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Posted: 13 years ago
That was such a sweet update... Loved it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update.That was such a sweet update.Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
read the both the parts awsm update sweet and funny thanx fr PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
very very nice update..
liked their convo about their children..
i think they should show this ting in the serial...
well... amazing update...
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such a sweet update. loved it. loved mayur convo
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😊 loved it very nice update 👍🏼👏
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cute updt
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice .I loved their conversation about dream.Bt blue sari, I think I m forgetting something.
Thnx for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 32

MN house

dia , gunjan and nupur are packing the baby bag.

"nupur tum yeh dono kapde kyun bag mein dalrahin ho? Ek .."


"nahin, dono bhi rakho"

"bag mein space nahin hoga. Aur sab mix hojaayega"

"dia rehne do na" gunjan interrupted sensing that nupur was getting upset," di ab chalo tumhaara aur baby ka bag ready hain" looked into the bag once more and then up," aur tumhaare function ka bhi saare arrangements hogaye hain"

dia smiled broadly keeping the bags seperately," wow ek mahina bhi nahin bacha abh tho"

"chaar hafthe hain bas" nupur replied sitting in a leaning positon on the bed," aur mujhse tho intezaar hi nahin hota"

"bas di hogaya. Chaar din ke baad function hain , uske baad do teen din tak tum rest lelena aur aunty bhi aagayi hogi na tab tak"

"haan" she sighed and changed her position," wo bhi aayenge tho time pass hojaayega. Warna tum sab busy ho"

dia and gunjan exchanged glances, she had been complaining that they werent spending time with her . They were glad shilpa aunty would come and stay with her continuously

"waise nupur tumhaara classes kaisa tha?"

"wo," nupur got up enthusiastically," achha tha , mujhe kuch samaj mein nahin aarahaan tha. Aur mayank questions pooch pooch ke instructor ko gussa diladiya. Aur second class mein , mujhe neend aagaya ..." and she went on entertaining them with her stories about the class

evening

" UDAY BHAIYYA..." she screamed suddenly making both her sisters jump

uday came running inside," nupur tum aisi chillogi tho mera heartattack hojaayega. Kya hain?"

"shubh shubh boliye uday bhaiyya. Bachon ke saamne aisi baatein nahin karthe. Mera sandwich aap kyun khaarahe ho? "

"yeh tumhaara nahin hain.mera hain tumhaara abhi banrahaan hain par mujhe yeh samj nahin aatha ki tum hamesha babies kyun kehthe ho- tumhaare 100 babies tho nahin haina .."

"uday bhaiyya aap kitna bolthe ho," nupur cut him short," mera sandwich please.." and sent him off

samrat and mayank entered . While samrat moved straight to nupur and placed his hand on her stomach, all the girls exchanged glances and grinned.

" bad luck samrat " mayank teased him.Sam sat next between nupur and gunjan ready to feel the kick if it came.

Uday who came in with the sandwich handed it to nupur and turning to samrat," aaj tumhaara chance zyaada hain samrat baby ko feel karne ka kyunki subah se jab bhi nupur scream karrahin hain tab kicking session zor se chal rahaan hain. Mujhe tho laga ki ander do nahin chaar chaar legs se kick karrahaan hain" nupur and mayank grinned at each other about the four legs

samrat looked at uday jealously and told nupur," ab scream karo na"

"kiske upar?"

"kisi ke bhi"

"kis liye? koi tho reason hona chahiye na"

"wo hum sab ko chahiye tumhaare liye mayank ko ya...amba par scream karna ke liye kya reason chahiye?"

munching the sandwich," amba ! Mayank aaj tho uska biryaani itne achha banaa hain ki main bhi uspar chilla nahin sakthi. Aur usne mujhe aaj yeh diya, dekho," she showed them a ugly looking daaga tied around her wrist with a small counch at the end," usne kahaan ki isse caesarian nahin hoga.usne pooja karwaake ..." mayank and gunjan exchanged glances while samrat smiled .uday finished his sandwich

dia looked at it extremely suspiciously and said," nupur yeh bilkul hygienic nahin dikhtha"

"dia mujhe isko khaana thodi na hain, ..."

"nupur," samrat cut her short suddenly," aaj pata hain mayank ne kya kiya college mein?" mayank looked surprised . Nupur looked from one to the other," mayank tumne isse bataya nahin? Very bad apni biwi se kuch chupa na nahin chahiye"

"kya hain samrat?"

"isne aaj ria ko extraa classes diya. Almost 2 hrs tak uske saath hi baita tha, mere cabin mein"

"nahin nupur..yeh samrat.."

gunjan hit her head smiling while samrat placed his hands on nupurs tummy

"achha , yeh kab hua ?" nupur asked sweetly

"morning ko" he replied still concentrating on the kick which didnt come. "tum mayank pe scream nahin karne waali ho?"all three girls burst out laughing .He looked at them surprised

"samrat," gunjan pulled his hand back and told him consolingly," aaj subah se ria rohan aur ash ke saath hamare ghar mein hi thi"

samrat looked dissapointed and joined in laughing with the others.

"kya yaar! main kab tak wait karoonga?"

"dont worry samrat abhi zyaada time nahin bacha hain unko baahar aane ke liye..."

"dekha phir se -unko meaning..."uday

"uday bhaiyaa bachhe bhagwaan ke roop hote hain, isiliye di aisi baatein kararhin hain. Haina di?" gunjan

nupur smiled artificially at her and exchanged glances with a smiling mayank.

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MN house outside

both waving bye , nupur leaning on mayank

"mayank kahin chalein?"

"is waqt?"

"haan kahin bhi.main bore horahin hoon "

"abhi tak tho teek thi aur tum thak nahin gayi ho , subah se itna kuch karthe karthe"

"Main thak tho gayi hoon wait karthe karthe...in dono ke liye" he smiled

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Beach

mayank and nupur sitting next to each other facing the water.

" nupur"

"umm"

"kya tumhe yaad hain hum yahaan pehli baar kab aaye the?"

"main wo bhool sakthi hoon?kitna peaceful haina yahaan"

"wo isliye ki nupur bhushan quiet hain"

"nupur bhushan sharma" he smiled

"kya soch rahin ho?" no answer " nupur chalein?"

"itni jaldi? Nahin"

"tum tired hojaaogi"

"nahin mayank, main teek hoon" and placed her head on his shoulder, her legs stretched ," next time jab hum yahaan aayenge tab hum dono akele nahin aayenge na" she felt him smile,"mujhse intezaar hi nahin hota mayank"

"less than a month baaki hain nupur" he said consolingly

"pata nahin mayank, pichle 8 months tak yeh feeling nahin aayi thi lekin aaj kal ek ek din bhi kaatna impossible hota jaarahaan hain. Pata nahin ki din mein 24 hrs hain ya 48 hrs. " he smiled,"aap logon ka achha hain koi mushkil ke bina hi papa bansakthe ho"

he laughed," of course not, tumhara mushkil dekhna hi mereliye sabse bada mushkil kaam hain" she smiled," aur waise bhi agar maine kuch kiye nahin hota tab tum aise nahin hoti" grinning mischivously

"jaise ki wo bada mushkil kaam hain !" both laughed.they were quiet for a second savouring the moment

"mayank" "nupur"

"bolo"

"tumhe kya lagtha hain ki yeh dono bade hoke kya banenge?"

"baahar tho aane do"

'phir bhi" she linked her arm in his," mujhe na atleast ek ko hero banana hain"

"kya?" amused," koi zaroorat nahin hain. Actors padhai bilkul nahin karthe aur main yeh kabhi nahin tolerate karoonga ki mere bachhe useless rahein"

"mere bachhe ka kya matlab? Mera bhi hain aur mujhe apne bete ko tumhaari tarah sadu padaaku nahin banana hain"

"mera bachha hain tho mere type hi rahega ya rahegi "he said confidently

"ek tumhaare type hoga tho doosra mere type hoga "she said stubbornly

both went quiet for a while in irritation and imagining their kids in the respective avatrs(like in the serial) and laughed suddenly together

"sach mein mayank," nupur held her sides as she stopped laughing," do aur mayank sharma ko main handle nahin karsakthi"

" do aur nupur ko duniya handle nahin karpaayegi"

"ladke honewaale hain mayank main bata rahin hoon" there was a kick ," dekha, yeh bhi agree karthe hain" her eyes alight with the life inside her, inspite of the discomfort of a huge tummy

"nupur i love you" he said suddenly

her eyes brightened if possible more,"inse kam ya inse zyaada?"

"aaj ke liye tho inse zyaada" he said apologetically placing his hands on her tummy

"koi baat nahin maine kahin padaa tha ki agar tum bacchon ki maa ko pyaar karthe ho tho bachhe khush hojaathe hain"

"achha .tum padthi bhi ho?' she hit him playfully and held the hand on her tummy in hers tightly

"waise mayank, i love you too" and sensing his smile and the question which wouldnt come up," aaj ke liye inse zyaada" he returned the pressure of her fingers in his

smiling she placed her head back on his shoulder and closed her eyes. People who noticed them smiled to see the obviously pregnant wife with the obviously loving husband and smiled.

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hello - thanks for the likes and replies. the next part would probably be the last- as nupur cant wait (also that i dont have time)😊

@mayurlove- no u didnt forget anything- ther was no blue saree mentioned anywhre before.


Edited by np18 - 13 years ago

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