mjht revisited 4(part 34-page 80) - Page 34

Nice update... You have beautifully expressed the feelings of the parents who are waiting for the child to come out into this world... Very nice...
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PART 29

Kitchen

Nupur making something, mobile rang, she picked it up

"hello! Kaun? Rohan...kaise ho? KYA??? Tumhe kab...aur ash? ...chalo bhagwaan ka shukar hain...thanks...haan main teek hhi hoon, waise tum dono ghar kab aanewaale ho?...ok...bye...rohan suno...tumhaari behen ...(bad face) achha? okay! Bye"

She turned and bumped into mayank who had a bright smile on his face

"mayank! Main paas hogayi" and hugged him," bhagwaan ka shukar hain! warna phir se agar mujhe exam likhna padtha tho..."

"congrats nupur" and kissed her on the forehead

"tumhe pata tha?"

"abhi abhi college mein office se pata chala." And looked at her proudly he knew it wasn't much but he also knew she had struggled through it," tumhe kya gift chahiye nupur?"

"gift! Mayank wo jo tumne mujhe diya tha us din ...wo maternity gown ke saath ..usko maine dekha hi nahin. Whan room pe padaa hain. Please leke aaona" she suddenly remembered

"shaam ko . Abhi mujhe jaana hain. Tum sambhal ke rehna' and placing a quick kiss on her cheeks went off before she could react

she frowned, kaam aur kaam bas. Waise abhi th college ko chutti hain tho yeh jaatha kahaan hain? Isne kuch aur shuru tho nahin kardiya...?! chodo nupur, agar kiya hoga tho tumhe batayega. Par abh main kya karoon? Mujhe wo dekhna hain. And looked at the stairs.

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Living room

"nupur.." mayank came in, calling out to her worried that she wasnt anywhere to be seen ,"NUPUR"

"main yahaan hoon" her voice came from somewhere. He looked around ,"kahaan?"

"upar"

"kya upar kya..." and ran up the stairs to find nupur sitting on the top of the steps, her legs stretched out in front of her and looking scared. She held her arms out to him the moment he came up. He took her hands in his and hugged her unable to grasp what had happened.

"mayank mujhe maaf kardo .please sorry. pata nahin ki main tumhaari baat kyun nahin maanthi" she blabbered into his chest

"kya hua nupur? Tum yahaan kya karrahin ho? Aur main tumhe maaf kisliye karoon?"

"tum mujhe nahin daantoge na please.."

"nahin promise ," before she could ask him for it," tum teek ho na? Bolo kya hua? Dard hua phir se?"

she shook her head," wo maine...jo gift box tha tumhaara wo lene aayi thi upar" mayanks face showed traces of irritation that she had climbed up when he told her not to. She caaught it and continued hurriedly," sorry mayank. Par main dheere se hi chadke aayi thi. Aada ganta laga mujhe kamre tak jaane mein"

"its okay iskeliye tum itni scared kyun lagrahin ho?"

"upar chadne keliye nahin mayank, mujhe neeche jaane ke liye ghabraahat hua. Yahaan tumhara chain dekhne ke baad jab khaane ke liye neeche aana tha tab. Aur phir mera mobile neeche tha aur main kisiko call bhi nahin karsakthi thi. Yahaan akeli hi baithgayi"

mayank looked confused," neeche utarne mein kya problem hain nupur? Upar chadne ke liye thoda tiredness lagsaktha hain"

"mujhe laga ki agar main gir gayi tho...neeche utarne waqt..jaise renuka gir gayi thi...aur ghar mein tho koi tha bhi nahin."

"renuka kaun?"

"renuka shahane..hum aapke hain kaun mein" she reminded him. He didnt know whether to smile or laugh or get angry with her," tum gussa ho ki main tumhaare mana karne ke baad bhi stairs par ...?" she asked again

"nahin," he shook his head," chalo abh. Tumhe hungry nahin ho kya? Atleast 3 hrs hogaye honge tumhe yahaan baithke" and got up . She was sitting down still. He sat back next to her and asked,"bohot darr laga kya?" she nodded , her eyes moist," mujhe laga ki main gir jaaongi aur dono ko ..."

he put his arm arund her shoulder and pulled her , she placed her head on his shoulder," itna daro mat nupur. Tumne hi tho mujhe samjhaaya ki kuch galat nahin hoga aur hum yahin sochenge ki jo hoga achha hoga. jab main upset tha tab"

"haan par dimaakh meinaajkal kuch na kuch ajeeb sa khayal aathe rehthe hain. Jaise ki aaj, jab tak tum aaye nahi tab tak mujhe darr lagrahaan tha ki main yahaan se gir jaaonngi aur himmat nahin horahin thi neeche dekhne ki. Aur jab tum aagaye tab sab kuch itna..."

"silly lagrahaan hain?" mayank asked with a smile. She nodded

"mayank tum ghar mein nahin rehsakthe? main akeli nahin rehsakthi, amba subah chali jaathi hain. Gunjan aur samrat unke naye kaam mein busy hain...aur tum...tum kahaan jaathe ho? College mein tho chutti hain.."

"kaam hota hain nupur" he said shortly but a little guiltily," aur tum akeli kahaan ho? Tumhaare saath tho " placing one hand on her tummy," yeh dono hain" smiling

she also smiled.

"waise in dono ka kya kehna hain aaj?"

"yehi ki unke papa duniya ke sabse achhe hain" and pulled his cheeks," waise mayank tumne inke naam ke baare mein kuch kahaan nahin" there was kick at the time and both stopped talking and grinned at each other.

"name? Sochenge. Ab chalo neeche aur kuch khaa lo" and helped her get up from her place slowly. She looked down the stairs and held his arm tightly and began climbing down.

"mayank..." she stopped in the middle and looked up frustarated ," main chain wahin bhool gayi"

"main lekar aata hoon. Relax nupur."

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Living room evening

Nupur on the sofa , legs stretched and eyes closed. Dozing .

"nupur yeh kya hain?" mayank walked in with a paper

"kya?" and got up with a start.He held it out to her , she saw that, grinned , yawned and pulled him to sit next to her.

"yeh? Tumne hi kahaan ki tumhe rahul aur prem naam pasand nahin hain tho main list likh rahin thi. Names ki"

He snatched it back and said," yeh? Jai /Veeru? Karan/arjun? Ram/lakhan? Jai/Vijay? Aur yeh kya hain? " pointing to one pair

"yeh ? ra 1.."

"main apne bte ka naam Raavan nahin.."

"offo mayank! Raavan nahin Ra-One aur J-e-e-v-a-n" she spelt it out to him happily

"nupur tum mujse pyaar karthi ho?"

"haan mayank yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hain? main tho tumse ..." and looked at him with all the love in her eyes

"okay samajgaya. Phir mereliye kuch karoge?"

"kuch bhi. Tum bolo aur main tumhaari baat na maanoo aisa kabhi hua hain?"

"bohot baar hua hain. Jaise ki aaj subah but ab tum bachon ka names ke baare mein sochna band karo please." nupurs face changed

"tho main kya karoon? Mujhe raat ko neend nahin aarahin thi tho sochne lagi aur list banaya. Jab maine kahaan ki main is room mein nahin sosakthi tab tumne meri baat nahin maani" she sulked

He ignored her not knowing what to do about her numerous nautanki s and walked away taking the paper with him, leaving her irritated.

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hi thanks alot for replies and likes.hope this was okay.

@mayuloveu sorry for missing out the pm last time
@ vinan2050-its often seen that in last two months of pregnancy. women generally are weird , so my attempt...😊

Nupur is so funny... Poor children.. Hope they'll get nice names.. 😆

very cute update!...must be so hard for mayank to be upset at her cute antics haha...btw can we get more regular updates?...im not used to you being so late in posting them

nice one
thanks for the pm

Very beautiful update.it was damn cute.by GOD,nups such a sweet heart.n mayank is a good hubby

so so nice I loved it. mindblowing

cute part 😊👍🏼 loved it.

PART 30

MN house – living room

nupur on the sofa sleeping. Samrat entry from outside. He looked around, no one seen, walked slowly without making any noise near nupur and sat down on the floor near her , his head very close to her tummy. He tried listening , made a face like he couldnt hear anything. Moved closer and placed a hand on nupurs tummy and smiled, looked up at her sleeping face to see if she was disturbed. She wasnt. He sat for sometime alternating his ear and hand on her tummy hoping to hear something or feel the kick.

Gunjan came in from kitchen and saw him sitting next to nupur

"samrat! Tum yahaan kya karrahe ho? Uto wahaan se. Di so rahin hain. Usse disturb mat karo"

samrat placed his fingers on his lips and whispered loudly," shhh. Chup . Chashmish disturb tum kar rahin ho. Main tho quietly baby ki kick dekhne ke liye baita hoon. Aur tum zor zor se bol rahin h. Nupur so rahin hain. Shh"

"samrat" gunjan began and samrat gave her a look making her move nearer to him whispering," di sorahin hain tho baby bhi so rahaan hoga."

"tumhe kaise pata? Tum tho kabhi pregnant nahin bani ho na?"

"samrat! " she hit him," mujhe pata hain. Di ne bataya"

"main kuch nahin jaantha . Main yahin baithnewaala hoon jab tak ek kick nahin dekh leta tab tak" he said stubbornly

before gunjan could reply, mayank had come in. Looking surprised at the scen in front of him , " kya karrahe ho tum dono?"

"shhh" "shhh"

"mayank " samrat whispered loudly and irritatedly," tumhe apni wife ki fikar hain ki nahin? Wo so rahin hain aur tum loudly baat kararhe ho. Shhh"

mayank came nearer and mimed (sarcastic) – what are you both doing here?

"kya jiju?" whisper

"main baby ka kick ka wait karrahaan tha" whisper and placed his hand on nupurs tummy again.

Mayank moved forwards quickly inbetween and pushed samrats hand away . Samrat got up irritatedly and said forgetting to whisper," mayank sharma, tum aise rudely behave .."

"main rude nahin hoon, tum paagal ho"

"shh jiju, samrat"

"paagal aur main! Aur yeh tum jo ek certified paagal ho tum kehrahe ho"

"main certified paagal ! Kisne certify kiya hain?"

"jo nupur bhushan se shaadi karsaktha hain o tho paagal hi hosaktha hain!"

"samrat" gunjan

"KYA?" Nupur

samrta turned to see nupur awake and listening to them.

Gunjan hit him and said," main keh rahin thi na. Dekho di ko utadiya. Tum dono! Hato, di tum sojao"

"yeh samrat kya keh rahaan tha?"

mayank grinned at him happy that he had got caught. Samrat looked from one to the other and replied," nupur tum pregnant ho yeh tumne pehle kisko bataya?"

"tumhe. Par uska kya relation..."

"tumh emayank ko batane ke liye himmat kisne di?"

"tumne par usse..."

"tumhaare favurite sister ko kaun khush rakhsaktha hain?"

"tum par iska matlab yeh nahin ki tum mere pati ko paagal kaho" nupur got up and completed her sentence annoyed

"maine tho yeh kahaan ki tumhaara husband tumhare liye paagal hain. yeh bhi galat hain kya?"

mayank," nahin nupur yeh..

"haan wo tho hain" nupur smiled fondly at mayank making mayank go quiet and samrat smile at him in revenge. Nupur got up from the sofa holding mayank for support and said," dinner karein?"

" nupur ek minute" samrat placed his hand again on her tummy, she pushed it off saying," samrat !" and walked off to the kitchen . Gunjan after hitting samrat on the shoulder with a annoyed look followed her

"saari duniya ne feel kiya baby ka kick. Mere elawa" samrat cribbed to mayank

mayank laughed and put his hand on samrats shoulder," itna hi interest hain baby ka kick mein tho gunjan se baat karo"

" no no no. I don think ki abhi hamara time hain. Waise pata kaise chaltha hain ki kya time sahi hain"

mayank didnt answer instead went and sat on the sofa.

"bolo" samrat sat next to him,"tum bhi ready nahin the na bachhe ke liye"

mayank smiled in agreement

"tho phir ab tum itne comfortable kaise hogaye?"

"jab pehle baar scan mein dekha tab ehsaas hua ki kuch life hain nupur ke ander. Jab pehle baar kick feel hua tab ehsaas hua ki yeh life mera bhi hain. Aur bas ...adjust hogaya" he smiled his eyes reflecting his happiness," aur ab sirf inkeliye jo bhi main karsaktha hoon wo karna hain" his face decided. Samrat smiled back at him.

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Living room

Nupur on the sofa, legs up on the table flipping channels. Samrat on the single sofa ,legs on the armrest with laptop on his lap playing something. Mayanks mobile rang

"samrat! Phone"

"mera nahin hain"

"utao na, mayank ka hain"

"main kyun utao. Tumne mujhe kick feel karne nahin diya"

"main kya karoon? Jab bhi tum hote ho, yeh kick hi nahin karthe"

"tumne hi sikhaaya hoga unko ki jab samrat uncle ..."

"samrat phone..." she interrupted him and bent to pick the phone. He moved faster and lifted it up just as it stopped ringing.

Both exchanged glances – nupur irritated and samrat apologetic- " kisi michelle ka hain"

message beep- samrat read it out loud ' recieved your report. Good one. Next one next week. All the best '

"kya?" nupur took it from him and read it for herself. Something clicked. She took the laptop from samrat ignoring his questioning look and started checking everything her expressions undergoing changes.

"nupur kya hua?...nupur?"

"hum kisiko bhi nahin jaanthe na. Kisi par bhi bharosa nahin karsakthe"

"kya hua? Tum suddenly itni upset kyun ho? Mayank ka affair chal rahaan hain kya? " he joked

"samrat ! Usne mujhse promise kiya tha ki wo ek aur kaam nahin karnewaala hain. Ki wo zyaada time gharke liye dega. Ab dekho.."

"tumhe kaise pata? "

"uski mailbox dekho"

"aise kisiki mailbox check nahin karthe"

"samrat, tum mujhe gusssa mat dilao. Waise bhi mera sar.."

"cmon nupur, karne do usse. Kya farak padtha hain ?"

"kya karne do samrat? Neend kharaab karke itna bhi kaam karne ki zaroorat hain?"

"nupur , mayank karsaktha hain. Wo hamara jaisa nahin hain, wo teen chaar jobs simultaneously complete karsaktha hain. Aur wo tho tumhaare liye hi karrahaan haina"

"mere liye wo ghar mein mere saath time spend kare wahin kaafi hain"

"par uske liye nahin"

"kya matlab" she said up in a second

"mera matlab ..wo tumhaare liye, apne baby ke liye sab kuch ready rakhna chahtha hain

wo prepared rehna chahtha hain. sab kuch dena chahtha hain apne family ke liye.sirf saath nahin rehna chahtha ." he stopped

"samrat, yeh sab tum mujhe bata rahe ho? Kya main nahin jaanthi? " she sighed ," uski family ke liye usse zyaada important aur kuch nahin..." and looked at the phone," aur mujhse chupaaya bhi"

"nupur " his voice placating," agar wo tumhe batata tho tum khush hoti? Aur waise bhi abhi tho college ka koi kaam hi nahin hain. Jab tak wo apne hisaaf se settled nahin feel kartha tab tak wo kuch na kuch kartha rahega. Usko karne do nupur.uska right hain yeh sab.wo yeh sab se happy rahega. Yeh sab uska pyaar dikhaane ka tareeka hain"

mayank walked in with gunjan.

"mera phone kahin rehgaya hain" he said looking around

nupur looked at him and held out the phone. He took it from her hand while samrat gave her understanding look.

"tumhaare liye phone aaya tha. Michelle ka. Aur ek message bhi" she said

mayank looked at the message and then at nupur wondering if she read it.

" di hum chalthe hain. Kal tumhaare function ke baare mein decide karenge" and after samrat tried once more to feel the kick , they left with samrat grumbling.

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hi thans for the replies and likes. im really trying to write faster but 😊 hope thsi was ok
btw, if anyone has time can you let me know if its becomming repetitive? thanks in advance