho gayi...ki faaltoo ka party kar rahi h</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">di chinta mat karo, mera mental balance ekdum proper h...</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">mere pass reason h party ke liye...</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">do u noe,,,😲,,,,of course u noe, u r the writer, but still......do u noe...😳.. veer is really in love with her, yes he cares for her, our chandini...☺️...</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">but beechara bar bar terms his loves as lust...he is naive in case of true love,...otherwise he is hw much mature we all noe!...</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">nadaan bacha!!......</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">kala tikka lagao mere naye naye, newly born lover ko...</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">kitna sweet romance karta h...😳...</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">so here goes the kala tikka. </font><font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="7"> .</font><font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">dikha????????</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">ud ws mindblowing...</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">dekha dekha, chandini meri company main rahkar bigad gayi, i spoilt her habits......so communicable i m ......</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">she is sleeping for long hrs...</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">i m so happy for her new change...</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">kaka is damn good,.....he gives veer n chand privacy...</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">i like it, love it actually.😳</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">''will u chop them, who made me cry''...</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">''yes of course!''...</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">''then have these!''</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">''onions!''🤣</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">loved this scene,...</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">oops veer ki finger cut gayi,voh tho hana hi tha, aakhir dhyan khin rakho ge tho yahi hoga!😆 ...butointmentbhi tho kitna romantic n sweet mila h...😉</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">she immediately sucked his finger tip.😳</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">the way u wrote the last scene, man that surely makes it the scene of the ud.</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">just perfect...</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">di kya kar diya aapne, aisa scene likh kar jaan hi le li.</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">dialogues, u r master in dis di...</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">sooperbo jii, hats off.</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">lovely language used.</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">only their hearts talked,...☺️...dhak dhak dhak...</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">me in dreamy land, not in a mood to write more n disturb ma veer-chandini romance imagination...😍...</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">here by stop ma comment...</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">still hav ma punch line...😳</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">di u r amazing.🤗</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">love u...</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">ud soon.</font>



Edited by Freethinker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mddmayuri

lovely ud dear..😊

sorry for nt commenting before...

exams chal rahe hai na...🤢

.continue soon

luv u...

thanks my dear...really appreciate...will update next week

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