SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148

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Nandini

@Nandini25

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Awesome update

so Veer is attracted towards Chandni who's not bothered at all by him

That should be it

I hope his lust changes into love soon n b4 he takes ne wrong steps

update soon

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

great part

at least veer is controlling himself

trying to give a good impression to chandni

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Mayuri Dev

@mddmayuri

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

lovely ud dear...

veer is trying to b nice with her...

i wonder how she'll fall for himm...

waiting for the nxt ...

ud soon...

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smilee

@smilee17

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

loved the ud!!!!
waiting for the next part...!!!

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Divya

@divinedivy

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

hey amazing ff with great character sketches & intriguing background.. enjoyed reading it completely.. i didnt realise kab 1 saath i read all the 6 chapters in one go..

brilliant ff.. looking forward to reading more of it frequently & often.. take care

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

oh! i thought its shruja di...

no probs,
yes akki has surely done a gr88 job,

its awesome, sooperb.

mindblasting...loved it so much.

what a perfect banner just loved it😊😊😊😊

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

beautiful update n description!!
so veer droolling over chandani
n she is least bother abt him
he realised tht she is not other kind of girls n very professional n ambitious
so veer drank tea 1st time in his life coz chandani made for him
while chand have no such bonding only for client sake she made
hope he change himself coz of her
waiting for next update

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

awesome update...👏

so finally they met...n veer is not able to take off his eyes from her...yeh toh sabko pata tha...akhir wo hai hi aisi...

but veer is interested in her...n looking at her with eyes full of...😲...how can he...😡

but thank god he didn't misbehave with her...n controlled himself n get to know that she is not like other girls with whom he met...he has to work hard for her...

but i liked one thing that couz of her...he agreed to work for the tea stall...

hope... just like this he will change slowly for chand...😊

n he drink tea for the first time...n coughed...ha...sara din alcohal hi piyoge to yahi hoga na...but now it's time for change...kiu chand...😉

but story is really different...i just hope that what i m thinking...about the story will not get true...poor chand...my imaginations are getting wilder...😆

(n yes about the song...well i have thought for part 4...where veer father got dead...that was perfect for the situation but while typing i forgot to paste that song...n right now their is not any situation for the song...)

but i liked the new banner of ur story...totally perfect...amazing one...👏

update soon...

luv u...😊

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

😳

Originally posted by: Freethinker
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i dont want chand to see him all ''TULLY''...🤪... 😆

SINCE U MAY BE UNAWARE FOR DIS TERM, SO LEMME TELL U tully means completely drunk...😎...totally done with alcohol... Tully...well i have heard of the song...hum ho gaye tun.

oye hoye, meri di ki hindi ke kya kahane...👏...

chagayi di aap...tunnn...🤗...

aakhir kaar aapne mere ffs padhkar aapni hindi sudhar hi li...😳

i noe, well i give credits to myself for all good reasons...😆...

good di, ur hindi is really on rock👍🏼