mjht revisited 4(part 34-page 80) - Page 35

awww sooo beautifulll update

nice update ..

its not becoming repetitive...stop always doubting if what you wrote is good...well i guess in a way that makes a writer good because you try to better yourself each time...but have some confidence in your writing though!...nice update...sanu's scenes are always nice...they may not be the brains of the gang like majan but their conversations are always great...they both become so mature for each other and i love that...keep updating this quickly 😃

wow. loved sanu convo. beautiful

love the update on part 60 ,61,64and 69

I loved Samrat here... Poor fellow he is so desperate to feel the kick... Hope he gets to feel it soon 😳
Nice update...

lovely updt
loved sanu
thanks for the pm

PART 31
MN room night

Mayank at his laptop and nupur in disturbed sleep. She tried to turn but woke up. Catching sight of mayank at his laptop, she made a oh no not again face and sat up.

"mayank" he turned to her ," tum abhi tak soye nahin? Kya karthe rehthe ho mayank? Kuch tho aaram do us laptp ko. Dekho kya haalat hogayi hain uski. Bechara "

he smiled , closed it and walked to her " tum kyun uth gayi? "

"kitne baar bolna padega ki mujhe is kamre mein neend nahin aatha? Waise maine kuch sapna dekha aur aankh khulgayi."

"agar neend nahin aathi tho sapna kahaan se aathe hain?"

she opened her mouth and closed it again," mujhe wo sab nahin pata. Tum poochoge nahin ki mera sapna kya tha?" he looked questioningly

"hum sab morena gaye the , main tum gunjan samrat ,uday bhaiyya dia benji sab aur hamare bachhe bhi. Kitna masti kar rahe the hum sab milkar. Phir ek problem hogayi"

"kya?"

" wo kapde jo dia aur gunjan ne diye unke wajah se, wo tho ek hi set tha aur hamare bachhe do. Tho kisiko pata nahin chalrahaan tha ki kya karna hain"

mayank gave her an unbelievable look," yeh problem tha? Kuch aur kapde pack nahin kiya tha tumne?"

"pack- main...kya matlab hain? Tum bhi tho kuch aur kapde rakhsakthe the na?"

" arre main kyun...? bachhon ka packing tho tumne ki hogi na tho galthi tumhaari hui."

"waah mayank, tum bilkul sapne mein bhi aise hi mujhpe chilaarahe the. Lekin ghar mein koi aur kapde hi nahin the mayank."

"kya paagalpan hain nupur! Chodo sapna tha" he was irritated

"sapna tha phir bhi..."

"But I hope ki tum logon ne mere bachhe ko bina kapdon ke nahin chodiya "he sarcastically cut her short.

"chodo mayank sapna tha! Kapde pehne the ya nahin kya farak padtha hain" she repeated in his tone. He glared at her .

She sighed and said,"mayank tumne hi kahaan tha ki sapne hamare ander ka darr hain tho ..."

"haan," mayanks sarcasm returned with full force," tumhaara darr yeh hain ki hum apne bachhon ko kapde lene ke bhi responsibility nahin lesakthe" and he got up," for your information, Mrs Sharma main apne bachon ko clothes de saktha hoon. Ab yeh unnecessary baatein sochna bandh karo aur so jao. Sapne mat dekhna phir se" and walked to the bathroom in irritation

nupurs eyes filled up,"sapne mat dekho matlab. Sapne kya poochke aathe hain-hello, main ander aasaktha hoon? Maine aisa kab kahaan isse ki ..." and bent down towards her tummy as someone from inside kicked," abh tum log kya kehrahe ho? Disturb hua? " sighed and stroked her tummy softly ,"kya karoon tumhaare papa ka?naak pe gussa bas. Main tho yeh soch rahin thi ki dia ne matlab tumhaare mausi ne ek set hi diya hain tho ek aur set matching waala lena padega. Tum bolo, kya maine kabhi yeh kahaan ki tumhaare papa kapde nahin leke denge tumhe? " sigh, " Par tum log so jao, pareshaan mat hona. Mujhe unko seeda karna aatha hain " and hummed softly some tune that she remembered stroking her tummy.

Mayank who had heard her one sided conversation with the children felt a smile appear on his face.

He moved to her slowly and bending from behind her kissed her on the cheek. She turned with her smile still on her face but tried to wipe it off as soon as she faced mayank.

"waah nupur itne din baad mujhe pata chala ki tum gaathi bhi ho" he whispered into her ear making her change colour but she didnt reply ," aur achhe se"

"chodo, koi zaroorat nahin hain pyaar dikhaane ki"she replied in mock irritation as he kissed her again

"tho kaise seeda karne ke plan hain ? Inke papa ko?" he asked placing his hand on hers which was on the tummy, his voice naughty.

She didnt reply , he kissed her once more and then bent to kiss her tummy. He placed his ears to the bump and nupur found her irritation melting. Then he got up, kissed her tummy again and patting it moved to sleep on his side without saying anything

"arre wo kya tha? " he turned to her looking completely innocent," tum kya sunrahe the?" he shrugged ," bolo na" she shook him. He stared at her making her get more angry, "dekho mayank, yeh galat baat hain. Sab kehthe hain ki bachhe hone ke baad pati ko patni mein koi interest nahin hota aur agar tum bhi aise hi... Mayank..."

mayank grinned and holding both her hands in his all four placed on the tummy said," tumhaare kids ne kahaan ki tum bohot upset hoti ho agar main tumpe chillatha hoon aur kahaan ki mujhe tumse maafi maangni chahiye"

nupur smiled back at him and adjusted with his help to sleep on his lap.

"mayank , kabhi sochne se darr lagtha hain. Jab wo bahar aayenge tho unka saare zimmedaari hamari hogi. Unka dhoodh se paani tak, diaper se potty tak sab kuch mujhe dekhna padega! Aur wo bhi do do ki " her voice fascinated but apprehensive at the thought

"wo sab tho kuch hi time tak" he replied thoughtfully

"aur wo itna chota sa honge tho kaise pakdoongi?"

"saari zindagi tho aisa nahin rahenge. Yeh socho ki jab wo school jaane lagenge tab ...baad mein socho unki padhai khel games sab kuch. Kitna kuch karna hoga"

both were quiet for a while each thinking about the unborn. Nupur looked up at him and catching his serious look asked, "mayank, kya tum pareshaan ho ki do kids ko sambhal nahin paayenge?"

Mayank stroked her hair," nahin " he said unconvincingly , " but tum in sab ke baare mein zyaada pareshaan mat ho. Main hoon na" he smiled

nupur was quiet for a second and then spoke up," tho isiliye tum phir se doosra kaam karrahe ho?"

they didnt look at each others face. Mayanks hand stroking her head stopped and he didnt answer immediately.

"mayank kya main itni buri hoon ki tum mujhse jhoot bolkar..."

"nahin nupur , main tumhe saare problems se door rakhna chahtha tha bas. Jab tum hospital admit hui tab laga ki tumhe stress diye bagair agar main kuch extra karsaktha hoon tho mujhe karna chahiye...aur abh tho collega mein kuch zyaada kaam nahin hain"

she didnt reply,he continued ," in fact main tho soch rahaan tha...ki kuch din baad main job shift kardoonga par abhi tumhe tension nahin dena chahtha hoon"

"par tum tho yahaan khush ho" she turned to face him, her head still on his lap

" khush tho hum kahin bhi rehsakthe hain "

"kya baat hain mayank? Kya kuch aisa hain jo ..mayank kya problem hain tumhe money ki? " she asked frustrated

"aaj ke liye kuch problem nahin hain nupur but kal alag baat hoga. Responsibility zyaada hogi tho zarooratein bhi zyaada honge.. Har ek paise ka hisaaf nahin rakhna hain mujhe. Atleast mere bachhon keliye tho bilkul bhi nahin" he said in a decided voice

she stared at him, heard samrats voice in her head say- jab tak wo settled feel nahin karega wo kuch na kuch kartha rahega- but as she stared she also realised that he was now talking about the children and not about what should be done if something happens to him – the way he used to go on in the beginning of pregnancy,'yeh apne aanewaale jeevan ke liye soch rahaan hain , apne beetein hue jeevan ke wajah se nahin. Apne bachon ke liye naaki uski bauji keliye. Teek hi hoga. '

"kya?" he asked her . She shook her head and lifted her hand to stroke his cheeks

"tum gussa ho?" she shook her head again

"bas mujhe bura laga ki tumne mujhse chupaya but teek hain. Ek condition se tumhe permission milegi..." he smiled slightly," ki tum apne khaane peene sone ka time kharaab nahin karoge"

he smiled fully and bent to kiss her," thanks nupur. Tumne mujhe peene ka bhi permission dediya"

she took a minute to understand and then hit his hands," mera wo matlab nahin tha. Lekin mayank..."

"promise main khayal rakhoonga apna aur tumhaara bhi" and kissed her again

"khayal rakhne se yaad aaya. Mayank mere saare kapde change karne hain. Koi bhi fit nahin hota. Main kya saari pehenoongi? Wo bluewaala pehenloon?"

"haan" he said without hesitation

"haan" she imitated him," jaise ki tumhe yaad hain ki main kis saari ki baat karrahin hoon" he grinned at her

"koi farak nahin padtha, tum jo bhi pehenogi perfect dikhogi" she smiled," aur wasie bhi tum gunjan ke saath kal subah yahin discuss karnewaali ho tho abhi so jao"

she tried to get up and held her back as she did. He helped her sit up, bent to get the pain gel from the side table and making her lie down comfortably, massaged her back gently.

nupur went back to sleep as her aching back relaxed and mayank slept next to her.

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hi! hope it was ok. thanks for replies and likes

just as i expected, a very sweet update 😃...loved it!...especially the way he shows his love for her and the babies 😃